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my new ff Rab ne banadi jodi!!!! pt 5 @ 83 (Page 9)

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hey nice precap aasha... twist is good... waiting to see naitik jealous...

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Heyyy  asha  plz  continue  soon...precap  is  sooo  nice...naitik  ki  jalan  i  want  to c
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wooow sound good...we can see naitik jealousy...
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aweosme part really nyc part and precap intresting :)

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hey nice precap good twist waiting for next part
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precap looks interestingSmile...waiting to see naitik jealousWink
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Thnks 4 ur support @ commrnts plss  give ur longer comments.do pm me ur ideas @ those things u want 2 addBig smileBig smile

 

 

a new character, his name is nikhil,a classmate of akshi.nikhil loves akshi but he knws that she is in a relation with naitik.still he likes her.he never said this 2 akshi.but natik knws that.so he hates him.nw akshi is doing a play with nikhil in her college,its a lv story.leys see hw naitik would react 2 thisss

 

part 2

akshi @ Nikhil were  selected 4 the play that they were going 2 play in college day.nikhil was very happy 2 know this becoz he would get som time with akshi.akshi was also very exited becoz  it was the 1rst time she doing a play

after college time akshi was waiting 4 naitik (as usual).nikhil came 2 her

ni:hai akshara ji ap kisika intezar kar rahi hein kya?

Ak:nahi mein toh bas?.

Ni:akshara ji ap chahe toh mein apko drop karoon??

Ak:ji nahi,ap kyon takleef kar rahe hein?

Ni:akshara ji,mujhe bahuth khushi hogi agar ap mere sath...

Ak:I am so sorry phir kabhi...

Ni:teek hein,no problem

They shook hands,Nikhil was very happy 2 shake happy with akshi becos it was the 1rst time he doing this,so he continued talking by holding her hand 4 somemore time.akshi  didn't notice this as she was immersed in naitiks thought.after some time he left.she turned @ shocked 2 see naitik.she understood that he didn't like this.naitik went @ sat in car.she also got in @ he started driving,he didn't talk anything,she could see his anger in his eyes.she do some mishevious 2 make him react but he didn't.

They reached their lovers point.akshi was really tired,so she sat on bench.naitik was disturbed by college incident.akshi kept his head on his lap @ laid on the bench.he he ruffled her hair thinking about it.

Ak:apko patha hein vo Nikhil hein na play mein mere hero ban rahe hein.

Naitik didn't say anything she continued

Ak:nt,he was very sweet @ romantic aur acting ki baat hi kuch aur hein  hum dekhthe hi  rah jaayenge!!!!!

Nt:mujhe nahi lagtha,meine bi uski acting dekhi thi,bohuth hi bekar tha @ his jokes omg

Ak:but I like his jokes vo itna bura bi nahi hein

Nt:apki ye play kab hein aur ye practice kab tak chalega?

Ak:1 mahine tak,nt kalse shyam ko bi practice hoga isiliye shyam ko milna?.nahi?ho..payega

Nt:kya??????nahi ye chalega ap ye?play mat kigiye?

Ak:nt,ap ye kya keh rahe hein pehli bar mujhe isi mauka mila hein mujhe ye karna hein

Naitik gets angry @ he stood up 4m there

Nt:ak,frankly I don't like this,ap  ek great singer hein na toh ek classical no gayiye par ye nahi

Ak:nt,har sal yehi tih karthi hoon is sal mein kuch alag karna  chahthi hoon pls naitik,mein roz apse milne yahanm awoongi pas naitik?.

Nt: apko ek aur promise karni hongi

Ak:zaroor

Nt:ap kisi aur ladke se zyaada bat mat kigiye aur play mein zyaada touch?hug?etc nahi hona chahiye matlab bilkul nahi hona chahiye

Akshi understood wat he is aiming

Ak:toh ye baat hein mere naitik ji jal rahe hein!!!

Nt:mein mein kyon jaloon????mein ise keh rahe the ,vo?.kya hein na..aj kal ke ladjon mein zyaada barosa nahi karna chahiye

Ak:teek hein jaise apka hokum

Naitik become relieved

Ak:(putting her hands around his neck)nt, maan bi ligiye mujhe  Nikhil ke sath dekhkar kuch kuch huwa na????

Nt:vo?.nahiii?..ap ise kyin pooch rahe ho

Ak:mujhe na kuch jalne ki khushboo aagai isiliye!!!

Nt:(reducing th space between them)isse kabhi pyaar ki khushboo bi mahsoos kigiye!!!

Ak:chodiye na,ab hame chalna chahiye

Nt:zaroor challenge par usse  pehele thoda pyaar toh karne digiye

He tried 2 remove her duppatta that was around her neck 2 kiss her,she understood his madness @ tied 2 run buthe got the hold of her duppatta @ using that he pulled her @ akshi bumped over him@ they both fall on ground,akshi was lying over him, she removed her hairs that were on his face

Nt: u relly think u can run away 4m me(taking a turn 2 bring her under him)

Ak:naitik???

He 4ward his lips 2 her cheeks. akshi closed her eyes seeing this, naiik noticed this @ he stopped in his way  @ kept admiring her varing expressions in her face

Akshi was still smiling @ blushing expecting his presence,she waited 4  sometime  2 then he opened her eyes @ understood that naitik was playing with her

Nt:ak,kya apko bi vahi mahesoos ho rahi hein jo ab mujhe??

Ak:dhattt?..

She trieg 2 get up,he again pulled her @ showered her face with his soft lip @

 he let her go  

precap: naksh ki night drive

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Edited by ashamol - 13 June 2011 at 1:08am

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thank you asha mol for pm..TongueTongueTongue
i am first one to comment..Dancing.
i love to read ur ff..its so romantic Heart..Heart.Hearthoping to see more romantic scenes like this again..

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Edited by kingini - 08 June 2011 at 1:12am

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