SS: Forbidden Thoughts ~MG~ Part 4 Page 21 ~ 6/4 - Page 6

nice dialogues and like the way of giving past and present together

Its confusing. . . . They love each other then y they engaged wid other persons????

i dont understand one thig...they seem to be loving each other...but them how come they r already engaged to other persons...i cnt click the like button...there is some problem...but do count me in your like list...continue soon n thnx for the pm...

it is awesome but bit confuse. they love each other and engaged to others😕 but i wil wait till u releive the truth.

otherwise it is really interesting and intense😆😉

thnks for pm and pls update soon

Lovely update...it was amazing...😃

Just luv how you've written the past and present together...👍🏼

From this part, u can clearly tell that they love each other from a young age but perhaps family pressures have caused them to get engaged to other people... 😕 just my thoughts...

plz cont soon and thnx for the pm!! 

congrats on new ff...
part 1
wow nice start...
Maan and Geet are lost in some place and Geet is engaged to someone else?
thanks for the pm...

awsome

part 2
wow lovely...
their flashbacks are so cute and lovely...
they are engaged to others...
wonder who...
cont soon...

awesome ... superb ...

interesting and intense update .loved it .