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angelwords Goldie

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Posted: 29 August 2012 at 10:10am | IP Logged



sam- maan i have to leave, see you tomorrow

maan- bye sam

sam bye...

and she went away..

maan- sweetu kahan ho tum, i have to tell you so many thingss...

and he again became sad...


dadi- humne rano ko bulaya hain

rano knocked the door

rano- ji maa ji

dadi- beta, we have make them meet, maan is so lost and depressed i can't see him like this

rano- same is with geet, she didn't even go to school today, she is sitting in one corner of her room and crying, asking me when will her prince come? i cant even answer question maa

pammy- same is with my maan, please rano, you will help us na

rano- yes maam , i can't see my geet suffer , she is the only one whom i can say mine, after my husband death, she was my strength, i can't see her like this, i am ready for anything

dadi- now listen , rano you have to...

and continued discussing her plan

dadi - hope you all understood

rano and pammy- ji

dadi- so meet you tomorrow..

rano was still standing...

dadi-kuch kahana hhain apko??

rano- ji voh, sweetu ne maan baba keliya letter bheja

dadi- chaliya, chal ke de digiya

rano,pammy and dadi went to maan's room

maan was sitting like a lifeless soul, he saw rano and ran to her, and started searching for her.

maan- rano maa, sweetu kahan hain

rano- voh voh maan baba..

dadi spoke

dadi- maan voh kya hain na, geet was not well so didn't came, she will meet you tomorrow

maan was sad and he asked

maan- kya huin usse?? apna khayal nahi rakhti, rano maa geet ko meri tabiyat ke baare mein mat batana, nahi tho voh tension le gi, jhallli hain

dadi, rano and pammy smiled in tears

rano- beta apki sweetu ne apke liya ek letter bheja hain...

maan jumped in joy

maan- sachi

rano- muchi..

he took the letter from her and started reading...


kiase ho ap?? apko mera gift acha laga..??? i am missing you so much, mujhe nah apko bahut chiz batani hain, i asked mom, when will you come but she gave me no reply..please come nah, we will play...

aj mein school bhi nahi gayi...aur ap par gussa aya, you didnt came... kal agay nah?? i will be waiting..aur dodn't be angry and eat well i know, you had all ladoo in ones na?? very bad, you should ask other also..chalo koi nahi

apki sweetu


maan smiled, dadi ,rano and pammy was also curious to know, but maan is maan, he didn't let them read his and sweetu private talk...(bachpan se hall..hehehee)...he ran to his table and started writing something, after some minute he came back, and stood before rano and said

maan- maa give it to geet and say to her take care

rano- thek hain beta

rano- maa ji ab mujhe chalna chaiya

dadi- thiek hain

and she went away...


rano reached her small house

she saw geet sitting in same place like before she can't see her doll like that, she reached her

rano- beta, kya huin??

geet- ap prince se mila??

rano- hain apke prince nah thora unwell tha,esi liya he didn't came today, he said he will come tomorrow..

geet- sachi maa

rano-muchi beta

rano- aur ye dekho apke prince ne apke liya bhi letter bheja hain...

geet happily stanched the letter and read


i am sorry i didn't came, i was busy nah, pakka will meet tomorrow, i missed you so so much today, you know i didn't go to school know i missed you like anything...when i will meet you nah..i will not let you go, pakka, if anyone will try nah then i will kill him, and that laddo belong to me and just me..samjhe...(for those who missed possessive khurana)....i loved your gift, it is the bestest gift..thank you

chalo take rast and eat properly bye...

apke prince...

geet smiled and said

geet- maa bhuk lagi hain

rano smiled seeing this bond

rano- come beta



maan – nakul kaka

nakul- ji maan baba

maan- nakul kaka, you are becoming old, you haven't gave me food

nakul thought had he asked him, but he shouted on him

pammy was watching it and laughed...

pammy came forward

nakul- but maan baba...

pammy- yes nakul you are becoming old, go and bring food

while controlling he laughter...

nakul was totally confused...

maan- maa ap bhi nah, bekkar mein you scolded nakul kaka..uff

dadi who was also watching laughed

while pammy was all shocked

and maan went away

while both dadi and pammy laughed...




next- plan...will they succeed???


hope you like it

do comment

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waiting for you big big comments...

next-pg 104




Edited by ishanidhi08 - 29 August 2012 at 10:14am

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abinash079 IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 17 September 2010
Posts: 31501

Posted: 29 August 2012 at 10:21am | IP Logged
awesome update 
loved their bond

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monika1992 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 08 March 2011
Posts: 6941

Posted: 29 August 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
awesome update 
loved their bond

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26_chaitra Senior Member

Joined: 25 August 2012
Posts: 851

Posted: 29 August 2012 at 10:27am | IP Logged
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26_chaitra Senior Member

Joined: 25 August 2012
Posts: 851

Posted: 29 August 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged
Superb!!! Amazing update...
Thankzz for the pm...
continue sooon...

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pari1689 Goldie

Joined: 11 July 2012
Posts: 1716

Posted: 29 August 2012 at 10:32am | IP Logged
sooo sweet letter ke bahane hi sahi sweetu or prince ki baat to ho gyi...
lovely update...

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Desigirls12 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 21 March 2012
Posts: 18790

Posted: 29 August 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged

   wow lovely innocent u prince and tis innocent too my maan is over possessive.will they meet ? or they love  grow only by letter?..i love te update so much dear.

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shristi1 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 14 September 2010
Posts: 2499

Posted: 29 August 2012 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Awesome update.
So conspiracy for maaneet meet is going on behind raj's back.
Looking forward to it.

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