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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
awsome post dear...

love all of them ...

i think its DEV who send all dis bouque to geet...

its just a guess

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Superb...nice update
 really cute MSK waiting for GEET in his office...hope MSK did this but still confused lets wait for the next update

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Good going keep it up.

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 2:38am | IP Logged

Hi Abi,

Loved the update dear.

Finally geet has come back to office. Loved when MSK told office staff that he had apologised to geet. at that time my mouth was also wide opened just like that of geet.

Geet thinking that MSK drunk a lot last night that is why he is talking like this...it is hilarious

When someone brought red roses for geet...i thought it was maan's arrangement. But later it turned up differently. Now i am wondering who sent the flowers for geet...

My doubt list...

1)   Raj... to make maan jealous

2)  Sasha...to increase MSK's anger on geet

3)  Dev...to give surprise to geet

Beyond this my brain is not working yaar. Chodo...i will wait for you to reveal the rose mystery

143 dear

Tonya

 

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Shockedwho is dis raj??? did i miss any update??Shocked
i am not understanding????

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 4:59am | IP Logged
OMG u left us in tensed situation yaar...reveal soon waiting for next update.

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 5:58am | IP Logged
PART:24
Mann drove back to home n& thinking about who is that person send roses for her?he cant even get any sight of it...at that moment...he saw dev is watching tv and enjoying...mann comes near him & say
dev from tommorow u should be in office got it!
dont worry bro i ll be there ...and i promise that form tommorow i wont miss a single day in office
mann is impressed by his answer and smile at him
dev see that smile and say MSK and smile wow bro!
mann give him a glare but he feels happy
he is feeling sad that geet is leaving in orphnage...he want to her to stay in the house but not now...so he want to buy a flat for her so that he can say that is office quarters...he like that idea and calls adi and says that he want a beautiful flat with all necessary furniture...but he is still angry on that stalker...while closing his eyes...he thought this is the wonderful day in his life
next morning dev is ready to the office...mann is happy that finally his younger brother is changing...mann comes ot dining table and says dadima that dev is joining kc from today dadimaa is happy to him and winks at dev...dev to winks at dadimaa...they smile at each other and they leave for office...
dev is so happy that finally his bro is happy...he dont no what to say...
they both accessed in to the office...all the girls open there jaws to see those khurana heirs...
mann gave one glare to everyone!
dev smile that he is still old MSK...he should change little bit!
mann entered his cabin and say adi to call geet!!!!!!!!!!!!
listening geet's name dev heart turns in to 1000 watts bulb...he is just waiting to see her
when she came in to the cabin...mann call geet and say 
geet this is my younger brother DEV ISNGH KHURANA
even sasha ,adi.tasha all are present there
listening to dev's name...she just call dev tum!
geet...how are u dear?
i missed u so much...
they both just hug together
all are shocked...and mann too...geet  kitna din hui tumhe dekhe?
yes dev ...really i m so happy that i have seen u
but i am not happy!
why?
why ?
means u are in delhi...u are working here but u dont even thought to say to ur best frd about this...
dev she keep her head now...
geet dont bend ur head down dear
mann is shocked to listen the word dear from his bro,he is confused totally...
u wont to any wrong
i know why u did this?so that we dont get troubles because of u...we kno
w u geet...
u mena u know me that i m here
yes!!!!!!!!
but how?
i saw in the bro at party dear
bro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!mann sir  is ur brother...
but u never said that i have a brother...
geet!!!!!!!!!do u have anytime in the college for us...u use to be with books and library 
and we use ot leave u because if u study then only we are able to pass the exam right!!!!!!!!
u know bro geet is very intelligent she deafeated u bro!!!!!!!!! i mean she had broke the records of ur percent in the college...
geet she is my bestie...
again he hugs geet!!!!!!!!!!!
this time he turn his fists and give a angry glare t dev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mann cant take that sight then he thinks why he should call his brother to the office!
dev u never said about geet...
bro when u got the time for this
we have been frds for 6years
me,meera and geet are the besties in the college...she is my pal
when he want to hug again
geet stops dev!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oh meri mann u never change i know how much u hate hug given by others...
mann smile for that becuase she had stopped dev now if not he use to kill him now
geet say how is meera?
yes she is fine?
did u say about ur love!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
geet stop it!
mann gaze at dev...
kuch nahi bro...dev do u love meera?
bro bro !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!woh
woh kya dev...manns ir dev love meera a lot...
mann feels happy that they wont love eachother...just liking and he feels happy that dev's frd infutre his bhabi...
he love dev a lot...he knew he is a mischevious
he use to think even if he ll marry he use to choose a girl who can tolorate dev
but today he is happy that geet is his frd so she can take care of her
but geet do u receive my flowers?
what u send that?
then who can dare to send the flowers to my bro's office
i not even thought that is u!!!!!!!!!!!
oh poor geet...who can it be ...whoc an dare to send the roses than me...u are my best frd i ll help u form all the evil eyes...see i promsie i ll get u the great person for u this is my promise...he turns his eyes to his bro and say
but mann did not noticed his gaze
mann is happy that dev cares for geet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
here sasha & tasha again fuming in anger they thought dev ll make get out for geet but geet is the best frd of the dev
how can it happen
adi is happy that even dev sir like geet alot he is happy for that
he also says that from today u are living with meera not in that orphange
ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but dev,
geet hamare frdship ki kasam!!!!!!!!!!!!
please...ok baba did i said no for u...
i know that geet 
u know what even my bro never say of me no
and even u ...
if u all complted with introuction shall we start some work ...
yes bro!!!!!!!!!!!geet is there...
i m so happy if i do mistakes also she ll he me...
she is topper bro!!!!!!
i know that dev dont say it thousand times...
i know her capaabilty
she can take care of KC too like me got it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
all are shocked to see mann saying like that
even mann want to egt out from gaze so he shouts on others...and say everyone to back for work
he feela happy today beacause he can see a perfect dewar & bhabi relation
and he thinks he not even tried for geet today
then how can he make her love...
 he smiles thinking his postion he want to make a girl fall for him...where as each and every girl just fall for him...geet tumne mujhe kya se kya bana diya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

precap:argument between dev & sasha
               about what it is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!guess


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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 24 June 2011 at 2:23am

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 6:13am | IP Logged
nice part love it continue soon

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