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PKYEK FF: Lost in Translation Part 5 Pg 5 UpDaTeD!

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
 
HugHello everyone!!!!!!Hug
 
(Yep, the hug is to bribe you into reading the story.LOL)
 
 
Oh wait...why am I here? Confused
 
 
*listens to a 'voice' (lots of those in my storiesErmm)*
 
 
Ah yes...I am here to tell a story!! Tongue
 
 
Well, let's get down to business.Geek
 
 
Honestly, I am not famous for writing serious stuff.Stern Smile
 
What?Shocked
 
I AM famous otherwiseStar - ask ...uhh...never mind...OuchLOL
 
 
Anyway, as I was saying, I don't usually write 'serious' stuff because it takes up a lot of energy, but this time, I am going to try it.Smile
 
 
So without much ado, let's get on with it.Smile
 
 
Oh, and a few points to take care ofWink:
 
 
1. I am NOT going to write 'romantic scenes' unless it becomes totally unavoidableOuch, which it won't, so basically, you can't expect more than a "and they hug" from me.LOL
 
2. I am busy preparing for my entrance exam, and I like to say things in the simplest manner possible, so please don't expect longer parts or complain about the short length...all such comments will simply be ignored. I am sorry if that sounds rude, but like I said, I prefer to make my point quickly and simply.Smile
 
3. I don't really like all that PMing business, so please try to add the thread as one of your watch topics, if you are really interested in reading.Smile
 
4. Read, enjoy, and please do give me your feedback - it's invaluable!!!!!Star
 
 
 
 
 
Index
 
Part 1
 
Part 2
 
Part 3
 
Part 4
 
 
~ AdiEmbarrassed
 
 
 
 
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 23 September 2011 at 3:41am

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
I agree to most of your rules. So, will wait for you to start. Big smile

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 3:29pm | IP Logged
 
 
 
Part 1
 
 
 
Pia had to try one more time.
 
"Talk to me once, please! Abhay, I love you. You are my best friend. You cannot do this. You cannot give up on me."
 
There was no response. He just sat there - a sculpture. "Jenny carved him from stone." a part of her thought - the part that had started taking over from the moment Pia had seen her world coming apart. It was a part that was cold, logical to the point of being...what was that word again? Pia didn't know.
 
Then the other part of her took over - the part that was slowly dying. The part that was warm, that loved and hungered to receive love. The part that was being ripped to shreds by her best friend's rejection.
 
Pia grabbed him by the shoulders and shook him, but he was silent. Then he got up, pushing her away from him.
 
"Goodbye Pia. Don't show me your face ever again."
 
He left.
 
Pia was left alone under the tree that had become their favourite haunt over the years. Silent sobs racked her body.
 
They had found her there two hours later, broken, unable even to speak...
 
"Pia!!!"
 
The cheerful voice broke into her reverie. Pia didn't move. She drew in a deep breath, and then another to calm herself.
 
"Hey Pia!"
 
Misha came around to her and hugged her.
 
"What's up girl? Kis ke khayaalon mein lost ho?"
 
"No one Mish. I was just thinking of the homework we got today. I really need to go home and do it."
 
Misha groaned. "You mean I need to go home and start it. You will take only ten minutes to do it, but I will need the whole week's time that Miss D has given us, and more!"
 
Pia laughed, "Yeah right. Let's go."
 
They walked away, and Misha linked her arm through Pia's.
 
Behind the spot where they had been standing moments ago, a bush rustled...
 
 
***
 
 
-Edit-
Typos.Ouch
 
 
 


Edited by amail1601 - 23 May 2011 at 3:58pm

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 7:44pm | IP Logged
I am liking the beginning. But where exactly are we? I mean what is the background for this beginning?  
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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ritzie

I am liking the beginning. But where exactly are we? I mean what is the background for this beginning?  
 
Thank you Ritzie. Smile The background will come as the story progresses - it is a part of the story itself. This was just the teaser. Wink
 
 

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Oh oh me second! Yay for that! LOL!
 
So firstly Yay for you starting a new FF and that too a serious one but i hope there are some funny parts too! Am i being demanding?...Well itna tu chalta hai right? :P
 
Well interesting start. Pia and Abhay are best friends and fight hogai!Looking forward to more. Update sooon! :D

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
nice startClapClap
looking forward to itEmbarrassed
thanks for the pmBig smile
update soonWink
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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sugaryanu

Oh oh me second! Yay for that! LOL!
 
So firstly Yay for you starting a new FF and that too a serious one but i hope there are some funny parts too! Am i being demanding?...Well itna tu chalta hai right? :P
 
Well interesting start. Pia and Abhay are best friends and fight hogai!Looking forward to more. Update sooon! :D
 
 
Aur raho gaayab..second spot hi milega na. LOL
 
Lol...abhi even I dunno FF mein kya hoga...you know me...I keep doing any random stuff. LOL Won't be boring though, I can promise that. Smile
 
Yeah...was waiting for a comment or two before updating. Thanks for the encouragement!
 

Originally posted by mansim

nice startClapClap

looking forward to itEmbarrassed
thanks for the pmBig smile
update soonWink
 
Thank you. Smile
 
Just about to update.
 
 

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