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A sketch & Short Story on Event of Ansha Didi's Birthday!!(Pg:105) (Page 27)

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Posted: 02 September 2011 at 11:56pm | IP Logged
@dada- ya dada u said is right. but wat i feel is god cannot cum everywer so he sends sum sweet ppl in our life who enrich us.
nwdays god dosnt cum on our land so he sends sumone to help us.
n @ da- thanx i likd ur cake n al
tc.
regards

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Posted: 03 September 2011 at 3:52am | IP Logged
wow padma..
Nice poem..
And whole poem is realistic.
Great work..
Keep it up..

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Posted: 03 September 2011 at 4:11am | IP Logged
thank u very much chints for ur cment.
tc

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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 1:07am | IP Logged
Hey it was really nice poem Priya Smile, But if you don't mind i want you to change a line so that the line gets a rhym. I hope u will like the changed one dear Tongue
 
 ye dekakar daya bole abhijeet tum to ab fase!!

Instead of that

ye dekakar Taarika ji bhi hasi daya bole Taarika tum to toh  fasi!!
( so that hasi and fasi will rhym very well)

OR
 
ye dekakar Taarika ji bhi hasi daya bole Taarika hasi toh fasi!!

 Please come up with more Padmapriya Big smile . I loved it.Heart

 
 


Edited by deepz28888 - 04 September 2011 at 1:14am

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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 1:51am | IP Logged
thanx deepa di
i l surely make more.
n u too cum up wid more.
n wil try to make change as u askd.
u can cal me pp as al cal
n my name is padma.

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Posted: 08 September 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
great poem padma diClap
amazing workClap
u have touched a very good and necessary and true point of life
loved the way u expressed it
fabulous di
its very true
god is always there for us
i remembered something which i would like to share
there was a message that i received on cell that is
one man was standing happily and suddenly a small piece of stone came and hit him
when he turned back in anger he saw god standing there like a shield to him and protecting him from crores of much bigger stones and god said sorry my child that stone mistakenly passed me

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 12:21am | IP Logged
realy true my dear.
i luvd dat msg
one more i wud share dat i recievd
one man was crossing a bridge n suddenly d bridge startd shaking he got scared n started praying god he saw god standing on other end
he tried to cal god on his side but he dint came
den by shaking n scaring he crossed d road n to his surprise he saw dat god was holding wid his hands d othr end of bridge.
god s always der to help.

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged
Padma di Fablous poem

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