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my new ff Rab ne banadi jodi!!!! pt 5 @ 83 (Page 15)

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Posted: 13 June 2011 at 2:09am | IP Logged
Nice promo asha waiting for part nd nice banner

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hai asha...vegam vaaa...
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Originally posted by kingini

hai asha...vegam vaaa...
banner adi poli...


njanum  athu thanne  yanu   parayunnathu. ardra  ..onnu   vegam  vaaaLOL
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Interesting promo asha.vegam updt cheyyu mole.stuti,the banner is awesome.luvd it.

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Originally posted by Hinakshara

Interesting promo asha.vegam updt cheyyu mole.stuti,the banner is awesome.luvd it.
              cheyam chechi, wil update soon
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nice bannerBig smile...interesting promoSmile...cont.soonTongue

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thnk  u 4 ur support
special thanks 4 stuti 4 such a lovely banner
part 3
 
 
next day evening,naitik came 2 pick up akshi early because of previous days incident.he become very happy seeing akshi coming alone 2wards him.they were about 2 leave wen nikhil called akshi 4m back @ said"akshara ji,professor told us,we should finalise our costumes 2day itself,we want go 2 that designer in our college bus,so we should leave now.naitik got angry @ he said he would drop akshi but nikhil told it was not possible becoz they had 2 finalise other things also.akshi agreed helplessly.before she could say anything,he went 4m there angrily
 
At night,naitik was still angry at akshi,but more than that his heart 4was yearning 2 meet her,he couldnt stop thinking about here.so he reached infront of her house.but his possessiveness was preventing him @ he was still standing outside.
there,akshi was also thinking about him.she felt very bad 4 naitik,she didnt misunderstand him becoz she knws that his p ossessiveness is his love,he also have same belief in her as much as she have
she came 2 terrace @ saw naitik ,he was lying over the car(front part) .she understood his feelings 4m his condition.she went 2 her room @set pillows in her bed so that others would feel she was sleeping there.
she reached near his car @ make a sound by knocking,he opened his eyes,firstly his heart yearned 2 hugg her but he controlled himself @make a fake anger in his face
ak:bas bas natak karne ki zaroorat nahi hein,gussa toh mujhe honi chahiye
naitik couldnt take it any more @ he pulled her in 2 a hugg.she felt his tears in her back
nt:(still hugging)ak,mujhe pls galath mat samajhna,ap kabi ye mat sochiyega ki mujhe ap par barosa nahi hein,pata nahi kyon koi b apke pass aa jata toh mujhse bardash nahi hota,apko uss vakth bahuth bura laga hoga na?
ak:nt,bura toh  mujhe ab lag rahi hein,un vakthom par mein apke ankhon mein gussa ya posessiveness nahi dekhthi balki apke pyaar aur uska pagalpan dekthi hoon,isiliye mujhe apke kisibi baat ka bura nahi laga
he rested his lips on her forehead,luv u so much
ak:same 22 uu
nt::aj ham sath mein vakth nahi bitaya toh chaliye hum ek drive par chalthe hein
ak::nahi nahi naitik..kisiko pata chal gaya toh??ap gayiye hum kal mithe hein...
nt:(holding her hand)ak,mein apke sath kuch vakth batana chahatha hoon.(bringing his face closer 2 her)ap mere sath ayengi hein na???
akshi nodded 2 say yes
he kissed her @ then took her hand @ walked her 2 his car.as soon as they got in he started driving
ak:nt,hum kaham jaa rahe hein??
nt:hm...secret...top secret...(looking at her)
ak::nt,mujhe toh bahuth dar lag rahi hein,kisiko pata chal gaya na toh sab gadbad hoga
nt:(placing his hands above her)ak,ap ye mat sochiye,chahe toh mere baare mein soch sakthe hein!!!
akshi smiled hearing this,after an hour of journey they reached their location.
nt:ap apni ankhen bandh kigiye
he said @ covered her eyes.he led her 2 a beach with no other people
nt:ak ab ap apni ankhen kholiye
she opened her eyes @ it revealed a romantic  ocean back ground.
akshi start walking 4ward,she was really enjoying this atmosphere,naitik still stood near the car @ was admiring her,akshi didnt notice this.he came behind her @ grabbed her 4m waist @ wispered pointing 2wards sky
nt:u r so much prettier than those stars
akshi blushed ,he planted a kiss on her forehead inturn she gave a tight hug 2 him
nt:ak,ap mujhse ye nahi puchengi ki mein apko yaham kyon lekar aaya???
ak:(smiling)mujhe pata chal gaya hein..
nt:kaise??
ak:(placing her head near his heart)isse...
nt::toh batayiye mere dil apse kya kaha???
ak:(raising his head but still hugging)ye hi ki is sagar ki tarah apke pyaar ka bi koi andh(end)nahi hein
naitik was ultrasurprised 2 hear this 4m her
nt:toh jawab digiye!!!
ak:(hiding her face in his chest)de diya,chahe toh mahsoos kigiye!!
naitik hold her even tight @ closed his eyes @ they stood like this 4 some time,aftersometime he loosend his grip
nt:mein ne bi pad liya!!
ak::kya???
nt;(naughtily)apki dil mujhse kaha ki apko mujhe ek kiss dene ki mann kar rahi hein...
ak:(pinching his hands)nt...apko meri dil ki bhasha samajh mein nahi aaya...
nt::apki dil mujhse kaha ki ap mere bina nahi jee sathi ,har pal ap mereliye tadapthe hein,apke pyaar ka hadh ap bi nahi jaanti hein...aur..
akshi s eyes become wet with tears of joy.she didnt understand wat 2 say,she simply stood there
nt::toh kahiye vo 3 shabd jiskeliye mein har pal tadaptha hoon...
akshi smiles @ tries 2 ran but he hold her 4m wrist
nt:: "" jab tak zinda hai
             chahenge  tumhe(coming infront of
                                                              her)
             har duwa mein rab se
             mangenge tumhe(raising his hands 2wards sky(god) then pointing 2wards akshi)
            tum hame nahi
             chathe toh koi baat nahi (placing his hand on his heart)
            aisa bina kuch kahe
            jaane nahi denge  tumhe (sitting on his knees)
akshi eyes again filled with tears,he was still on his knees,she came 4ward,he hugged her 4m her waist,akshi make him stand ,she placed her hands on his cheeks@ looked in 2 his eyes
 
TUJHE SURO KA RAG KAHOON
YA APNI DIL KI AAWAZ KAHOON
TUJHE MOHABBAT KA BANA HUWA TAJ KAHOON
YA APNE DIL KA JAZBAT KAHOON
TUJHE KUCHH BHI KAHOON WO KAM HAI
TUJHE PANE KI JID ME
MERI AANKHE NAM HAI
NA JANE MUJHE KYA GAM HAI
TERI YADO KE SAHARE JI RAHA HOON
WO KYA KAM HAI
NA JANE YE DIL
TUJH SE KEHNE SE KYON DARTI HAI
YE PAGLI SIRF TUMSE MOHABBAT KARTI HAI
SIRF TUMSE MOHBBAT KARTI HAI
 
akshi closed his eyes with her hands @ softly kissed on her both cheeks ,he enjoyed this @ reciprocated 2 her.naksh was lost in eachothers  eyes @ they were in their own world.suddently a wave crept in 2 their legs bringing them back 2 their senses @ akshi back 2 her tension roop
ak:nt,ab hame chalna chahiye,bahuth der ho gayi hein
nt::ak,thodi der aur,chaliye hum thoda walk karthe hein aur phir vapas chalenge,pls...(with a cute,curious face)
akshi couldnt deny him seiin his face
 
they started walking,nt was not able 2 take his eyes 4m her,he slowly touched her left hand fingures with his right hand @ crossed it 2gether,akshi understood this,she locked her hands around him @ placed her head on his shoulder,naitik was really exited @ placed his hands on her waist. @ they walked 4 a long time,this time not hiding their love 4 each other
 
they started driving back,both were smiling madly
nt::ak,thoda pass ayiye na
akshi kept her head on his chest @ closed her eyes
ak::ab teek hein??
nt::haan...isse zyada mujhe kuch kya chahiye!!!
suddently naitik stopped the car applying a sudden break,akshara was about 2 fall but she managed
ak:nt,kya huwa???
nt::ak,vaham...
akshara looked 2wrd @ her expressions all changed in 2 a frightened face
 
 
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Edited by ashamol - 16 June 2011 at 2:27am

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woww... loved it.. very cute and lovely part
the proposing scene was awesome

thanx for the pm!!!!


Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 16 June 2011 at 1:55am

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