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SS-JAANE TU KAHAN HAIN-THREAD 1(NOTE-PG131) (Page 14)

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Posted: 17 January 2012 at 5:18am | IP Logged
awesome update...i really love this FF so please please update soon
 
Maan is so cute...i feel like stretching his cheeks...aawww...

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                  UPDATING  2 PARTS...
                     HOPE U LIKE IT...
 


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Originally posted by ishanidhi08

UPDATING  2 PARTS...
HOPE U LIKE IT...
 
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                                                              PART ' 6

Maan running towards terrace'crying(I hate maan crying)'he was not In a mood to listen to anyone or anything'a thought of letting his sweetu leave him was killing him'he was very angry with his dadi,maa and his sweetu..his sweetu was listing to all the stupid ideas of leaving him but didn't said anything'

He reached terrace look towards stars complaining..

Maan-Babaji sab log bahut bura hain..sab meri dost ko mera se durr karna chahata hain..

Wiped his tear and said

Maan-But mein usse kahi nahi janne dunga'voh sirf meri hain 'voh mera saath hi rahe gi!!

When he made up his mind'and was going back with his answer

Geet came running towards him'

 

Other side in maan room

Dadi maa- maan ko mana assan nahi

Pammy-chaliya maa try karte hain..

Dadi maa- pata nahi pammy eis baar mujhe lagta hain..humari jarurat nahi pare gi..geet hain'!!!

Pammy- apko lagta hain..!!

Dadi maa- rano beta apko kya lagta hain??

Rano who was standing and listening now spoke

Rano- ji maa ji'meri geet kisi ko bhi mana sakti hain!!

Dadi maa- hehheheee

All three was waiting for them to come

 

 

Geet- prince meri baat suno na

Maan moved his face side way..

Geet- prince ek baal meri baat sun lo na'

Geet moved towards towards the maan face'so that she can see in his eyes

But attempt got vain

As again maan move his head sidewards

Geet- plzeo prince aj ghar jaana hain..mein pakka promice ki kal auingi'!!

Maan  again move his head side wards

Geet was sad becoz all her attempt were going vain'

An idea got struck in her mind!!

She quickly moved towards maan face

And gave a small peck on his cheek(Embarrassed)

Maan was shocked and seen towards her

As soon as she kissed him all his anger..stern decision got in vain

Maan in fake anger-ye kyat ha??

Geet- jab maa gussa hoti hain na..tab mein unko esa hi manati huin

With a baby face

Maan-hmm

Geet- tho prince app..

Maan- thiek hain jao'but I want u in my home exactly 2 pm

( haayee kya attitude hain..EmbarrassedShocked)

Geet- 2 matalb??

maan - 2 baje
Geet ' voh kya hota hain price..

Maan- kal batauinga..abhi apki maa ko batata huin..!!

Geet-thiek hain

Maan also moved towards geets face.

And gave sweet peck on her cheekEmbarrassed

Geet-ya kis liya??

Maan- becoz u gave me..so i gave u

Maan- chalo rano maa ke pass chalta hain

Geet- thiek hain'!!

They ran out of terrace

 

They reached  maan room

Maan and geet entered'

All the people who were present before was now curious

Maan came towards rano

maan- rano maa ap sweetu ko le ga sakti hain

dadi maa and pammy was very hapy to listen his

and rano was double happy as maan  called her "maa"

maan- but

all three faces again serious

maan- I want my sweetu exactly 2 pm'is that clear.??varna agli baar I will not listen

with full athuority

rano , pammy and dadi maa was shell shocked

rano- ji beta ji..hum apki sweetu ko kal le ayaien ga..pakka

 

rano and pammy left the mansion'

maan was little sad but was happy at the same time because tomorrow again his sweetu will come

as soon as they stepped out of the mansion gate

a BMW..of black color entered the house

it was none other than raj'.

'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''..

Part 6- finished

Part 7- sammera entry

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I hav read all ur comments 'I am very happy and touched that u are liking it

When I will get time I will pakka vala answer ur comment..that to all those who hit like button

Happy reading'

One more part coming up

Hope u like it

Do comment

And

Hit like button

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Edited by ishanidhi08 - 03 February 2012 at 10:26pm

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Posted: 04 February 2012 at 5:06am | IP Logged
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do continue

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   buddies i knw u r egarly waiting for next part...plz give me some more time!!

  will update in 2-3 days...till then happy reading
 
 hope u like it
 
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lovely update
continue soon

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part 6
nice part...
so lovely...
Sameera?
a snobby and bratty kid?
cont soon...

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