Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

Dil Dosti Dance-FF-Part 21 - page 36! :) (Page 8)

MAYURFAN001 IF-Rockerz
MAYURFAN001
MAYURFAN001

Joined: 03 July 2009
Posts: 5196

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
Hey.. your FF is awesome.. Please update next part .. I cant wait to know what happens.. but a few thoughts that came to my mind
 
How did Rey become a plumber so quickly?
I am waitng to know how that happened in 5 mins.. bcause at 7:45pm, he was in the corridor waiting. At 7:50, kriya's mom calls.. and she opens the door with the phone in Hand.. and rey is standing in a pumber suit
Let me know
 
Thanks

.Anamika. IF-Dazzler
.Anamika.
.Anamika.

Joined: 05 June 2006
Posts: 4740

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
Oh dear Lord...BLOOPER ALERT!! haha! Thanks for pointing that out! I live 2 minutes away from my campus so let's just assume Kria does too! hehe! And Rey's just super-man-ish like that! LOL But on a serious note, sorry about that! I should have checked it through. Thanks for pointing it out!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

CoffeeAddict

.Anamika. IF-Dazzler
.Anamika.
.Anamika.

Joined: 05 June 2006
Posts: 4740

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Part 7 -
 
Kria sat in the kitchen, grasping her cordless phone firmly. If Rey tried to touch her again, she would throw the laal mirch on his face and call her mommy.

"Reyaansh Singhania?! Are you done yet? Shower fix karna hai! Pura washroom nahin!" screamed an irritated Kria. She had her Ecology textbook open for the past 10 minutes. But her brain had stopped functioning after Rey had picked up her. She realized that she had to maintain a 5 meter distance from him, or else she'd go crazy.

Rey looked around her washroom to look for anything that would help him figure out what she liked. He pressed speed dial on his phone. "Vikki? Listen. I'm in her washroom. Make sure you turn the water on in exactly 10 minutes okay?" Vikki's grunt came in response.

Rey looked up to see Kria standing there.

"Who're you talking to?" She narrowed her eyes.

"Noone!" 

"Accha? Toh ladki ki tarah sharma kyun rahe ho?" He's probably talking to another girl.

"I was talking to –" Rey started.

"Another girl? Kria rolled her eyes.

"Vikki, actually." Rey smiled. Someone's jealous.

Kria looked around, flustered. Damn it. He wasn't lying.

She cleared her throat. "So are you done?"

"Huh? Yeah, I'm done talking to him."

"Done with my shower I meant." Kria said.

"Oh yeah. Just a few more minutes." Kria raised her eyebrows.

"So tell my why a rich boy like you works as a plumber?"

"Uh..part time job, Kria! Gosh! Ms.Dehradhoon. Mumbai mein kaam karna padta hai!"

"Oh really?! And what "kaam" have you been doing for the past 15 minutes? And by the way, you're beside the sink, not the shower." Rey looked at her and blinked.

"Oh, I was just..." He walked back into the shower. "Could you pass me the tool box please? I just have one more screw to fix this." Kria rolled her eyes. What a liar. She grabbed the tool box and pushed it towards his face.

"Yeh lo." Kria thrust it on his face.

"Kria! Aaraam se!" Rey chuckled. He looked at his watch. Oh damn, he thought, the shower would start working soon. He had to get her away.

"Kria move."

"Excuse me? This is my bathroom."

"I know, Ms. Baat-cutter par yeh mardo ka kaam hai. If something comes out, it will hit you."

"Mardo ka kaam?!" Kria gaped at him. She stepped into the bathroom with him and pushed him slightly.

"Kria?! Kya?! Get out of here!" Rey looked up at the shower, a little scared.

"This is MY bathroom, Reyaansh. And what do you think? Girls can't be plumbers?" Kria raised her voice slightly.

"Um. Honestly? No." Rey looked up at the shower. "Now get out of here, Kria!"

"I won't!" Kria put her hands on her waist. She was not going to move. "In fact, you need to move! I can probably fix this is a minute!" Kria reached out her hand to grab the shower while Rey's hand followed her. Rey pushed her away just on time to not get her wet.

The water came rushing out of the shower, drenching Rey completely. Kria looked at him with her mouth open before she started giggling.

"Shower fix karne key liye aye the?! Aur - " Kria clasped her mouth to suppress the laughter.

"You're laughing?!" Rey looked at her in disbelief. Kria shook her head, continuing to laugh. "This is all your fault by the way! I was trying to save you from the water."

Kria looked at his wet clothes and hair and continued laughing.

"Kria?!" Rey looked at her, all dry and safe from the cold water, irritated. He grabbed her hand and pulled her towards him, wrapping his arms around her so she couldn't escape.

Kria screamed. The water was freezing cold. "REYYY!? Turn it off! It's cold!"

"Nahin nahin! Ab kya hua? Hasso hasso!" Rey refused to let go of her.

Kria stood there shivering, trying to pull his hands away. Rey stepped closer to her, slowly letting go of her hands. Kria looked down at the floor as the water falling from his face fell on her face. Rey looked down at her. The strong and bratty Baat-cutter seemed so small and vulnerable now. He reached out and slowly turned the knob to turn the shower off.

Kria was still standing there, refusing to move. Rey stepped in front of her and wiped beads of water off of her face. His cold touch made her shiver even more.

"Kria?" Rey looked down at her. Ms. Baat-Cutter had nothing to say for once. "I really like you. I know you think I'm some loser that was born with everything but just –"

"KRIIIRRRAAA! Where are you, beta?"

Kria's eye's widened. She pushed Rey away hastily and grabbed a towel. She walked out into her bedroom, drying her hair furiously. What the hell just happened, girl?! You were in a bathroom with an almost stranger! Forget bathroom, in a freaking shower!! How was she going to explain this to her mother?

"Kria?" Her mother walked in looking astonished. "Why are you wet? And how's the shower? Did the plumber come?"

"Woh – uh – He's in the – "

"I'm here, ma'am." Rey came out, drenching the floor. Kria's mother looked from her daughter to the boy, her eyes demanding an explanation.

 "Uh - My name's Reyaansh. I study with Kria." Rey offered.  

"Kria? You called a BOY over? Why are you two wet?! Come here right now!" Kria shot Rey a murderous look. This was entirely his fault. Everything. She was going to kill him. If she survived that is. She gulped and walked slowly towards her mother.

"Mumma..."

"Aunty!" Rey walked up to her quickly and gave her his dazzling smile that always worked.

"Mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni! Get out before I call your parents!" She glared at him, bulging her eyes out. She really is a 'Jhansi si Rani', thought Rey.

"Ma'am, I'm the plumber! I fixed your shower! Kria was helping me with the toolbox and she got wet in return." Kria's mother looked at her daughter who quickly nodded in response.

"We go to the same school, Mumma!"

"Yes! I work as a plumber part time!" Rey smiled again, looking at Kria. "Actually, a friend of mine got this job but when I found out I was helping Kria, I decided to cover for him tonight."

Smriti didn't look impressed with the story. "Kria, go change. And give –" Rey looked at her, repeating his name. "Reyaansh a towel, please. I'll set the dinner." Kria's mother turned around to leave.

Kria grabbed a pillow from her bed and started whacking the living daylight out of this boy.

"Stupid!" Kria hit him with her pillow.

"OW! Kria! What?!"

"IDIOT!"

" Kria!! Your mom is going to come back and I don't – Ouch! Kria! – What?!"

"Duffer! Ullu!"

"Ullu? What's that?" Rey looked at her, confused.

"It means you're STUPID!" Kria took her Management textbook and smacked it hard on his hand.

"OWW! That actually hurts, Kria!" Rey rubbed his sore arm.

"Good." But she wasn't done. She picked up a vase and held it up above her head.

"Kria?! That's not even funny!" Rey rushed to her side, pulling her arm down gently. A strand of hair danced around her eye which she furiously blew away.

"And what you did with my mom was? Not! 'I'm the plumber! I fixed your shower! Kria was helping me.'" Kria imitated him with a deep voice. Rey chuckled at her voice. "You think this is FUNNY?! I might not be able to get out of this house ever again!"

"Kria, you sound really cute like that." Kria's temper melted away just like that. Whyy?! Kria, hit him hard with the vase!! Really hard!!

Kria threw a towel at his face and walked into her bathroom, changing into a new set of clothes.

"Oye! Listen!" Rey went to grab her hand, but Kria had learned the tricks by now. She dodged it expertly, moving away into the bathroom.

***********************************************

Kria walked out of her bathroom, wearing a simple pink dress. It was not her colour, he style or anything. It's NOT to impress Rey, either, she told herself. She blow dried her hair quickly and put some serum into it. She reached for the lip gloss, picked it up and stared at it before putting it back down. Why should she care about impressing anyone? She walked out of the bathroom.

"Suno – "  Kria looked around her room. Where was this boy now?

***********************************************

Kria walked into her kitchen, shocked to hearing her mother giggling. What happened?!

"Maa?"

"Kria! There you are. Come! Dinner's getting cold. Reyaansh, why don't you stay over for dinner?"

Kria looked at her mother in shock. Just a few minutes ago she wanted to kill this guy, now she's asking him to stay for dinner. What was wrong with her?!

"Oh, no aunty! I need to go now! I have a lot of Statistics homework to do." Rey said with that dazzling smile of his. Kria rolled her eyes. Yeah, more like a lot of homework to copy from Vikki.

"No! I'm sure Kria has to do it too!"

"Huh? N- Nahin, mamma! I'm done!" Kria stuttered. She hadn't touched it yet. She hated lying to her mother.

"Even better! She can help you!"

"What! No! I don't want to help him!" Kria looked at him disgusted while Rey put on his best smile.

"Kria! This is not how I've taught you to behave! Now sit down and eat your dinner." Kria shot Rey an evil look and sat down as far away as she could. She sat through the whole dinner watching Rey, the Dazzler, dazzle away his charm at his mother. She could not believe this boy.

**********************************************

Rey got up after finishing his dinner and thanked Kria's mother for the great dinner. He looked over at Kria and motioned her. Kria walked with him to the door while her mother finished cleaning up the table.

"Kria, I'll return your clothes tommrow at school?" Rey looked at her.

"What? My – " Kria looked him up and down . "WHO gave you my clothes?!"

"Your mom...It's okay, Kria, I take a bath. In fact we just had a shower together." He laughed.

Kria looked disgusted. She whacked him in response. "Eww...Gross! Don't ever say that again! Especially not in public!"

"Um...Excuse me, Ms. Dehradhoon. I think this would do more damage to my reputation than yours. Consider yourself lucky." Rey smiled and widened his arms.

Kria gave him a fake smile. "Bye." She went to close the door when he stopped her.

"Kria, what I said in the shower today..." Kria looked up at him. "I did mean it." Kria looked at him, not knowing what to say. "Uhh -  I cut your pipe so you'd have to call a plumber and I wanted to ask you – " He waited for her to protest but nothing came. He smiled. "On a date?" Kria could feel her pulse increasing. She looked away, trying to calm herself down.

"KRIA!? Is Rey gone?" Her mother's voice made her jump. She pushed Rey out of her doorway and slammed the door. She rested her forehead on the closed door.

"I wish, Rey..." She muttered to herself.

"Your wish is my command!" Came an amused voice. Kria's eyes widened. She ran into the kitchen, her heart racing. She did not just do that! This was bad. This was really bad!

**********************************************

The following 39 member(s) liked the above post:

switangel27sups8888KRSSaddictMuks20upekaAKSHATA3110SSsanasonuVirManandJeeVisoumyaksharuKRpinkypanrocksjulzshiningstarzkatiehiwataridmg_roks_antaradaisydee425anniemathiaskrSaumya_D3100littledevils-Awantika--veena.shona-maanujaanuCoffeeAddictRadiantTreasurewithout-fathomKrishnaluv94--jiya--Hot.Pink.Heelssukanyaayogini64bluelashesZehnaseeb.luv_arshacrazyskymjht_onebrainychild92sweetshine..DamonCrazy..DilBoleRikara

.Anamika. IF-Dazzler
.Anamika.
.Anamika.

Joined: 05 June 2006
Posts: 4740

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 10:23pm | IP Logged
Okaayyy so that's Part 7 peeps! And this is SIGNIFICANTLY longer than the last part so no complains! hehe! So hopefully y'all like this one! This is personally my fav part so far!
 
Cheers!
-Anamika

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Muks20

upeka Groupbie
upeka
upeka

Joined: 12 May 2011
Posts: 74

Posted: 02 June 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
very nice Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

.Anamika.

mayurlover4eva IF-Rockerz
mayurlover4eva
mayurlover4eva

Joined: 14 June 2010
Posts: 8086

Posted: 03 June 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
thanks for the long updateHug
loved the part where they are in the shower together LOL
can't wait for the next part -- their date!! Day Dreaming
update soon xxxBlushing

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

.Anamika.

100littledevils IF-Dazzler
100littledevils
100littledevils

Joined: 13 April 2011
Posts: 4308

Posted: 03 June 2011 at 4:10am | IP Logged
awww...awesome!!!Blushing lol...loved it. really really loved it !!!
loved rey's line - infact we just had a shower together!!BlushingROFL hahaha...
plz update soon!!!!! can't wait for next part!!!Embarrassed

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

.Anamika.

sweetapple2995 Goldie
sweetapple2995
sweetapple2995

Joined: 11 February 2011
Posts: 1531

Posted: 03 June 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
wow i loved that! especially at the end where rey asks her out haha that was very smart plz continue soon! Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

.Anamika.

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
~*Fan Fic-Tu Muskura*~ *LAST PART, PART 16 PG 93*

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 103 104

Author: Maaneet-Fan   Replies: 829   Views: 215756

Maaneet-Fan 829 215756 11 December 2013 at 7:06am by anonymous.me
CLOSED

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 32 33

Author: luvabbybaby   Replies: 262   Views: 77709

luvabbybaby 262 77709 08 July 2012 at 8:11pm by Sodapop313
AR OS Love Blossoms PAGE 3 || Note PAGE 7

2 3 4 5 6 7

Author: angelic_angel   Replies: 54   Views: 40210

angelic_angel 54 40210 12 May 2011 at 11:08am by swamii92
A Walk On The Beach..-AR[New Page Link: Page 150]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 146 147

Author: Munchkin.   Replies: 1174   Views: 181087

Munchkin. 1174 181087 10 April 2011 at 8:10am by Riddss
-Lost AR- Part 1 Page 1 Note: Page 4 7/31/2009

2 3 4

Author: Veiledbeauty   Replies: 29   Views: 20789

Veiledbeauty 29 20789 31 July 2009 at 8:04pm by Veiledbeauty

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index