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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 17)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by butterfly.tanu

Originally posted by piya-

Originally posted by butterfly.tanu

awesome update...
geet loves yash...
no thats not possible...
plz dont do this...
 
Yes u r right GEET KA NAAM SIRF MAAN KE SAATH ACCHHA LAGTA HAI. Tongue MAAN KI GEET SIRF MAAN KITongue
Don't worry dear this is my OS and in my story maneet will always be togetherTongue
THANKS FOR COMMENTINGSmile
u r always welcome dear...
u r a great writer...
GEET SRIF MAAN KI HAI...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
MAAN KI GEET...
love u dear...
update soon...
 
Thanks for calling me a great writer Embarrassed But i would love u to remember me more as a friend rather than a good writer.Tongue love u Embarrassed

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 10:58am | IP Logged
this is an awesome os... jus read all d parts nw.. n am really enjoying it.. aww so geet has feelings 4 yash.. poor maan..
ur an awesome writer.. update d nxt part soon n can u plz pm me.. thanks :)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
lovely part...i so wished meera herself would have gone on the date...i just hope that geet has really not fallen for yash...thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
 
Banner: Shivangi (CIDManeetNaksh) and Sthuthi
 
Once again thanks a ton for your appreciation and support frnds. Here is the fifth part of my OS: Dil mil gaye

PART 5

Yash: (self talk) Perfect!!! Waise Maan sahi keh raha tha ke main is Black suit mein kuch zyaada hi handsome lagta hoon. Well I am indeed very lucky ke mujhe aise frnds mile hai jo ki mera itna khayal rakhte hai. Sirf Geet ke wajah se ye mauka mujhe mila hai warna kya pata kabhie kisi ladki ke saath Date pe jaane ka mauka milta bhi ya nahi. Aur humare Maan sahab ke tho kya kehne mere har problem ka solution unke paas maujood hai. O I just love u guys. Chal Yash abhi baato mein waqt zyaya mat kar, Radio Station pe roj late jaana chalta hai lekin apne life ke first date par late jaana bilkul bhi thik nahi. Wo kehte hai na ke First impression is the last impression. Aaj kuch bhi ho Meera ko tho apne charm se impress karna hi hai.

SAYING SO HE LEAVES.

MEERA'S HOUSE

Pari: Dekh Meera abhi bhi waqt hai soch le

Meera: Soch liya... aur main abhi kuch aur sunna nahi chahti maine jaisa kaha hai tu bilkul waisa hi kar Yaad rakh ke tu Yash ke saamne Meera hai Pari nahi. Ok

Pari: Tujhe samjaana mera farz tha ab aage teri marzi

SAYING SO PARI LEAVES

GRAND PARADISE RESTAURANT

Yash is desperately waiting for Meera. Pari reaches the venue. Yash immediately recognizes her.

Yash: If I am not mistaken u r Meera right?

Pari: Ha... O yes and u are RJ Yash . Glad to meet u Yash.

Yash: Same here

Both are silent. After few minutes Yash decides that he has to begin the conversation

Yash: So Meera  first let me thank you, tumne aaj mujhe ek bahut bade insult se bacchha liya.

Pari : (confused) Maine, maine kya kiya?

Yash: Are, tumne saare sawalo ka sahi sahi jawab de diya . Tumhe ek secret batau' main tho bahut nervous tha ke pata nahi koi ek sawal ka bhi jawab de paayega ya nahi. But u were just too good Meera just too good.

Pari:  O thanks.

Yash (thinking) Ye tho haan, na ,thanks ke alawa kuch bol hi nahi rahi.

Background mein romantic music chal raha tha' Yash gets an idea

Yash:  O  ye geet bhi na Date ke liye kaisa venue select kar liya? O THESE BORING ROMANTIC SONGS'

Pari: Nahi tho I love romantic songs

Yash: (thinking) subah tho keh rahi thi ke romantic songs usse bilkul bhi pasand nahi aur ab. (confused)

Pari: Kya hum kuch khane  ke liye order kar le?

Yash (coming out from his thoughts)  O sure why not?

Yash :  Sariska Chicken is the best dish of this restaurant. So what do you think Meera  the best dish for the best girl (smiles)

Pari: O  no Yash I hate this dish!!!  We will order something better I m sure even u would prefer something better.

Yash: (confused ) O yes u can order whatever u like ( thinking why is this girl behaving so strangely)

THE DINNER IS SERVED

Yash:  So tell me something about urself Meera, ur likes dislikes anything.

Pari: O my life is really very boring nothing worth sharing

Yash: (thinking) This girl doesn't seem interested , she appeared so  different in the morning.

Yash: Ok Meera tell me how could u answer all d questions so accurately?

Pari: Oh, I am a diehard fan of your's Yash. I never miss ur show

Yash: ( getting excited on hearing this) So tell me Meera which segment is your favourite from my show?

Pari: (thinking) I Don't even know the name of his show forget about naming the segment

Yash: Meera... Meera  are u ok?

Pari: Oh yes

Yash: So tell me

Pari: (thinking) Oh I love the traffic updates

Yash: (shocked) What!!!

Pari: Yes. U know they are very helpful  we can easily deviate from the traffic prone area and go from some other route. It prevents us from getting stuck in a traffic jam. Yes I really love ur traffic updates. Never stop this segment it is the best segment of your show. (thinking now don't ask me anything about the stupid show)

Yash: (thinking) Does she think I am a fool or something?

Yash: Ok Meera, tell me something about your friend circle? Who is your best friend?

Pari: Meera... (stops on realizing her mistake)

Yash: Sorry!!! I didn't get u

Pari: Oh I Mean main khud hi apni best friend hoon

Yash: Oh wow!!! So that means you don't have any other friend?

Pari: No I do have a friend named Pari. She is my dearest friend

Yash: O great so tell me something about your friendship

Pari: Yash I am really hungry should we eat first.

WITH THIS, YASH FINALLY GAVE UP

Yash: Yes why not.

Nothing interesting took place from now onwards at the date. For Yash the date was a complete thumbs down and Pari just wanted to get out from there. Yash however notes down the address  of Pari whom he considers to be Meera

NEXT DAY

It was a Saturday and Yash had a holiday. He goes to meet Maan at their favourite hangout place.

Maan: So Yash how was your date yaar?

Yash:  jhale pe namak chidakna band kar de

Maan: Tu aisa kyun keh raha hai?

Yash: Tu tho jaanta hai na yaar ke I was so excited for the date par...

Maan: Par kya .. Meera ne kuch keh diya kya?

Yash: Yahi tho problem hai ke wo kuch kehti hi nahi.  Phone pe kitni alag lag rahi thi aur asal mein usse ekdum alag. Jaanta hai usse mere show mein sirf Traffic updates pasand hai.

Maan: (confused) Main kuch samjha nahi

Yash tells him everything in detail

Maan: Yash aisa bhi tho ho sakta hai ke wo nervous ho gayi ho. Tu ek kaam kar tere paas uska address tho hai na tho kal usse jaakar mil. Kya pata dusari mulakat koi promising outcome le aaye.

Yash: Ya u might b right maan. Achha tu ye bata ke teri shakal itni murjaayi hui kyun hai? Let me guess missing geet na?

Maan:  (smiles) Haan yaar, bechari ka khafi kaam pending hai isliye wo aaj bhi milne nahi aanewali

Yash:  Maan tu geet ko apne dil ki baat bata kyun nahi deta ke tu usse pyar karta hai?

Maan: Mujhe darr lagta hai Yash

Yash: Maan singh khurana ko kab se darr lagne laga?

Maan: Geet meri bahut acchi frnd hai. Darta hoon ke agar usne inkaar kardiya tho, tho uski dosti bhi na kho baitu.

Yash: Jab tak ikraar nahi karoge tab tak tumhe kaise pata chalega ke uska jawab haan  hoga ya na?

Maan: Par

Yash: Par var kuch nahi. Chal let's do a deal. Kal main meera ke ghar jaaunga usse milne aur tu Geet ko apne feelings ke baare mein batayega.

Maan: (smiles) Ok done.

PRECAP 1: Yash: Tum shayad Pari ho Meera ki best friend?"

PRECAP 2: Maan's confession

 
PART 6: Page 23
 


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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 10:03pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
Wow nice update.. poor yash... cant wait for yash meera meet... wow maan's confession.. really excited abt it.. continue soon n thanx  a lot for the pm...
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
nice prt.yash ki date ka tho band baj gaya...hope. Geet maan ko haan keh de,thnxs 4pm.continue

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