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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 6:13am | IP Logged
wonderful update sis
loved their bond as family is adorable
thanks habibti for the pm

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 7:41am | IP Logged
edited my post...!!!

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
awww..dey r all so adorable..loved da breaksfast scene...Embarrassed
oh man no dis cnt b happening...prem is leading towards da wrong path...ergghhh...he is quite sensible enough to think whts good n whts bad for him n their famillyConfused

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loads of love

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 8:41am | IP Logged
hello fiza jii...Smile

kaise hai ap...?Wink

kab aaraha hai update./...
hum buhat intezar mai hai...LOL

yar aaj tu maza ayagaya office mai...ROFL
kitna tu tang kerti hu turtle ko...ROFL

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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 9:35am | IP Logged
yaar u know im nt well...i might update 2morrow
turlt bhi kuch kam nhi hai
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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 10:00am | IP Logged

CHAPTER:3

PREM: bhai woh sab log…aj club ja rahy hain

Nupur: TU…..

Prem: tu …woh…can I go ….too…he asked playing with his food

Mayank:  han….

Prem: really..

Mayank: but …im trusting u …..ok

Prem: thnks bhai…..

…..

Adi( friend): wah this is a miracle…u an at the club …waooo

Prem: whts a miracle…..whn I want to im here …whn I didn't I wasn't ….wht did u thought

Adi: oki fine im nt saying ur child…..

Prem: u better not…..he snatch the cigrate again

Adi: aby yeah woh wali nhi hai rukh….

Prem: ab yeah woh wali kaun se hoti hai…..he strt smooking  it ….

Adi: chal lets enjoy ..

Thy went to the dance floor n party whole night …..geting tired he reached home at 4 in morning ….

Nupur: agay tum…..

Prem: bhabi ap abhi tak …why r u awken

Nupur: ur car voice woke me…..jao rest…..

………………

Nupur: yeah prem abhi tak utha kyun nhi

Maynk: rukh mein dkehta hoon….

Prem…wake up ..cologe nhi jana hai

Prem: bhai im nt feeling like ….ajeeb se tabiyat horahi hai

Mayank: y….did u drunk yesterday…he asked soflty

Prem: no bhai…mayb so much of noise…/.wiered lights….

Mayank : he chukled….oki mickey mouse…take rest…

prem: bhaiii….

Adi: oye college aa…admit cards mil rahy hain….aur humara khadoos dean tera mjhy nhi day raha …acha ata hoon….

He went down n was stoped by angels….

Raj: ap kaha ja rahy hoo

Rahaul: jab hum bemar hotay hain tu ghar mein rahty hai medicine laytay hain rest kertay hain

He smiled

Prem: I know bacha…but I need to meray teacher ny bolaya ..kya kero

He hited his head with hand

Raj: uff ap  kay teacher,,,but cum soon..

Prem: oki ….

Bhabi im going cologe..she was abt to speak he cuted ..jaldi ajoo ga..aur garmi mein nhi ghoomo ga

She smiled n patted his cheek

Bye….

Adi: kya hua tujhy

Pream: yaar sir mein dard horaha hai…..yeah day mjhy….he took the cigrate

Adi: oye muftaa…

Prem: he took out money from wallet n gave him….after smoking  for sumtme…..yar yeah is k taste itna ajeeb kyun hai….

Adi: kyun tjhy kal wali chaiy

Prem: han….

Adi: oki…here u go…..

He took n find a bit relef to his headache n strain

Prem: thts way better

Adi: very good meray yaar….y u didn't bought a pack ..

Prem: no way bhai ya bhaibi ko pata chal gay tu un ko bora lagy ga

Adi: phir raat mein …how ur gonna study …need fresh mind u must b needing it……

Prem: hmmm…yeah bhi hai

Adi: hide it yaar….if u want bata..cause yeah cheez..market mein nhi milti…

Prem: y…

Adi: its special…samhja ker

Prem: wht…acha yeah lay ..mjhy la ker day…

Days passed n he continue finding relief in the special brand of cigrate…though th wasn't cigrate …it was cigrate filled with durgs…..he was completely comfortable n unaware of the addiction he has gone into…..a complete drug addict he was now…..his craving was increase n so was the demand n threshold of his desire….as so as the amount of money he was spending on it….

His behavior was changing he ws being impulsive day by day …nupur strt worring for him …as he was off home always in hs room…initially she though due to examination but thn its strted worring her

Nupur: prem tu thik hai na….aur yeah smell kiss cheez ki hai

Prem: woh bhabi…woh adi aaya tha na..he smokes tu us ki hai…

Rahaul: per chahooo…yeah tu ap k pas se bhi arahi hia

Prem: ary champ…woh tu yaha tha is lyan…acha tu jao mjhy parhna hai

Raj: hum ap se naraz hai ap bulkily bhi humary sath time spend nhi kertay…

Prem: papers k bad….bhabi…woh I need sum money…

Nupur: kitni….

Prem: 5000…

Nupur: for wht

Prem: woh I need to spend in on sum project…

Nupur: abh last wk tu ur brother gave u 10000…where tht went

Prem: woh han..i forgot to tell u ..i lost my wallet ..bhai ko maat batana he will think im nt responsible…

Nupur: oki…but b careful prem…I'll gave u

….

Nupur: mayank…prem aj kal kuch ajeeb behave ker rah hai

He was working on laptop

Myanak: as in

Nupur: irrated…bacho k sath bhi time spend nhi kerta ..na mjhy se baat kerta hai…din bahr room mein raht hi ya coologe

Mayank: finally semester hai…its tough..busy hoga …

Nupur: aur yeah mjhy adi bhi nhi passand..smoke kerta hia

Mayank: he smile…prem se pocha tha…did he

Nupur: no….but pata nhi…woh mjhy se jhot tu nhi bolay ga…haina

Mayank: hmm….u want me to talk to him….she noded in no… cut his expenses…..watch them….n don't worry dear….sab thik hai..

Nupur ….hmm I hope so….

He turned to her lost figure…..n pecked her..mayankkk…

Mayank: u look so cute like this….he said incontly..n slamed by a pillow…

 

Rahaul: daooo..

Mayank: chaloo agay tumahr beta…bulkily tum per gaya hai non stop bolta hai ..

Nupur: han raj tum per gaya hai..her cheez ko criticllly dekhta hai

Thnkuu…kya hua rahul

 

Rahaul: mjhy daar lag rah hai…

Mayank: oye mera babay kyun

Rahaul: raj dara raha hai

Mayank:'raj ap baray hoona…ap k us k kayal rekhna chaiy..he'll always b needing ur support n concern…u shudnt be fearing him rather removing his fear…samhjay

Raj: sorry dad..sorry rahul….

…………

Prem: yaar yeah mjhy kiya horaha hai…

Adi: kuch nh tu itni piyay ga tu asa hi hoga….carving tu hogi na..tu bhi ..

Prem: per ab tu bhai is also checking me yaar….bhabi k bhi strick kerdiya hai….i need money …aj tu lay lay kal day do ga

Adi: prem tujhy pata hai na….i cant afford tht much..i told u before nt to take it to much but tu suntan kah hai…..aj I'll pay ..but pls arrange money

Prem: hmm yaar….i'll do sumthng …

…..

Prem: bhabi pls can I get sum money

Nupur: prem ..ur expenses have been increased to much ….tum ker kiya rahy hoo……..pls mjhy batao..kisi galat adat mein tu nhi parh gay ho…

Prem: uffuu bhabi pls ….asay he we want to party….

Nupur: bhai se pochti hoon…..but prem money he wont allow ….he has given u way too much

Prem: bhabi uff…..

He left from there in anger…n want out..his craviyng was not stoping rather increasing …he didn't have enough money to but..but wht to do …he was going mad….finding a mobile shop he sold his cell in whtevr he agrees..n thn rash to buy his need..

Mayank: prem y r u nt answering ur cell

Prem: bhai it got snatch …so I wasn't able to call

Mayank: u shud atleast text us from ur frnds cell…u know how worried ur bhabi was…..

Prem: bhai im nt a child….pls…im sorry bhabi…I m really sorry

……………

Prem: kya kero samhj nhi arha hai….na bhai pasay daytay hai na bhabi…ab tu I dont have any expense gadget to sell…I need to think sumthng soon …warna mein mar jao ga…..

Adi: I have a plan …us se humari sari problem solve hojay gi…if u agree…..

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 10:39am | IP Logged
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edited:

nice update...
but prem ko kis rastai pai laga diya...Angry

but m afraid y prem is going on a wrong way...thts really sad...Unhappy
and how mch his bro and bhabhi trust him and he breaking their trust...
uff...plss kch bura na hu...



cont soon dear...Smile


Edited by drmaha - 01 June 2011 at 11:24am

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Posted: 01 June 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
I love it. I hope mayank aur nupur prem ko right track pe le aye

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