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MANNEET MOHABATEIN... - Page 58

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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Madhukon

KK .. LOVED THE UPDATE .. NICE THAT DEV IS A GOOD GUY IN THIS AND HE IS GEET'S FRIEND... GEET TOPPED MAAN IN COLLEGE?  HAHAHAHA... THIS SASHA .. SHE SHOULD BE A GOOD TRASHING FROM EVERY ONE AT THE END...PLEASE PLEASE SEE TO IT... ANYWAYS .. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE .. :)



thanx madhu...

love,
abi

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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: gunjar

very nice update ...

AWesome...
the way maan thought was fabulous...
yeah devar and bhabhi are perfect...
..continue soon...:)




love u so much...

love,
abi
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: priyankasweet21

wow...louvly update...bechara maan...but i too feeling bad for maanu...😭...but at last he's happy...plzzz maaneet ka romance create karo na as soon as possible...waiting eagerlyyy...n 4r ur work a big huggg...👏



romance ll be there...in air soon

love,
abi
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Posted: 12 years ago

i knew it...

maine pehle hi guess kar diya tha...

nyc update yaar

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Posted: 12 years ago
PART:25
mann is too happy...that dev and geet are good frds and he is happy that dev is in love with meera and from tommorow geet stays with meera but his flat which he want to give gift for her...he felt bad but again thought it is safe her to ive meera rather to stay alone
here sasha and tasha are fuming with anger...seeing the closeness with dev & geet...so they want to get rid of her so they started to say geet all mean words like she is so low girl fisrt she had trapped dev  and now mann...she looks like behenji but see her grace...that can make anyone in the world to be lust of her
dev cant bare the words now so he said stop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!u damn woman how dare u to talk about geet like that...
sorry dev but waht we thought we sadi what wrong in that!!!!!!!!!!
she looks like behenji!!!!!!!!!!!!
is'it!!!!!!!!!!!!
stop it sasha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
if u think she is behenji type then i ll prove her she is ultra mordern girl !!!!!!!!
then say that she looks like behenji
sasha smirks...
dev rushes in to thecabin of mann without knocking his door...he gets angry and glare at dev 
sorry bro!!!!but it is urgent...
geet look at me...are u behenji!!!!!!
what ?
say are u want to be behenji in ur life?
why cant u change ur self ...se whole office says that u are behenji type i dont want to listen them more...
mann thinks that dev is a possesive person like him towards geet 
he thought he had a idea ...
geet from tommorow u ll waer only wear short skirts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!samji tum
mann himself opened his mouth wide...listneing to his brother's word
geet in mordern dress!!!!!!!!!!!why this idiot  will make me to kill the persons...
he knew very well about his staff that they stare her in salwar kameez if she comes in modern dress...i cant see...
no dev !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!geet cant do that?
why bro?
why means how cans he wear a modern dress!!!!!!!!!
she looks like perfect girl in salwar kameez...
geet feels good while he likes her the ways he is...
dev is smiling inside seeing his posseesive ness...
but still he cant see her like behenji...
geet u are my best frd right...so why cant u accpet my words if u wont this see geet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!kasam dosti ki!!!!!!!!!!!!
shut up!!!!!!!!!dev
everytime u say kasam dosti ki...
u know how i feel...wearing a mordern dress is ok for me...but still i feel that beauty lies in the heart dev not in dress...and i feel that the beauty which we see one day it wont be there...but the heart beauty stay still ever...so i feel that wearing dress in not a problem dev...
but not daily...only for tommorow...to say that i can wear even like this but not all days...is it clear for uuu
geet listen to me...
geet put her hand in the middle and stops him to say anything...first he felt awakard but after that he smiled seeing her order on him as if she married me now itself
he thought ok mann get habit of it!!!!!!!!!!!
after marraige u should listen to geet only...
he again thinks that he even did not proposed her...but he is thinking about the marriage...
he come of his thoughts and see debv & geet who are watching him only
geet says mann sir i know that u care for me...
thanx for that but please even i have to prove them that i an do anything...but i like trdaitinal so only i ll wore these clothes...
and moreover dev had challenged with someone
i cant see him to be failed in anything till today...as a frd it is my responsibilty to make my frd to be win
i hope u understand!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he is just admiring her...he cant evn think that she ll wear the modern dress only to make dev win
how lovely it is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
she is perfect for me...
yes geet u are perfect girl for perfect mann singh khurana
but still his heart is sinking beacause tommrow she ll be in skrits...
he feel why dev had challenged this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

precap:geet in mordern dress
               oops!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!guess what is position of the mann

sorry for mistakes
if it short sorry yaar i have fever
hope i ll give onmore update 
but not sure
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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii awesum upd dear
amazing
fabulous
superb
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago
Both the parts were Beautiful ...loved it!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii
superbbb upd dear
brillant
loved it
mindblowing
fantastic
do cont. soon
thanx for d pm

Love
Deepa

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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: sonali_N

very nice update😊



thanx dear

love,
abi