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Short FF: A Gleam Of Hope! Part 2 pg 3 (Page 3)

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
after seeing tonights epi, i definitely need a happy dose of this FF, faiza apu, jaldi se update kijiye...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
chalo ji ...nanhi si jaan pay chori ka ilzaam bhi lag gaya ...aaj am feeling like sarja only to whom everyone scolds n blames Cry...LOL

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Faiza_sam

chalo ji ...nanhi si jaan pay chori ka ilzaam bhi lag gaya ...aaj am feeling like sarja only to whom everyone scolds n blames Cry...LOL

to aapka Niru kaha hai ji? Wink
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
sumaiya , really sorry for making u ppl wait for not-so-long ...ConfusedCry ..but believe me i have a raw idea in my mind and i have not writteen it yet ...how could i update it today itself er, tonight ... only few minutes r left fr power cut and if i try writing , i wont b able to type it so faster ...it will defo take some time ...really sorry fr making u ppl wait ...if i would have known earlier , i would have not posted this part today ...and would have written both parts tomorrow ...Embarrassed

but thank u guyz fr the motivation to write again ...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by usmrasul

Originally posted by Faiza_sam

chalo ji ...nanhi si jaan pay chori ka ilzaam bhi lag gaya ...aaj am feeling like sarja only to whom everyone scolds n blames Cry...LOL

to aapka Niru kaha hai ji? Wink


My FF is my NiruTongueLOL

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Hi girls , next part is coming up ...Embarrassed
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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Part 2 :

He went flabbergasted to see her that way ! ...he wanted to say a word but her murmuring made him wondered ...he shook her up and asked worriedly if what happened but she didn't change her position and started weeping badly clutching his arms tightly ...she rubbed her face against his chest and said sobbingly

''woh Albela aap ko maar dalay ga ...usnay phir say aap par goli chalai thi ...hum nay abhi abhi sapnay mein dekha hai...aap ..aap ...kahin mat jaiye ga ...woh hum sab ko maar dalay ga ..hum sab ko ...''

her words were not coherent and she was looking too awestricken .

Oh she had a nightmare ?! ...Sarja thought...he calmed a bit ,patted her head slightly so that she could feel better ..

he held her shoulders and made her lie down again ...Fear was still residing in her eyes...

He got up so that he could fetch a glass of water for her but suddenly , outside the chawl , a cat screamed horribly and it made her too scared resulting she had girth his body again ...Unintentionally , he turned back , covered her tiny figure from his muscular arms and said politely ..

'' Kuch nahi hua hai ...woh billi thi bahar ...tu darr mat , apun abhi paani leke aata hai ''

he wanted to get up but she had clutched him so tightly ...she didnt allow him to move and said with sobs

'' Nahin ...hum nahi janay dengay aapko ...bahar Albela hoga aur aapko maar dalay ga''

He looked so annoyed at her and wanted to push her back to make her understand that no one was there outside the chawl to harm them...He turned his face towards her irritatingly to say a word but his sight refused to turn back ...those innocent features were indeed so appealing ...they were not made to be ignored ...

he was bewildered at his own thoughts which changed with half a jiff...he tried to make him out of that fantasy but he felt as if all his efforts were going in vain ...her sobbing face , her tears which had rested on his chest like dew drops ,her wet strands which were instigating him to keep them behind her ears and most of all her soft arms which she had wrapped around his waist ...he felt as if he was losing his patience ...

she never knew if how n when she had put him in that biggest dilemma ...the evil inside a man was awaken slowly and started abetting him

''what's the big deal if he would steal some moments from this night ??? ...what was the need to stop him for no reason ???...C'mon Sarja ...she is all yours...you have all the right to feel the presence of a woman when she is so near to you ...why bother about tomorrow ??? ...think about present ! ...This woman is your love...she was the one who made u realize if what love is !!! ...Remember that night when u cornered her against tree...her fragrance was so appealing ...don't you want to inhale that again ??? ..don't u want to absorb that forever ??? ..Who knows if given a chance again ...move forward and grab your desired moment ... he leaned on her face and ShockedBlushing...

...

was that a cliff hanger ?WinkLOL


Edited by Faiza_sam - 27 May 2011 at 6:39am

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Gosh what a beautiful updateHeart... last para was too goodDay Dreaming... beautifully definedHeart... loved Sarja's feelingsDay Dreaming... can very well understand how much he would crave & long for such love and companionship.Broken Heart..Broken Heart.. but i do feel next update he would withdraw himself..Embarrassed... as he's a gentlemanSmile... but then i would not mind if you show him human tooEmbarrassed.Embarrassed... your cliff hanger is driving me nuts now.Silly... continue soon eagerly awaiting your next update... Hug

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