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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Originally posted by SajanRox

Res!! Party

^Edited^

Hey Bidz,

Yeah! I'm first! 

Party

Congratulations on your new  OS!!Hug

Party

No one can say that you are a first timerShocked!! You wrote it flawlessly with perfectionClapClap'

I really liked the OS!Big smile Aww'. Shooo cute!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Hmm, the scene where Gunjan emotionally blackmailed Samrat was really sweet!

You are a really superb writerClap'

I wish MJHT also these kind of scenesOuch.. *sigh!Cry*

But then you made it upBig smile!!! It was awesomeClap'.

I loved it to the coreHeart!

And Gunjan wanted the ice-cream she ate in DELHI?? God, mood swings are really dangerous! 

"Mujhe naa woh Mango Ice cream khaani hai jo tumne mujhe Delhi mein khilaaye the jab hum honeymoon pe gaye the. Please mujhe ice cream khilaao naa."

LOL

And the title is superb..

Samrat is really naughtyEmbarrassed

 "Mujhe jo karna tha woh toh maine kardi, aab 9 months toh tumhe isse samhalna hai. Iss mein main kya karu? Blushing" ..

And Gunjan is  so sweet and cute

 "Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi. Mere saath uthkar baath karo naa pleaseDay Dreaming."

"Chashmish! Shayad humare judwaa bacche honge. Aur shayad abhi woh dono fight kar rahe hai andar."ROFL ROFL 

heeheh!! WWE ChampionshipLOL

??

 

Please continue soonBig smile and don't forget to PM me warnaAngry!!

Love from NivritiHeart



Nivi... Hug

First of all, I wanna tell ya that I loved your 'lamba-choura' comment! LOL
Thanks a lot for appreciating! Embarrassed
Glad you liked it! Big smile
Yup! Mood Swings are really dangerous! ROFL
Bechare Samrat ko aab Delhi jana padhega! I am seriously gonna love writing that part! Wink
Samrat ko toh naughty hona hi tha...after all that's our cool dude Samrat! Embarrassed
I guess, yeah! WWE championship hi ho raha tha andar! ROFL

How can I forget to PM you dear? I won't forget! Big smile
I obviously don't want ya to kill me, that's why bhoolne ka toh sawaal hi nahin uthta! LOL

Take care!
Love.. Bidz! Embarrassed
Hey Bidz,
I believe now you will have to continue sooner!LOL
SO please continue...
And you are most welcome!! Your wish my commandEmbarrassed.. Eventually even I want long coments!!ROFL And they start from you!Wink
Love Nivriti..Heart

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 9:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by SajanRox

Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Originally posted by SajanRox

Res!! Party

^Edited^

Hey Bidz,

Yeah! I'm first! 

Party

Congratulations on your new  OS!!Hug

Party

No one can say that you are a first timerShocked!! You wrote it flawlessly with perfectionClapClap'

I really liked the OS!Big smile Aww'. Shooo cute!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Hmm, the scene where Gunjan emotionally blackmailed Samrat was really sweet!

You are a really superb writerClap'

I wish MJHT also these kind of scenesOuch.. *sigh!Cry*

But then you made it upBig smile!!! It was awesomeClap'.

I loved it to the coreHeart!

And Gunjan wanted the ice-cream she ate in DELHI?? God, mood swings are really dangerous! 

"Mujhe naa woh Mango Ice cream khaani hai jo tumne mujhe Delhi mein khilaaye the jab hum honeymoon pe gaye the. Please mujhe ice cream khilaao naa."

LOL

And the title is superb..

Samrat is really naughtyEmbarrassed

 "Mujhe jo karna tha woh toh maine kardi, aab 9 months toh tumhe isse samhalna hai. Iss mein main kya karu? Blushing" ..

And Gunjan is  so sweet and cute

 "Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi. Mere saath uthkar baath karo naa pleaseDay Dreaming."

"Chashmish! Shayad humare judwaa bacche honge. Aur shayad abhi woh dono fight kar rahe hai andar."ROFL ROFL 

heeheh!! WWE ChampionshipLOL

??

 

Please continue soonBig smile and don't forget to PM me warnaAngry!!

Love from NivritiHeart



Nivi... Hug

First of all, I wanna tell ya that I loved your 'lamba-choura' comment! LOL
Thanks a lot for appreciating! Embarrassed
Glad you liked it! Big smile
Yup! Mood Swings are really dangerous! ROFL
Bechare Samrat ko aab Delhi jana padhega! I am seriously gonna love writing that part! Wink
Samrat ko toh naughty hona hi tha...after all that's our cool dude Samrat! Embarrassed
I guess, yeah! WWE championship hi ho raha tha andar! ROFL

How can I forget to PM you dear? I won't forget! Big smile
I obviously don't want ya to kill me, that's why bhoolne ka toh sawaal hi nahin uthta! LOL

Take care!
Love.. Bidz! Embarrassed
Hey Bidz,
I believe now you will have to continue sooner!LOL
SO please continue...
And you are most welcome!! Your wish my commandEmbarrassed.. Eventually even I want long coments!!ROFL And they start from you!Wink
Love Nivriti..Heart

Haha! Pakka will update tomorrow! Big smile
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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:01pm | IP Logged
Day Dreaming
Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Originally posted by SajanRox

Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Originally posted by SajanRox

Res!! Party

^Edited^

Hey Bidz,

Yeah! I'm first! 

Party

Congratulations on your new  OS!!Hug

Party

No one can say that you are a first timerShocked!! You wrote it flawlessly with perfectionClapClap'

I really liked the OS!Big smile Aww'. Shooo cute!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Hmm, the scene where Gunjan emotionally blackmailed Samrat was really sweet!

You are a really superb writerClap'

I wish MJHT also these kind of scenesOuch.. *sigh!Cry*

But then you made it upBig smile!!! It was awesomeClap'.

I loved it to the coreHeart!

And Gunjan wanted the ice-cream she ate in DELHI?? God, mood swings are really dangerous! 

"Mujhe naa woh Mango Ice cream khaani hai jo tumne mujhe Delhi mein khilaaye the jab hum honeymoon pe gaye the. Please mujhe ice cream khilaao naa."

LOL

And the title is superb..

Samrat is really naughtyEmbarrassed

 "Mujhe jo karna tha woh toh maine kardi, aab 9 months toh tumhe isse samhalna hai. Iss mein main kya karu? Blushing" ..

And Gunjan is  so sweet and cute

 "Mujhe neend nahi aa rahi. Mere saath uthkar baath karo naa pleaseDay Dreaming."

"Chashmish! Shayad humare judwaa bacche honge. Aur shayad abhi woh dono fight kar rahe hai andar."ROFL ROFL 

heeheh!! WWE ChampionshipLOL

??

 

Please continue soonBig smile and don't forget to PM me warnaAngry!!

Love from NivritiHeart



Nivi... Hug

First of all, I wanna tell ya that I loved your 'lamba-choura' comment! LOL
Thanks a lot for appreciating! Embarrassed
Glad you liked it! Big smile
Yup! Mood Swings are really dangerous! ROFL
Bechare Samrat ko aab Delhi jana padhega! I am seriously gonna love writing that part! Wink
Samrat ko toh naughty hona hi tha...after all that's our cool dude Samrat! Embarrassed
I guess, yeah! WWE championship hi ho raha tha andar! ROFL

How can I forget to PM you dear? I won't forget! Big smile
I obviously don't want ya to kill me, that's why bhoolne ka toh sawaal hi nahin uthta! LOL

Take care!
Love.. Bidz! Embarrassed
Hey Bidz,
I believe now you will have to continue sooner!LOL
SO please continue...
And you are most welcome!! Your wish my commandEmbarrassed.. Eventually even I want long coments!!ROFL And they start from you!Wink
Love Nivriti..Heart

Haha! Pakka will update tomorrow! Big smile

Hey Bidz, I will be waiting!Cool

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:41am | IP Logged
OMGGG...!!!!!
Superbbb OS dear...
OMG!! I just love it so so so so so much...
its FABULOUS...!!
Wah! Kya Nakhre the hamari gunjan ke...LOL LOL
& Beachara Samrat...has to bear all the mood-swings...ROFL
& Judwaa Bacche??? Andar fighting???...God, Samrat is damn hillarious...ROFL ROFL ROFL
i cant stop my ROFL's after Reading that...ROFL ROFL
& God, He's so NAUGHTY too...Embarrassed
"MAINE JO KARNA THA KARDI"...Blushing
& Nupur ka effect to sachme bechari par poora h, By God...!!
warna Gunjan & aisi Emotional Black-mailing...?!LOL
& Mango Icecream? Delhi waali???
i dunno how will Samrat manage this...Embarrassed
Sachme Mood-Swings wer so WIERD & DANGEROUS...Stern Smile
Poor Samrat...LOL LOL
m really vry eager to read the next part...
plzzz cont soon...plzzz...
Gosh! i really cant wait for the next part to see wat happens...
plzzz update vry vry vry soon...
& thnk u sooo much for the PM dear to this wonderful OS...i cant thnk u enuf...Hug
& plzzz PM me wen u update...plzzz dont forget coz m really vry eager...Embarrassed
ur a FABULOUS writer...really Mind-blowing...Clap Clap Clap
Gr88888888 Job dear...Thumbs Up
plzzz do cont soon & thnk u so much for the PM...Big smile

Luv,
Ekta...Hug

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Originally posted by SajanRox

Please continue it soon...!!!Embarrassed


Have patience, Nivi! Sabar ka fal mitha hota hai! LOL

Hey Bidz...Hug
Jaise 'Meri Billi mujhse meow' waise hi meri lines mujhe ko sunarahi hai?AngryShocked
But what can I do? Embarrassed
"Intezaarrr Kabtak hum kare bhala??? Tumhe [OS!] pyaar kab tak na kare bhala?? Zindagi Do Pal Ki!!"ROFLEmbarrassed
So Please Update by TOMORROW or I'll pop out of your screen and kill you with a knife!AngryLOL
So gear up your brain cells and write the next part!Wink
Love NivritiHeart

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by preety88

Wonderful update...gunjan emotional blackmailing samrat was cute...cont soon

Thank you so much dear!! Glad you liked it!! Big smile

Originally posted by ekta_monaya

OMGGG...!!!!!
Superbbb OS dear...
OMG!! I just love it so so so so so much...
its FABULOUS...!!
Wah! Kya Nakhre the hamari gunjan ke...LOL LOL
& Beachara Samrat...has to bear all the mood-swings...ROFL
& Judwaa Bacche??? Andar fighting???...God, Samrat is damn hillarious...ROFL ROFL ROFL
i cant stop my ROFL's after Reading that...ROFL ROFL
& God, He's so NAUGHTY too...Embarrassed
"MAINE JO KARNA THA KARDI"...Blushing
& Nupur ka effect to sachme bechari par poora h, By God...!!
warna Gunjan & aisi Emotional Black-mailing...?!LOL
& Mango Icecream? Delhi waali???
i dunno how will Samrat manage this...Embarrassed
Sachme Mood-Swings wer so WIERD & DANGEROUS...Stern Smile
Poor Samrat...LOL LOL
m really vry eager to read the next part...
plzzz cont soon...plzzz...
Gosh! i really cant wait for the next part to see wat happens...
plzzz update vry vry vry soon...
& thnk u sooo much for the PM dear to this wonderful OS...i cant thnk u enuf...Hug
& plzzz PM me wen u update...plzzz dont forget coz m really vry eager...Embarrassed
ur a FABULOUS writer...really Mind-blowing...Clap Clap Clap
Gr88888888 Job dear...Thumbs Up
plzzz do cont soon & thnk u so much for the PM...Big smile

Luv,
Ekta...Hug

OMG!! Shocked
Thanks a lot for this super long comment!! Embarrassed
I love reading long comments, you know!! LOL
Well, I am so happpyyy that you liked my OS so much...actually I was just experimenting if I can write OS too!! Hehe!! Tongue
Aww thank u thank u thank u sooo much for the appreciation!! I didn't know that my experiment would work so well!! Embarrassed
Part 2 will be updated within 30 minutes!! I am writing it!! Big smile

Love... Bidz Hug


Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 27 May 2011 at 8:46am

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SajanRox

Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Originally posted by SajanRox

Please continue it soon...!!!Embarrassed


Have patience, Nivi! Sabar ka fal mitha hota hai! LOL

Hey Bidz...Hug
Jaise 'Meri Billi mujhse meow' waise hi meri lines mujhe ko sunarahi hai?AngryShocked
But what can I do? Embarrassed
"Intezaarrr Kabtak hum kare bhala??? Tumhe [OS!] pyaar kab tak na kare bhala?? Zindagi Do Pal Ki!!"ROFLEmbarrassed
So Please Update by TOMORROW or I'll pop out of your screen and kill you with a knife!AngryLOL
So gear up your brain cells and write the next part!Wink
Love NivritiHeart

ROFL ROFL ROFL

You really made me scared, Nivi! Tongue
I have no intention to get myself killed by you! LOL
So I am updating now! Big smile
Tumhare darr ne mujhe subha ke 8.55am baje utha hi diya update karne ke liye! ROFL

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Originally posted by SajanRox

Originally posted by Bidz_cutegal

Originally posted by SajanRox

Please continue it soon...!!!Embarrassed


Have patience, Nivi! Sabar ka fal mitha hota hai! LOL

Hey Bidz...Hug
Jaise 'Meri Billi mujhse meow' waise hi meri lines mujhe ko sunarahi hai?AngryShocked
But what can I do? Embarrassed
"Intezaarrr Kabtak hum kare bhala??? Tumhe [OS!] pyaar kab tak na kare bhala?? Zindagi Do Pal Ki!!"ROFLEmbarrassed
So Please Update by TOMORROW or I'll pop out of your screen and kill you with a knife!AngryLOL
So gear up your brain cells and write the next part!Wink
Love NivritiHeart

ROFL ROFL ROFL

You really made me scared, Nivi! Tongue
I have no intention to get myself killed by you! LOL
So I am updating now! Big smile
Tumhare darr ne mujhe subha ke 8.55am baje utha hi diya update karne ke liye! ROFL
Good GirlEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.. Now update soon!Big smileBig smileBig smile
Chalo, mere daar se tum update to karogi!ROFLROFLROFLROFL
Waiting for your PM to 'pop'!ROFLROFL

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