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Phir Bhi Dil Hai Hindustani-UPD p.18 9/20 (Page 5)

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nice job so far! continue soon!
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Plz continue soon your fan-fic is to tally awesome can't wait to read the next part. Smile Clap
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"GOOD MORNING FUTURE CHACHU!!!" The high-pitched voiced reached Angad's ears and awoke him with a start. Highly annoyed, and still reeling from the unwelcome wake-up call, his groggy eyes scanned the room for the voice's owner. He found a gleeful Adi staring down at him triumphantly. Angad's mouth twisted into a scowl and his eyes narrowed. He opened his mouth to say something but stopped short when he saw a pair of arms encircling Adi's shoulders and a slender head resting atop Adi's. He looked up and saw a similar gleeful expression on Kripa's face. She had one eyebrow raised and was smirking down on him, highly amused. Angad sat up on his bed and waited for an explanation. Just then, Mishti called Adi and he scampered out of the room. Instantly, Kripa's face turned anxious. Now it was Angad's turn to smirk. He got up and started towards her. Wide-eyed, Kripa backed up and started mumbling, "M-m-mamma and papa were calling you downstairs; there's a small party." She turned on her heel and tried to dash out of the room, but Angad caught her wrist and pulled her back. "Next time, I can do without the wake-up call," he said, angrily. She gulped and nodded. He let go of her wrist and she ran out. Angad went into the bathroom to change.

Kripa rubbed her wrist; she could still feel Angad's grip on it. When he'd touched her, her heart had skipped a beat. She correlated that fact with her being scared, not because she felt something for him. She had not imagined Angad being so domineering, so handsome, so overbearing. She always assumed that he would be lacking something, otherwise why would a successful young man like himself settle for an arranged marriage? Her thoughts were interrupted by Naina, whom she bumped into on her way to her room. "Sorry, aunty" Kripa said, slightly embarrassed. Naina just smiled at her. "Aunty nahi beta, soon you can call me mummy" Color rose to Kripa's cheeks and she looked away. Naina smiled wider, and led Kripa into her room. "I have a gift for you, beta" She presented Kripa with a beautiful sari. Kripa was awed. She had worn saris before, but never one this beautiful. She touched Naina's feet and thanked her. "Not me, Kripa. Angad designed this himself, especially for you. I asked him to." Kripa smiled shyly and left the room. On her way out, she bumped into Angad, who was in his undershirt, and had a towel wrapped around his waist. Her eyes widened at his muscular arms and then she looked away, embarrassed. She looked back up to him and found him flashing her his haughty smirk. Kripa raised one eyebrow at him, and then rolled her eyes before walking away in haste. As she walked away, an idea formed in her mind, and she smiled devilishly.

The party was in full swing as some of the Sharmas' and Khannas' close family friends came together for the first time in many years. The elders chatted away, catching up on old times. Some of them were even grandparents, and so there were a lot of small kids running around the place, creating a ruckus. The younger generation was gathered around the hall, chatting. All the women were eyeing Angad, who looked quite stunning in a dark green dress shirt and black pants. Everyone discussed how lucky Kripa was to get such a handome, successful husband. The men gathered around Angad and talked about the usual: politics, economy, etc. At last, Kripa was ready and entered the living room. All eyes, wide open, stopped on her. Everyone hushed. Kripa wore the sari Naina had gifted her: forest green with intricate embroidery in silver thread. Her hair and make up was simple: her hair left down in natural soft waves past her shoulders, and minimal make up. She wore simple silver jewelry to match the embroidery on her sari. Angad turned and was taken aback. Sure he'd worked with supermodels, but he was never fazed by their looks or good physique. Kripa, however, simply took his breath away by her simplicity. He blinked a few times, but then looked away abruptly; he didn't want anyone to guess what had just hit him. What was amusing, though, was that Angad and Kripa were matching. His shirt and her sari were almost the exact shade. This unplanned incident surprised and embarrassed them both. Kripa quickly went over to her friends and began chatting away.

Soon, they all started playing antakshari. Angad, of course had no idea how to play. He just watched, a bit confused as one after another, everyone sang a song. The teams were, as usual, males against females, and the current score was tied. It was Kripa's turn to sing, and their team had ended up with "K". Kripa sang the song "Kasam ki kasam" from "Mein Prem Ki Diwani Hoon".

Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se
Humko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se
Humko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse
Ab Yeh Pyaar Na Hoga Phir Humse
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se
Humko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse

Log Kehte Hai Paagal Hoon Main Yeh Bhi Na Jaanu
Dil Lutaya Hai Maine Ab Kisi Ki Na Maanu
Chain Dekar Ke Maine Bechainiya Yeh Li Hai
Neende Udakar Ke Maine Tumse Wafaye Ki Hai
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se
Jee Rahe The Hum Tere Dum Se
Ab Yeh Pyaar Na Hoga Phir Humse
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se
Humko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse

Kuch Ishaaron Mein Tumne Humse Jo Yeh Kahan Hai
Ab Yakin Aa Raha Hai Tumko Bhi Kuch Hua Hai
Kyon Tumko Dekhte Hain Kya Dil Mein Sochte Hai
Toofan Jo Uth Raha Hai Hum Usko Rokte Hai
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se
Yeh Milan Hai Sanam Ka Sanam Se
Ab Yeh Pyaar Na Hoga Phir Humse
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah
Kasam Ki Kasam
Haan Kasam Yeh Kasam
Di Kasam Le Kasam
Haan Kasam Kasam
Kasam Kasam
Kasam Ki Kasam Hai Kasam Se
Humko Pyaar Hai Sirf Tumse
Ab Yeh Pyaar Na Hoga Phir Humse
Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah


After she finished, she looked around to see everyone impressed by her song. She looked at Angad whose jaw had dropped. She sung beautifully. Kripa smiled at him, evilly, and handed him the mic. "Ab tumhari baari" she said. Angad was dumbfounded. He couldn't sing to save his life. Moreover, a Hindi song was way out of question. He looked at her, panic rising to his face. He realized Kripa had done this on purpose. He raised the mic to his lips. "muhjey ganuh nahie aati" he said in broken Hindi. This amused everyone, and they laughed. Anger shot through Angad and he stormed out of the room, and up the stairs. Kripa had not anticipated this kind of reaction from him, and it scared her. The party continued, but Kripa felt guilty for embarrassing Angad the way she did. She decided to apologize and also take him some dinner. She put everything on a plate, poured him a drink, and then on another plate spelled out "S-O-R-R-Y" from round candies. She took the tray upstairs, and stood in front of Angad's room. After a few moments of hesitation, she knocked. After receiving no reponse, she slowly opened the door, and found Angad looking out the window. "Angad?" she said softly. She placed the tray on a side table, and went to him. "Angad, actually, mein tumse sorry kehne aayi hoon…" she began. Before she could continue, Angad whipped around and pushed her against the wall. "SHUTUP" he yelled. "Don't you dare say another word" Kripa was now extremely afraid. She didn't know that Angad could be so violent in his reactions. Kripa tried to inch away but Angad caught hold of her shoulders again, harshly. "I'm saying this once, and once only. After we're married, none of this bullshit will occur. Do you understand? I should have expected this, what can one expect from you middle class people…" Before he could go on, Angad felt a sharp sting against his face. Stunned he looked up and saw an enraged Kripa in front of him.
"what the hell did you say? Middle class people? Who in the world are you to label ANYONE? Sure we're not swimming in riches like you folks, but at least we have our own identity. Tumhare jaise logon ko kya kehte hai maloom hai? Dhobi ka kutta! Na ghar ka na ghat ka! Bloody hell, you don't even know who you are. You think those English people accept you as one of them? Think again. To them you will always be an Indian; an Indian suffering from an identity crisis." She spat. "And as far as marriage goes, don't you for a second think that I'm a subservient woman with no opinion or say in anything. And at this point, don't even go as far as marriage, because YOU are not worthy enough." Saying this she ran out of the room into hers. Angad slowly sat on the bed. He had NEVER been talked to like that. He felt angry, ashamed, sorry, guilty all at the same time. He laid down for sometime, looking out of the window. He then got up to change, but the tray on the side-table caught his eye. He saw the plate of food, and the second one that contained the candies. He smiled slightly at Kripa's gesture. He knew he had to apologize, but his ego prevented him from doing so.



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I'd love some feedback guys...love it? hate it? suggestions?
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hey,
i just read the whole story i think its gr8 , love it too bits. pls cont soon and dont make us wait long
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