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FF: Chupanke Ki Saaza Last Part Pg 52 [Jul 7,'12] - Page 30

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Posted: 11 years ago
O wow!!!!!! WOW WOW WOW!!!!This is a=some drama...he said she said na?!

loved every sentence...it was INTENSE!!!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ

Well I guess she doesn't quite know her husband well enough cos love ain't enough when you don't understand the messages between the lines fo silence and a cryptic reply or stiff shoulders...but then she has a lot to learn innit?

keh...aage aage dehko hota hai kya...let's see Bani's plan

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Posted: 11 years ago
this part is awesome u made it so real...
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Posted: 11 years ago
A very nice part. i luved it. keep writing.
waiting for ur next update thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was awesome! Didnt even see tht coming! Plzz cont soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

πŸ‘wow...jai's outburst was so greatly written

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now iam sooo waiting for bani 2 make it up 2 him

update sooonnnπŸ˜†πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing!! loved it!! it was so realistic!!! 

please continue soon!!!! 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hope Jai does not turn his nose up at Bani for trying to make amends after what happened
in his office.

Both this chapter and the last one was fantastic Archi. πŸ‘πŸ‘

Looking forwards to the next update, take care.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Archie thanks for PM. Sorry being MIA.

Both the parts were great especially the last part. Good to see Jai wenting out his frustration and making Bani aware of his feelings even though it was done in anger. 

Its Valentine's day so am super excited to see how Bani makes up to Jai even though personally i'd like Jai to realise the importance of the day and try and make amends with Bani.

I hope your exams went great. 

Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi,
So glad Jai's feelings are now out in the open!! Can't wait to read what happens next!!!

Ria
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for the link ... just saw them in the msgs and read all three updates at one go... loved all three of them... specially the one where Jai refused to let go off Bani in all possessiveness..
hope Bani makes it up to jai on the valentines day and something romantic happens between them...