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SS-JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN-THREAD 1(NOTE-PG131) (Page 3)

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
Nice concept
Continue soon

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SS concept is awesome
continue soon
waiting for the first part

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 3:07am | IP Logged
brilliant update

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 3:10am | IP Logged
BRILLIANT CONCEPT AND SO DIFFERENT
UPDATE SOON

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 3:12am | IP Logged
Interesting
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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 3:26am | IP Logged
awesome starting..do continue soon

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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
char sketch and intro
interesting...
cont soon and pm me...
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Posted: 27 November 2011 at 3:45am | IP Logged

                                       part ' 1

enter dadi maa

dadi maa- raj!!!

raj- yes  maa!!

dadi maa- i am gettin old day by day...i need a care taker now!!

raj- maa i will appoint a nurse!!

dadi maa- no raj i dont like those nurse...i will apoint a lady my self!!

raj- par kyun maa...i will appoint a best nuurse  tommorrow...vaise bhi  i dont need those down market people to be around my house!!

dadi maa- beta humari baat suniye...ap humari ek baat nahi sune ga!!

dadi maa knows that after this raj has to bent down

raj- thik hain maa..but tell that women dont be near my stuff and near maan!!

dadi maa- thats rude beta...they too are humans!!

raj- i dont care...mera bass chalta..tho i will not let them roam around my house...bas apke vajah se i will tolrate!!

dadi maa- thik hain raj

dadi maa left

raj- pammy!!

pammy- ji

raj- whr is my wallet??

pammy- yahi hain

she gave him

raj left towards his office

...           

                                          IN chawl

geet  has gone out to play

rano- kya!!

sakhi- hain...voh bari haveli main...ek care taker ki jarurat hain!!
rano- tumhe lagta hain...i will get the job!!

sakhi- pata nai...but u shuld try!!

rano- tu sai kaha rahi hain...i will go there!!!

sakhi- vaise bhi...voh chawl ke malik...is coming for the rent!!

rano- tu sahi kaha rahi hain!!!

rano- chalo...chalte hain!!!

she left!!!

...

here in the haveli dadi was on ..in her search

dadi maa- koi asa mili nahi rahi jisse par mujhe vishwass ho

at that time rano entered

dadi saw her

she look innocent...

dadi maa(thought)- she will be perfect...but let me ask some que to her!!1

rano- nameste madam ji

dadi maa- nameste

dadi maa- apki family mein kaun kaun hain!!

rano- ji mein aur meri 5 saal ki beti!!!

dadi maa- your husband!!

rano- he  died 3 yrs back!!

dadi felt bad for her

dadi maa- when u will work..where will ur daughter be??

rano- ji mein usse akele nahi chor sakti...i was going to ask u ki can she to come...she will nt distrube u!!

dadi maa- phele hum unse milan ga...then i will decide!!

rano- ji

dadi maa- bring her tommorrow!!!

rano ' ji

...

part 1- finished

part 2- they meet

...

THANK U ALL...FOR UR SWEET COMMENT!!

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and motivate me

sorry for mistakes

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 27 November 2011 at 3:57am

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