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FF(MANEET): DIL MIL GAYE Thrd1 upd prt 21 pg 141) (Page 118)

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Posted: 30 June 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maaneetsangel

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
 
 
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Posted: 30 June 2011 at 4:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

congrats goldieDancingDancingParty
thank yu problem solveHugHug
beautiful part
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specialy sweet torture that
geet was getting from maan
waiting waiting
ty 4 pm
 
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Posted: 30 June 2011 at 4:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Deepanwita

awesummm upd dear
amazing
superb
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fantastic
fabulous
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm

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awesome upd...
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awesome upd...
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Posted: 01 July 2011 at 12:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by piya-

Originally posted by silkyarora

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awesome dear...pehle it was geet jo maan ko pareshan karti thi...par ab lagta hai maan bhi pareshan karega geet ko...maaneet moments were really cute...loved it...maan too smart...geet ko usi ki baato mein uljha dia...waiting to know what happens next...i guess maan ko pata chal gya ki geet loves him...and usko pareshan kar rahi hai...well all my assumptions...continue soon yar...!!!

Loved it completely...!!!!
 
well once again loved ur comments n regarding d guessWink


now with ur reply im more eager to know what will actually happen...jaldi updae dedo na...please

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I m thankful to everyone who have pressed d like button as well as posted a comment. Here is the next part.  Enjoy reading and do press d like button and leave ur precious comments.

PART 19

Maan is on top of the moon today.

As soon as geet leaves maan starts singing

"Chahe tum kuch na kaho maine sun liya ke saathi pyar ka mujhe chun liya' chun liya ' maine sunn liya"

Nakul is totally surprised. He had never seen maan singing.

Nakul: Maan Sir ye aapko kya ho gaya hai aap kuch ajeeb tareeke se pesh aa rahe hai (Maan Sir there is something different in your behaviour today is everything okay?)

Maan smiles and approaches Nakul. He places Nakul's hand in his and starts dancing with him. Maan once again starts singing

"Pehla nasha Pehla khuma

  Naya pyar hai naya intezaar

  Kar loo main kya apna haal

  Ae dilebekaraar mere dilebekaraar

  Tu hi bata '

  Pehla nasha pehla khuma"

Nakul gets all the more confused

Maan smiles and goes to his room

Nakul: Haan samaj gaya aaj pehli baar Maan Sir baarish mein bheege hain na issliye unhe sadma paucha hoga. Khair kal subah tak thik ho jaayenge. Lekin kal subah se pehle main unke saamne nahi jaaunga warna wo phir se dance karne lag jaayenge mera sar tho abhi se chakraraha hai ( Ok I understood this is for d first time that Maan sir has got drenched in d rain hence he is in a state of shock. I think he will b perfectly fine by tomorrow morning but till then I m not going to meet him otherwise he will once again start dancing oh my head is already spinning )

Maan's room

Maan takes geet's photo and places it close to his heart

Maan: (self talk) Sach mein aaj meri zindagi ka sabse acchha din hai (today is d best day of my life)

Maan: Aaj maine tumhari aakhon mein apne liye wahi jazbaat dekhe jo ke main tumhare liye mehsoos karta hoon aur geet ye baat toh maine tumhe pehli bhi batayi hai ke tumhari aakhen kabhi bhi jhooth nahi kehti (Geet ur eyes always speak the truth today they clearly portrayed each and every emotions that u have 4 me)

Maan: Magar tumne mujhse jhooth kyun kaha (But why were u lying to me?)  

Maan: ok let me think

Maan: Geet dho dino se kuch ajeeb behave kar rahi hai. Inn do dino mein aisa kya hogaya. Ek kaam karta hoon wo saari baate jo inn do dino mein hui hain unhe ek baar phir se yaad karke dekhtha hoon shayad kuch clue mil jaaye ( From d past two days there has been a significant change in geet's behaviour. Let me recollect all the incidents of the last two days mayb I'll get a clue)

Maan: Hmm' tho main geet se milne ke liye uske ghar gaya wo upset thi' maine usse uske upset hone ka reason puchha aur phir hum dono ne milkar uska assignment complete kiya ( ok' I had gone to meet geet she was upset I asked her d reason n then we finally completed her assignments)

Maan: Geet se ye janne ke baad ke wo kisise pyar karti hai maine ye decide kar liyaa ke main apne dil ki baat geet ko nahi batunga issliye wo cassette jisme maine apna confession record kiya tha maine geet ko nahi diya (After realizing that Geet loves someone else I decided that I won't tell geet abt my feelings hence I did not give her the cassette in which I had recorded my confession)

Maan: phir usi din shaam ko meri mulakat ek baar phir geet se hui uski scooty karab ho gayi thi issliye maine usse ghar tak drop karne ki baat ki aur hum dono apne car mein baithkar ghar ki taraf bade (The very same evening I once again met geet. Her bike had once again stopped working hence I offered to drop her at her residence. She agreed)

Maan: Tabhi Mr. Rathore ka phone aaya unhe ek urgent kaam tha. Issliye geet ko ghar drop karne se pehle main Rathore saahab keg har gaya tha. Geet car mein akeli thi (Just then I got a call from Mr. Rathore he had some urgent work. I visited his house to collect a file. Geet was sitting alone in d car)

Maan: Jab main file lekar waapas aaya tabhi se geet ke behaviour mein maine change notice kiya. Geet ne mujhe bade pyar se gale lagaya aur ' (smiles) (When I came back I noticed a change in Geet's behaviour. She gave me a very beautiful hug and')

Maan: Jo bhi hua hain issi duaran hua hai

Maan: (Thinking) Kahi iska matlab'

Immediately rushes out . He get to his car and starts searching for the cassette.

He couldn't find it and then he realizes that geet had indeed heard his confession and d cassette was also with Geet

Maan: Achha toh ye baat hai (smiles)

Maan: Toh iska ye matlab hua ke madam mujhe pareshaan karne ke mood mein thi. Thik hai geet  ab tak tum shararate kar rahi thi ab meri baari hai dekhna main tumhe tumhari hi sharaarato mein kaise phasa tha hoon. Bahut hi jald tum khud mujhse kahogi ke maan main aap se pyar karti hoon (Ok Geet darling now it is my turn I will force u to confess ur true feelings. Very soon u will confess that u love me)

Precap 1 : Yash is back

Precap 2: Geet: "Maine miss call diya tha na toh phir tumne call back kyun kiya?"

Part 20: pg 135



Edited by piya- - 09 July 2011 at 3:10am

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so i was right...maan ne wahi guess kia...usse pata chal gya ki geet ne cassette sun liya hai...too gud:)))))))))
wow lovely part...maan is too good...kaise sab kuch recall kar liya maan ne...and now its maan's turn geet ko pareshan karne ke liye...and hope she will soon confess her love...loved the update...!!!
continue soon piya dear...awesome...!!!



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