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MANNEET MOHABATEIN... (Page 11)

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 5:00am | IP Logged
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hi dear,
 
very nice update loved it.
 
maan is jealous...at the same time he couldn't stand her tears. that is so sweet of him.
 
loved, geet's resolve to put her brother behind the bars. hope maan helps her in this cause.
 
maan coming to handa haveli for the land...hmm...let's see
 
thank you very much for this update dear.
 
all the very best for your Medical Entrance Examination. you will get through dear.
 
143 buddy
 
Tonya

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nice update keep it up

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awesome super updates dear i am sorry for late reply if khul nahi raha tha take your time to update all the best for exams dear

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
keenu...just went thru ur chapters...very nice concept...and nice use of pictures...keep it up...and once again all the best for ur exams...

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awesome...i'm lovin it!!!!!!!!

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loved the update...
pl cont soon

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:03am | IP Logged
part:8
next fine morning mann is standing before the handa haveli dont why he is not able to face her...to see those eyes...but he should...his mind speaks...
when he enters darji was standing there and stared at him who is he?with out his permission getting in to house
he asks who r u?with out my permissin hw r u getting in?
mera naam  MANN SINGH KHURANA hai
geet mujhe janthi hey
may uski zammeen kharedna chatha hu...aur mujjhe wohzameen chhiye
use bulaye aur es papers par signkarne ke liye boliye...

mean while brij enters there
mere behen tujhe nahi milge...aur woh zameen tumhe nahi milega
ab ja yaha se...aur phir kabhi math annaa yaha...samji tum

MANN yells nw...GEET...GEET...GEET,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
she is in room sobing for muskaan and her moteher and badimaa r there with her...she just hears the name of hers frm mann
she feels that she heard the voice some where
hearing that voice she feel some power came in her
still that time she is sobbing...she just get uo frm the place and runs to meet his one gaze
she is justing running frm corridor...to meet him she di not hwy she wan to meet him...dont no why she want his one gaze...do not wht she want to talk with him...say her pain to him...
she is just running there...
everyone r assembled nw in the hall for geet
everyone r angry on mann 
he cant cal the girl of that house like that...but darji said wait
so only brij waited there silently
but he strikes some idea in his mind
but he want to take care after this matte settles
she just saw him...she do not knw why...she had smile in his heart...a relaxtion in her heart...a happiness she cant say
but sh shocked to see him there
why he was here?
hey babaji ab kyahoga/
maine ghar me kiseko bataya nahi es baath ki bareme
maagr ye tho...kuch zyada hi hogaya
ab es ye log kuch na karedhe
nahi me ese kuch bhi nahi hone dunga
mey hu mann ke saath...
she fees wht she said?
wht i m thinking...no geet ...just  calim down ur self



he also saw her
he dont wh he read her mind
she came in such a way that she did not see him for years
her eyes r deep red as if she cried whole night
he thought becuse of that guy
he jealous that she is crying for him
at the same time cant bare the tears...
he wann divert the topic nw
yes MS.GEET HANDA
thses r papers sign in this...
she take the papers and tare them in to pieces...
ab kya laroge tum?
,maine appse kahana ki mey app ko zameen nahi bejungi...toh ye zabardusti kyu?
mujhe nahi bejana ye xameen
plsss leve from here nw
he dont why he thoght her voice is tembling...she is not that GEET who gave the answer with cold tone...
tikhe toh ye sahi 
tume toh eske lava atha kya geet
sirf aasu bahana
APNA AASU KO BANDH KARNA SIKHO 
TABHI TOH TUMARA DIMAG CHALTHI HAI
DIL PAR MATH JAO TAKLEEF HOTHA HAI
DIMAG CHALANA HAI THO AASU KO ROKHO GEET ROKHO...
she thinks abt whom he is talking
but she gets angry on him ...speaking like this to her
but she feels he is right
i should not cry
but i ll choose wht my heart says MANN SINGH KHURANA
not the mind
i m not the heartless like u people...

he feel she said some thing...
he left form there without lokking at her at all
but he felt that she said something abt him in her heart
he can feel that
he again bangs the door of his house
why i cant see her eyes
why it pains for me if is see her in to tears...
why????????????????????????????????
only questioning rising but no answer
because...he is not using hi heart...
kya huwa mujhe?
mey kyu uske bareme soch rahi ho
agar ghar wale ne use juch kahe bhi tho mukhe kya
nahi geet woh bhi ek issan jisne tumare jaan bachaya
uske ke liye todha ham dardh hoga
bus ye hamdardh hai...
e bhi mann ki tarah dimag eesthmal karr rahi hey...
par ek baath sahi hey ki...es waqt mujhe muskann ki bareme sochna chiye
bus muskann aur brij veerji ...
i should put him in to bars...

precap;MANN ASKING GEET ABT MARRIAGE


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