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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: t_areeb

nice start,

but Annie really wants her to get experience regarding working OR she is setting her up for his bro ;)


No actually...Geeet had become depressed which was afftecting her work so Annie thought that if you had a change of atmosphere...it could bring the life back in her! Actually annie herself does not know that Pinky works in Khurana contructions! ðŸ˜Š
Posted: 12 years ago
Geet and  Pinky friend ? i mean best friend ??

Yash n Maan lines was niceee 

Loved do sonn soon :D

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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab update::
Can't w8 for maaneets meeting at the disc
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the parts 😊

pls add me in your pm list
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 3


The boys meet at the Temptation (Disc). (Yash, Maan, Adi, Arjun and Mohit)

Yash: Bahot dino baad mile...

Mohit: Haan yaar...kaam kuch zyada hi agaya hai aur dil bhi gayi hai holiday per!

Maan: KC main bhi bahot kaam hai...meri secretary ne job choddi...

Arjun: Kyun...bhai...secretary pe bahot pyaar araha hai!

Maan hits arjun's head playfully!

Yash: Tum log bhi naa...chalo andar chalte hai...

 

The boys are at the bar...

 

The girls arrive at Temptation. (Pinky, Geet, Meera and Dil)

 

Meera: Geet...kaisi hai tu? (Goes and hugs her)

Geet: Teekh hun...aur dil tum kaisi ho?

Dil: First Class...waise bhi main toh holiday per hut oh full on enjoy kar rahi hun. Tum kab ayi London se...aur annie kaha hai?

Geet: Aaj hi ayi hun...aur annie kam sambal rahi...at the moment new York main hain! Koi business deal ko...

Pinky: Geet...hum kaam ke bhare main baat karne disc main nahi ayehain...challo...

 

The girls are at the other side of the bar and they havn't noticed each other yet...

 

Geet: Ek minute...ek phone call attend karna hai...main aati hun! Tum sab tab drinks order karo.

Meera: Teekh hain...(Geet walks away) Yeh ladki bhi na...khudh bulaya hai aur khudh chali gayi hame chodkar.

 

Meanwhile the guys...

 

Mohit is looking somewhere else and notices dil...He taps on yash's shoulder.

 

Yash: Haan...bolo.

Mohit: Wo dil hai na...(he points at her) Aur wo jo uske saath kardi hai...wo tumari bahot achi dost hai na...(By this time everyone is looking at the girls who are standing there lost in their talking).

Maan: (Self thought ' Yeh meera aur disc main??)

Yash: Haan yaar...yeh log yaha kya kar rahe hai...I mean meera ko tho disc hi nahi pasand..

Mohit: Dil ko bhi nahi...I mean maine usne itni baar poocha aur use mere saath anekaliye mana kardiya.

Adi: Aur wo pinky...use tho bhi yeh sab nahi pasand!

Yash: Chalo jahke poochte hain...

Arjun: Haan aur itni saari beautiful girls waha hain...toh hum sab yaha kya kar rahe hain.

 

The boys walk over to the girls.

 

Yash: Meera...

Meera: Hi yash...what a pleasant surprise! (Hugs yash) ...and Maan lovely to see you..wo bhi itni dino baad..

Maan: Nice to see you too..

...

Mohit: Hi dil...holidays kaise chal rahe hai?

Dil: Bahot ache chal rahe hain! I hope kaam ka pressre thoda zyada nahi hain...

Mohit: Nahi teekh hain! Don't worry we will manage!

...

Pinky: Hi...adi sir!

Adi: Hi Pinky...aur office hours ke baad sirf Adi...

Pinky: Ok

...

Yash: Ek minute...tum log ko tho disc wisk nahi pasand na...tho tum log yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Meera: Actually...

Dil: Hamari ek friend ayi hai aur use nah kehna is impossible!

Mohit: Tho tum log ek friend ke liye razi hogaya disc anekeliya...toh tumari friend kaha hain?

Pinky: Ek phone call attend karne gayi hai...abhi aati hogi!

Arjun: Tumhari yeh friend ko tho milna hi hoga!

(Maan silently observing)

Yash: Waise yeh hai kaun?

Meera: Tum use dekhe shock hojage...purana rishta jo hain!

Yash: (oh no...x-girl-friend tho nahi hai na?) Meera smiling seeing the look on Yash's face.

Maan: Chalo table pe bahet ke bathe kar the hain!

Adi: Haan...chalo!

 

Precap: Geet's Entry

Part 4 

Edited by -maankimishty- - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome Part 
Loved all boys a Lines:D
ah my cute adi :DDD 
woww Precap geet Entry cant wait for the next one update facttt
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Posted: 12 years ago

AWESOME!!

Cant wait...how can Yash not know that his sister is in the country????

Aur wo uss ke ghar par kyun nahin reh rahi??

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: cue1

AWESOME!!

Cant wait...how can Yash not know that his sister is in the country????

Aur wo uss ke ghar par kyun nahin reh rahi??


I knew someone would ask this question...wait and watch...there are going to be too many suprises for my audience in this FF! ðŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update...
tx for the pm dear 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 update::
Loved the boys convo
Waiting for geets entry
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM