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ff: The promise of love(chapters 50,51,52) (Page 17)

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 5:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shubabegum

love ur ff.please can u pm me when u update.

Glad to knw dat u lik d ff..ofcourse sweety..wil send u a pm wen i update next..

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 5:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by love_never_dies

nice chapters dear,,, i loved it... I think nivi is viren's love (purana dost)... Now your story is full fletched,don't make us to wait long dear... Continue soon... Hug

Won't keep u waiting for long..thank u fr u lovely comment..

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jez di...bcz of exms i'm missing from here...u r an awesome writer...loving the new nivren story...thank u so much for this sweet ff..:)

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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 9:18am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Alphabet26

I think if viren find out the owner of the payal he would be very happy...but sad that he didn't listened to VD that day that nivi is coming to their house and she was the one missed the payal, otherwise he would have stayed... hope viren find out the payal matter b4 nivi leaves for delhi...or when nivi leaves he stops (like the one they showd in CCBM when viren left the city on the bus) and confess his childhood love to nivi after knowing that she is the one he loved...Embarrassed

Viren wil get to know everything sweety..but dont u think he should b given tim to sort out his priorities...
Usha...am i disappointing u with the turns in d story...??
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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 9:21am | IP Logged
am turning mad towards ur ff ...it was just wowww and am very excited to read next parts..so continue soon dear...please inform me when u update dear :)


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Originally posted by sana4kinha

jez di...bcz of exms i'm missing from here...u r an awesome writer...loving the new nivren story...thank u so much for this sweet ff..:)

Is it semester xamz..?i thot dat d last tim wen u had ur xamz it was ur final xamz..guess i was wrong..well sweety itz alwayz a pleasure to hear words of praise frm people who r awsom writers themselves...
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Posted: 12 June 2011 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jananishan

am turning mad towards ur ff ...it was just wowww and am very excited to read next parts..so continue soon dear...please inform me when u update dear :)

Thank u so much dear..that was so sweet of u..wil surely let u knw d next tim i update..
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CHAPTER 14

"Hello viren.."
"Niveditha..i'm sorry..mera intention tumhe hurt karna nahi tha..sorry I didn't mean to yell at u..i just thot that mayb raj was irritating u..so I thot…I..u..may b v shud talk…college aake baaath karthe hai.."
"Itz ok viren watz d use talking abt it??wat is done cannot b undone..so leave it..itz just that I'm not used to shouting and yelling..that I got completely disturbed..but nw I'm ok..so u also forget about it..gud  nite.."
nivi put down the fone without giving viren a chance..
At first viren thot of callin bac..then he decided mayb itz better to talk to her when he sees her..
Viren was thinking about ways of apologizing when taaygi entered the room asking "tumhari packing hogaya.."
"Packing kiss ke liya.."
"Badmaashi banth karo.."
"Nahi sach mein kya hua??"
"Don't tell me tumhe sach mein yaad nahi ki tumhe kal subah ke flight se US jaana hai.."
Viren was completely at loss of words..hw cud he forget..his parent's anniversary..
he said sorry to his taaygi and both of them started packing..
It was past midnight when he finally slept..
He left early next morning..he informed saaketh and asked to convey his msg to the others..
Four days later sasha was bac from college and was having tea when her fone bell rang..
it was viren.. "viren tum kab aaye..vo bhi ithne jaldi"
"sasha zara nivi ko fone dena.."
"nivi tho chali gayi waapis.."
"uski course khatham hogaya kya..kab chali gayi..??"
"viren vo dusre din hi chali gayi..she was feeling awkward..and there was raj also in college..so..she thought it was better to leave..y did u ask??she was ok wen she left …"
Viren got so angry that he threw d fon on to his bed sayin.. "damn it.. couldn't she wait??told her dat v wil talk things over.."
"Viren wat hapnd??"viren didn't turn instantly as he knew that sid should have seen him throwing the fon and murmuring..
"viren r u alright..??Aaj kal tumhe kya ho jaatha hai..??"
"Vo niveditha mujse baat kare bina chali gayi.."
"Nivi tumhe kahan mili..kaise mili..vo yahan kaise..????"
"Bhai bhai relax..itz ok..vo mere niveditha nahi.."

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