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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 128)

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Tanu: ys dear ab baazi maan k haath mein hai n ys geet will confess very soon… dekhte hain meera kaise yash ko manati hain

Shweta: ys maan is really sweet

Bhanu_rekhag : Maan n geet jald hi maneet ho jaayenge

Maansee: ys geet apne hi jaal mein phas gayi

Shivangi: maan k tricks tho abhi start hue hain

Silky: ys dear maan geet ke khwab ko reality banakar hi chodega… thanks for ur well wishes

Zuniaba5: ys dear geet is maha jealous

Preethia: ys let maan have sm fun

Samra: ys dear ab maan ki baari hai

Ritzy: ys maan ki shaitani se ab geet ka bachna mushkil hain

Anu: ys very soon geet maan k baho mein hogi

Adaa: dear I will update tomorrow

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Thanks for your appreciation and encouragement friends

Thank you

Sofiya

Kahkashansakina

Abinash079

Todayzstar

Masoom

rs12345

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srirad

Khushi

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Tanu: ys dear ab baazi maan k haath mein hai n ys geet will confess very soon… dekhte hain meera kaise yash ko manati hain

Shweta: ys maan is really sweet

Bhanu_rekhag : Maan n geet jald hi maneet ho jaayenge

Maansee: ys geet apne hi jaal mein phas gayi

Shivangi: maan k tricks tho abhi start hue hain

Silky: ys dear maan geet ke khwab ko reality banakar hi chodega… thanks for ur well wishes

Zuniaba5: ys dear geet is maha jealous

Preethia: ys let maan have sm fun

Samra: ys dear ab maan ki baari hai

Ritzy: ys maan ki shaitani se ab geet ka bachna mushkil hain

Anu: ys very soon geet maan k baho mein hogi

Adaa: dear I will update tomorrow

A special thanks to all those who liked my post

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Part 21

Next day

Maan is getting ready to leave for work

Yash gives a call to Maan

Maan: (happy) Are Yash what a pleasant surprise man. Where were u for so many days I was missing u yaar

Yash: Maine bhi  tujhe bada miss kiya Maan.

Maan: Kya hua u seem to b upset any problem?

Yash: Problem solve karne ki koshish mein hi kuch dino tak tum logo se dur chala gaya tha' lekin problem solve tho nahi hua balki tum dono se dur rehkar meri bechani aur bhi baad gayi'

Maan: Kya hua yash tu  tho kabhi bhi aisi mayusi bhari baate nahi karta tha' achha ye bata tut ho Meera ko propose karnewala tha na kya hua ussne mana kar diya kya? (What's the matter Yash why r u so upset n ya u were going to propose meera na did she agree?)

Yash: Pls Maan dubara uss Meera ka naam mere saamne mat lena main apni life ki saari kadwi yaado ko bhuladena chahta hoon (Pls Maan now henceforth don't even mention her name in front of me)

Maan: Ok tho iska matlab hai teri pareshani ka kaaran Meera hi hai' dekh Yash problem se agar bahar nikalna hai tho hume uska saamna karna chahiye ( ok so that means your problem is related to meera look yash if we need to find a solution then we should face d problem n not run away from them)

Yash: Maan but'

Maan: But wut kuch nahi' shamko milkar tu mujhe saari baat bateyega main apne friend ko pareshan nahi dekh saktha (I  don't want to hear anything we r meeting today n u will tell me the whole thing that has happened )

Yash: (smiles) Thik hai baba waise meri chod teri love story ka kya hua tune wo cassette geet ko di ya nahi jisme tune apna confession record kiya tha' (ok yaar now tell me what abt ur love story did u give that cassette to geet?)

Meanwhile Geet is trying to call Maan'

Geet: (self talk) Maan itne subah kisse bat kar raha hai' jab bhi call kar rahi hoon ek hi baat sunaiye pad rahi hai ke the person is busy on another call'

Yash: tere mobile pe kisi ka call aa raha hai kya baar baar ek beep sunai pad rahi hai ( ithink someone is giving u a call)

Maan: (smiles) Haan wo geet ka call aa raha hai ( ys it is geet)

Yash: Oh ho tho thik hai tu apni geet se baat karle main tujhse shaam ko milta hoon ( ok fine u talk to ur geet I will meet u in d evening)

Maan: Nahi Yash geet ko wait karne de' mujhse bhi toh usse tadpane ka mauka milna chahiyena ( no yash let her wait' even I need to get a chance to trouble her)

Yash: Main kuch samjha nahi

Maan: Tu pucch raha tha na ke wo cassette geet ne suni ya nahi well the answer is yes' maine toh wo cassette geet ko nahi di lekin accidently geet k haath wo lag gayi n then usse ye pata chal gaya k main usse pyar karta hoon ( u were asking na k whether geet has heard the confession or not well d answer is yes)

Yash: O wow that's amazing news yaar toh geet ka kya jawab tha? (wow that's amazing so what was her answer?)

Maan: well Geet bhi mujhse mohabbat karti hai' magar usne mujhse ye baat  ab tak nahi batayi'aur kitne dino tak mujhe tadparahi thi aur meri taang kheech rahi thi'isliye main bhi ab usse tadparaha hoon taaki wo khud apne hi plan mein phas jaaye aur wo majboor ho jaaye ye kehne k liye k wo bhi mujhse pyar karti hain (well geet also feels the same but she hasn't confessed yet infact she was troubling me from so many  days n now I hv decided that I will also play the same game with her so that she will finally confess her true feelings)

Yash: tum dono bhi na ajeeb ho' dono ko ek dusare k feelings k baare mein pata hai magar confess karne k bajaye tum dono silly games khel rahe ho

Maan: Yash tu wo chod aur haan ye baat geet ko bilkul bhi mat batana k tune mujhe call kiya tha aur ye bhi mat batana ke hum log shaam ko milne wale hain (Yash leave that u promise me that u r nt going to tell geet k u were d one with whom I was talking n neither would u mention that we r going to meet today)

Yash: ok as u wish'maan main radio station jaaane k liye late ho raha hoon chal shaam ko milte hain ( I m getting late for work will meet u in d evening)

Maan: Ok Yash n one more thing aaj hum coffee house mein nahi milenge  

Yash: Toh phir kaha milna hai

Maan: Address main tujhe msg karke batadunga

Yash: Ok Maan. Take care. Bye

Maan: Bye

Call ends

Geet is desperately trying to call Maan

Geet: (Self talk) thank you babaji atleast maan ke mobile ki ring toh sunai pad rahi hai

 

Maan: (Self talk) Itne jaldi nahi geet thode der aur tadpo' phir main tumhara call uthanuga

Geet: (Self talk) Ofho Maan phone kyun nahi utharaha' kahi kal raat ki baat se abhi naaraz toh nahi

Maan finally decides to pick the call

Maan: Haan geet bolo koi important baat thi ya yuhi phone kiya' agar time pass karne k liye phone kiya hai toh main batadu k main kafi busy hoon

Geet: Maan tumhare paas mere liye time nahi hai' aur waise ye batau k itne der se tum kisse baat kar rahe the

Maan: Tumhe kaise pata k main kisise phone pe baat kar raha tha

Geet: Main tumhe kab se call karne ki koshish kar rahi hoon aur baar baar mujhe yahi sunne mil raha tha k " d customer is busy on another call"

Maan: Haan main kisi special person se baat kar raha tha'(gives a naughty smile) kyun tumhe koi aitraaz? ( ya I was talking with someone special ?)

Geet: (irritated) Kya main jaan sakthi hoon k wo special person kaun hai jiseke baat karne mein aap itne busy the (May I know the name of this special person?)

Maan: Nahi tumhe batane ka mera mood nahi hai ( I m currently nt in a mood to tell u)

Geet: (shocked) What?

Maan: Chalo main tumhe bata hi deta hoon' main apne honewali "wo" se baat kar raha tha

Geet: Wo ye wo kaun hain

Maan: Geet tum bhi naa kuch nahi samajthi meri wo matlab meri honewali wife are baba main "khwab" se baat kar raha tha ( Geet I was busy talking with my would be wife "khwab")

Geet: what "khwab" aur tumhari honewali wife' iska matlab tumne usse propose bhi kar diya ( what??? This means u have already proposed her?)

Maan: (tries to control his laughter) Nahi Geet ab tak toh nahi haan magar jald hi kar dunga u know aise mamlo mein deri nahi karni chahiye agar mujhse pehle usse kisi aur ne propose kar diya toh' mera dil toh tuth hi jaayega na (No geet but I would b proposing her very soon )

Geet: (self talk but unknowingly speaks loud enough) Uss "khawb" ko janab propose karne jaa rahe hai aur aaj tak mujhe ek baar bhi ye nahi kaha k Geet main tumse pyar karta hoon mujhse apne dil ki baat bolne ke liye itna darte the ke apna confession ek cassette mein record kar diya aur record karne k baad bhi mujhe khud laakar wo cassette diya bhi nahi ye toh shukra hai baabji ka k mere haatho mein wo cassette lag gaya warna main toh maan k dil ki baat kabhi samaj hi nahi paati' aur yaha mahashaye uss so called "khawb" ko apni jeewansangini banana chahte hain

Maan: (hears the entire thing but somehow controls his laughter) Geet tum ye kya bol rahi ho zara zor se bolo mujhe kuch sunaiye nahi de raha ( geet pls b a bit loud I cannot understand what u r trying to say)

Geet: wo kuch nahi' dekho Maan zindagi k itne bade faisle aisi jaldbaazi mein nahi liye jaate' ek kaam karte hain hum aaj shaamko milkar iss topic pe discussion karte hain ok  (maan we should b very careful while taking imp decisions of our life' let us meet and discuss this issue)

Maan: Sorry Geet aaj shaam possible nahi hai ( Sorry geet notpossible today)

Geet: Kyun koi meeting hain kya?

Maan: Haan uhi samaj lo mere life ki sabse badi meeting aaj main "Khwab" ko date par lekar jaa raha hoon ( ys I m going on a date with "KHWAB"

Geet: What? Date!!!

Maan: Ok geet baki ki baate hum baadmein karte hain wo kya hain na mujhe Khwab ke liye kuch achha sa gift lene jaana hai' main apni pehle date ko yaadgaar banana chahta hoon (Ok geet I will talk to u later right now I need to buy some gifts for khawb I need to make my date special)

Maan: Ok bye

Geet: Lekin Maan

But before geet could say anything Maan cuts the call

Geet: (self talk) Date!!! Mujhe aaj tak uss coffe shop k alawa kahi lekar nahi gaye aur uss " khwab" ko date par lekar jaa rahe ho

Geet: Babaji ye kya ho raha hai'maine toh mazak kiya tha ye mazak reality mein kaise convert ho gaya

Precap1: Meera: "Yash meri baat toh suno"

Precap 2: Maan: " Geet I LOVE U"WinkWinkWink

 

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Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 3:13am

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oww naughty maan...he is troubling geet...for her to confess first...
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