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Maaneet Ki Prem Kahani - Thread 1 (Page 7)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Interesting concept...
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 update soon...

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Heres the next part which my friend aashini helped me to write! Keep Commenting! Wink

Part 6 

(Geet still on the phone with Annie)

Dil: Yeh kya hai? Aur yeh mujhe kyun dehrahi ho?

Geet: Actually tum holiday per ho, aur yeh sab work kar rahe hain...so they're useless!

Dil: Yeh muhje nahi pina!

Geet: Dil tum mujhe company do aur waise bhi main 3 pee ra hun aur tumhe sirf ek hi diya (ek hi kafi hai tumhare liye! geet smirks)

Dil: Ok

Geet picks up the glass at the same time with Dil...Geet drank shot after shot...Everyone is wondering what the dare is and is she going to be okay.

 

Yash: Bas...geet bahot hogaya hai...

Geet: Bhai...realx! Muhje 3 shot ke baad kuch nahi hota...toh koyi mera fayada bhi nahi utahsakta!

Maan: Lo achha hai...(low tone)

Geet: App ne kuch kaha kya?

Maan: Nahi (usne muhje aap kaha...kitna respect karti hai...aur kyun na kare Maan Singh Khurana jo hun!)

Geet: Challo sab log utto...

Arjun: Kyun?

Geet: Bas utto!

 

Geet says to annie bye and disconnects the call.

 

They all walk to the dance floor...!! Geet grabs the mike from the DJ...

 

Geet: Guys...aaj main bahot khushi hun kyunki finally mere bhai ne meri honewali bhabhi ko propose kiya...so music please...


 

Wanna naach all night - DJ
Do you feel alright 
Wanna naach all night 

Dance with me baby, wont you dance with me all night - Mohit
Won't you party party party, wont you run the floor all night 

pyaare pyaare lamhe, pyaari pyaari baatein - Arjun
sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raaten 

ho goonjen hai dil ke taraane - Geet
bajne hain geet suhaaneh 
behke hai saare deewane - Yash
toh nach le nach le all night 

where's the party tonight - Arjun and Yash
on the dance floor 
oh sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein 
where's the party tonight 
Dance with me baby, wont you dance with me all night 
Won't you party party party, wont you run the floor all night - Mohit
Wanna naach all night
Do you feel alright 
Wanna naach all night 

pyaare pyaare lamhe, pyaari pyaari baatein - Maan
sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raaten 
ho goonje hai dil ke taraane - Geet
bajne hain geet suhaaneh 
behke hai saare deewane - Geet & Maan
toh nach le nach le all night 

where's the party tonight - Pinky and Adi
somewhere down the road 
on the dance floor 
oh sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein 
where's the party tonight 
oh sajna, oh sajna 
tere bina main nahin 

I Wanna go dancing (where's the), take you out (party tonight) - Arjun
I Wanna go dancing, (where's the) let's scream and shout (party tonight) 
Jo meri manzil tha pagal jispe dil tha -  Meera
haan woh mujhe mil gaya 
phool jo mehka tha, jispe dil behka tha - Yash
bahon mein woh khil gaya 
mehki hain pyaar ki raahen - Dil
behki hain saari nigahen 
phaili hain khwabon ki baahen - Mohit
toh nachle nachle all night 
where's the party tonight - Dil and Mohit
somewhere down the road 
on the dance floor 
oh sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein 
where's the party tonight 

nacch, naach all night - Arjun
get it right. 

Meri yeh kahani, jiski hoon diwani - Geet
Woh hai diwana mera 
(Is crazy about me too)
Jo hai dil ki rani usko bhi zabaani - Maan
yaad hai fasana mera 
woh poori hui koi kahani - Geet
mil gayi dil ki nishaani 
jhoom uthi yeh zindagani - Maan
toh nachle nachle all night 
so let's dance tonight 

(where's the party tonight - Everyone
somewhere down the road 
on the dance floor 
oh sapno ke din hain, sapno ki raatein 
where's the party tonight) 

I Wanna go dancing (where's the), take you out (party tonight) - Arjun
I Wanna go dancing, (where's the) let's scream and shout (party tonight) 

 

Meera and Yash left together. Mohit, Dil and arjun left as they wanted to grab some ice-cream. Adi and Pinky left (Pinky forgot that she came with Geet and that she lives with her). Geet was walking out of the disc looking for Pinky when she bumped into Maan.

 

Geet: Dekhe ke nai chalsakte kya? (She looks at him and is gobsmacked because Maan shooting an angry glare at her) *cough cough* I mean muhje dehke ke chalna chayiye tha. Sorry!

Maan: Its okay...tum abhi tak ghar nahi gayi...

Geet: Actually main pinky ko dhoond rahi thi..

Maan: Par pinky tho adi ke saath chali gayi...

Geet: Kya? (murmers under her breath...woh jhalli muhje yaha chod ke chali gayi...ab main ghar kaise jaungi? Babaji...mujhe tho rasta bhi nayi pata)

Maan: (Listened to half her murmering) Geet...kuch problem hai kya?

Geet: Nahi...aisa kuch nahi hai...bas muhje ghar ka rasta nahi pata...nayi hun na isliye! Main pinky ko phone karke use address lelungi...

Maan: Geet...bahot raat hogayi hai tum mere saat chalo!

Geet: Par...

Maan: Par war kuch nahi...tum chal rahi ho bus!

 

Maan drags Geet and opens the car door for her.

Maan: Baito (Geet sits in the car and Maan sits in the driver's seat)

Geet: Thanks...

Maan: Kis liye?

Geet: Lift den eke liye...aur nahi toh kya ek bichari ablanari ki izzat bachane ke liye...(Maan smiles a little)

Maan: Geet tum sach main pagal ho...tumhara bhai tumhare bhare main sach hi bol raha tha.

Geet: Bhai mere bhare main kya kehta hai...(she looked at him with her adorable eyes! Maan couldn't keep her gaze as he was driving and had to concentrate on the road!)

Maan: (Maan clears his throat) kuch nahi...main mazak kar raha tha...

Geet: Nahi...app mazak kar rahethe! Mujhe batayena!

Maan: Nahi geet aisa kuch nahi hai! Waise yeh pagalpan naturally ata hai kya?

Geet: Nahi...yeh kandhani hai! (Maan laughs) Aap bahot ache lagte ho jab aap muskarate ho...pata hai maine aapko aaj ek bhi baar muskarete hue nahi dehka. Kadus kahike!

Maan: (Stares at her in bewilderment!)  (Nahi...Maan yeh tumko pagal kardegi...usse dhoor hi rehna acha hai) Maan stops the car!

Geet: Aap ne gadi kyun rok di?

Maan: Shayad tumhe pata nahi hain par tumhara ghar aygaya hain...(Maan points at her house)

Geet: Ohh par muhje ghar nahi jaana...

Maan: Toh phir kya karna hai?. Garden main jhoolna hain?

Geet: Nahi muhje ice-cream kanhi hain!

Maan: Toh fir tum mere saath kya kar rahi ho...tumhe tho arjun, mohit aur dil ke saath hona chayiye! AB GHAR JAO!!! (Geet slowly gets out of the car)

Geet: Bye

Maan: Bye (Yeh ladki pagal hai...) Maan waited for her to go inside and left.

 

Precap: Interview in Khurana Contructions



Edited by -maankimishty- - 22 January 2012 at 5:43am

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
Lovely update::
Loved the song choice
Atleast geet didn't get that drunk
Maaneet are starting to get comfortable wiv each othe
Geets going 2 be in for a real suprise web she finds out hu her new boss is
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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wow awsome start yaar...loved it ...do add me to ur pm list !!!!
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Oh i loved your FF...full on masti...please send me a PM next time you update
 
Thanks
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loved this FF ...its so lively ...wonderful ..pls PM me when u update
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lovely update...
 
very nicely written...
 
Great going
 
continue sooon
 
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