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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:34am | IP Logged
nice 1 n thnks 4 PM

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 10:13am | IP Logged
i like the concept and story but shortened words make it very difficult to understand. Can you please use full spellings so that it is easier to read.
 
Thanks

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Thank you for 2nd part maan going to meet geet and geet's life going to change wwowo thanks for pm
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
nice concepts.
love it.
do continue plz.
thx

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 10:51pm | IP Logged
part :3
hey muskan kiase hey tu?
i m fine. wht abt u?
delhi se ayi ho?koi bf hai kya?
chup pagli...u knw abt may family...i  cant take risk 
u knw abt dev...jab dev ne mujse bath ki verji ne dekha aur bahut data
dev acha issan esliye kuch nahiu huwa...varna patha nahi ...
ach ye batuo tum aur GAURAV ki rishtha kaha tak pahuch gayi hai
ghar me patha hai?
nahi geet...
veer ji se kehene ke liye daar hai??????????
dekhthi hu waqt ane par batugi...hey geet woh dekho mela
bachpan me gayi chalo na chlthe hai
tikhe...

in mela:
hey muskan woh dekho fortne teller?chale
ek minute wht is hopuld ask him?
ask at ur maariage with GAURAV
chup kar?
ask abt ur life partner...kk
shallw e go?

hello girls wht i can do for u??????????????????????
we wann to ask abt her life partner...
sure...
say ur name?
GEET sirf GEET...{kunki woh handa namm mera nahi hey}
when she says that  a person just stop his jeep infront of the mela
his jeep is not working at all
he did not no wht is the prob
he has muscular body
sharp eyes
he did no wht happened
he dont want nay one to help 
so he is just pushint the jeep to start
he just walks to the mela for water...to pump in jeep...

ur life partner is comnt today only into ur life...
when he comes just give this tabeez to him
and say him him to put over him
ever losse this tabeez
this one makes u both to be united all over the life...

she takes the tabeez and just some one nudges her
it goes ad fall on mann's neck

he turns back but did not notice anyone there
she searches for tabeez but she cant find it
she sees muskan faints at thta time
geet calls ambulance and send muska with them

DR;SHE IS PREGNANT
geet is shocked
thanx doc
tumne mujhe pehel kyu nhi batayi
sorry geet...woh woh woh...Cry
hamara ghar mey kiseko patha chala tho...
pls geet ko math batuo mey sab solve karungi
tikhe sirk ek hapthe...kk
i ll leave nw
k geet...

when she is coming back some gundas sees her
mesmerise her beauty and follow her
she sees and runs
she just runs and go and nudges with MANN
she asks for the help but he just refuses it
he walk from there
but she runs as fast as hse can
she knws that she shouidf ace
but dont no hw??????????????????
she runs and fall in to the water

there she shouts help...help help...
help...
he sees it and goes for help...
he first time sees in to her eyes
which make him him to see himself in that
for time he cant understand wht he is upto 
but he turns his face 
and gets her from there 
adn leaves
he is fighting himslef wht happend to him when he touched her...
some kind of feeling...dont no the name...

precap: mann notices her eyes...

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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 10 June 2011 at 1:56am

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
M first.awesome.purane din yaad aa gaye
thnks 4 PM

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 12:40am | IP Logged
wow awesome love it maan save geet wow thank you for pm

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