MANNEET MOHABATEIN... - Page 7

Posted: 12 years ago
awesome..part sis...
TAke ur enouf time time to write long updates...
And All The best for ur exam...
continue soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...
precap confused me.. maan is jealous or geet????
Posted: 12 years ago
very nice! u should keep goin...:)
Posted: 12 years ago

hiii

finally after trying so many times to find this ff finally found out :D
 
Posted: 12 years ago
part:7
geet and raji came to meet GAURAV
kya baat hai GAURAV?
tumne mujhe akeli kyu bulaya...mey janthi hu muskaan ki mauth ki baad tum bahut dukhi ho
maagar...me tujhe milne ke liye ana chathithi par patha nahi kaha ana chayiye suna hai ki tum HP mey nahi hona...
 
GEET...
while mann passing that way he listens only the name
he sees there
he feels little awakard and jealous too...he did not knw that is jealous but his heart is aching ...to see her with one more person...
he dont no wht but he cnat bare thesight of her with other person
he is fighting in himself...he thought gaurav is her boyfriend so only she is meeting him there...

geet maine tujhe yaha esliye bulaya ki meri biwi aur tumari dost muskaan ki mauth tumara bai brij ne kiya hai musskan ki bai ke sath milkar
she cant bare those words at all
she knew her family is cruel but killing someone...
she also knew that they ll kill the people becuase when she was 8 she saw her own mother died...
but her brother brij also does like them she did not knwn that
she did not believe to him
he is trying to hear those words but becuse of noise he cant hear wht tehy r talking...
but he saw tears in her eyes again...
...
he thought that boy had asked something or she was cheated by him
he wann to be there with her at that moment
to her side to cocoon her in his arms...
he thought and he come outf frm his mind wht he is thinking...why he cant see the tears of her ...why?why??????????
he is not bale to bear to see gaurav
he wann to smash him...byt why???????????
again the question raises...
who said to u that brij veerji had killed muskaan
tumara bai ne mujhe phone karke bataya ki usen musskan ko mardala aur ab mujhe bhi
dekho me tumse madat nahi mag rahi hey mere jaan bachane ke liye
magar muskaan ki mauth ka badala chatha hu
badala?
matlab kya karana chatha tum?

mey tumara bai ki police ki hawle karna chatha hu
kyat um mere madat kar sakthu hu
bolo GEET...
kya tum apne dost ke liye mera madat karsakthe ho 
plsss geet apne dost ki khatir

she is just numb there
she dont no wht to do
her brother...whois not kind but not much cruel to others
why he did like this?
and muskaan brother also helped in that?
hw can they kill her...

no gaurav i wont believe
u i m just leaving...frm here
he turns back with heart broken
his thought geet has sister...she also did not believe him he can that be possible
geet and raji leaves frm there...

HANDA HAVELI:
GEET enters in to the house disgustingly...
raji leaves fmr there she want to give some space for her didi
geet comes frm the side of brij
he is talkig to the muskann bro kulijit...

kulijit humne jis tarah tumati behen ko mardala na usi taraj guarav ko bhi kardenge...
chintha math karo
bus sahi waqt ka intezzar karna...
geet hears it
she cant tolerate that her brother had killed someone...then she thinks that it is not he rown blood to think that they can be gud to the people
they r man eaters
they only knew hw to kill the people
heart less...
she is petrified by those words
shocked...panic...fear...everything
she thought she should help guarav at any cost
at that time she is 8 but nw she knws the world...well educated
she ll throw her brother in to the bars...
i ll make this
i ll give justification to the truth
i ll take the right path that is truth
i ll claim on my brother and put him into prison
that is the only work i have nw
i ll do it may be i ll die for this even though i ll do it...it is a promise of GEET...sirf...GEET

precap:MANN IN HANDA HVELI


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Edited by abisamratgunjan - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome n thank u for PM
N m first...
Edited by mona1992 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
actually i have medical entrance exam on 31st off this month
so after that sure i ll try to give bonus episodes for u all...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update sis..
Hope geet suceeds in her decision...
Continue soon...:)😊😊
Posted: 12 years ago
nice update... its moving in good pace... update soon
Posted: 12 years ago
hey...love d update...thnkx 4 pm...best of luck 4 ur exam...

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