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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged

Part 6-

 

 

In the evening anvesha became restless in last 5 days maan was with them every min. today is 1st day which she cut without him before leaving he only came kiss her & said bye princess see u in the evening . but now it is 8 o'clock in the night & he is not in home so she goes to daadi room.

 

Anu- daadi main aa janu

Daadi- come draling

Anu- I want to ask u something

Daadi- umm

Anu- when will maan uncle return

Daadi- why what happened is anything wrong seeing her worry face

Anu- I miss him he told me he came back home in the evening now it is night look with a cute baby face

Daadi- hiding her smile that's wrong he should come home early

Dev who is come into daadi room heard all this .

Dev- anu if u miss him why don't u call & tell him that u r angry with him.

Anu- ya that's right (happy)  oh but I don't have his number

Dev- I will give u

Anu- one more problem uncle

Dev- now what

Anu ' I don't have a phone

Dev- but I have

With that he pick out his cell phone & dialed maan's number

 At office :-

 

Maan phone rings he pick up without seeing the number sasha adi & pinky in his cabin discuss chopra project.

Maan- hello

Anu- I m very angry with u

Maan who is totally lost in his meeting totally bewilder who is calling him

Maan- who is on the line (in his stern voice)

Anu- now u don't remember me in night u promised me never leave u  begins to weep

Maan- anu  sorry darling

Anu ' I don't want to talk to u bye

Maan- listen to me sweetheart but she cuts the call

Maan- holy crap how can I forget her

 

with that he look at trio faces they never saw Maan Singh khurana saying sorry to anyone & above that he said darling & sweetheart to some girl

 

Maan- I have to go home immediately we discuss it in the morning with that he left his cabin & dialed  home number

Sasha ' mk listen

Maan- tomorrow I said

Daadi pick up the call

Daadi- hello

Maan- daadi how is anvesha

Daadi- u r in big mess MR. MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Maan- ab main usa kassa mannaoo

Daadi- ye to app ko geet hi bata sakti hai

Adi- sir sign

Maan indicate him to bring the file

Maan- geet

Geet- ji

Maan- anu kasa managi

Geet ' app ghar aa jaoo vo apna app maan jayagi

Maan- I m coming

 

He sign the file & left the office

Sasha- listen ye anu & geet kon hai jenka liya mk itna preshan ho gaya

Adi- I dono but anu to kuch jayada hi karib lagti hai

Pinky- sir ki life mein 1 nahi do do ladkiya

Sasha- mk kisi sa soory nahi bolta hai phir ye kon hai jis na unsa soory kahlva diya. Vasa bhi kal vo nayi secretary aana wali hai usaa bhi dekhna hai .

 

 

Meanwhile maan stopped & purchase some flowers ballon & chocolates for anvesha & reached home & went straight  to anvesha who sat with very big face

Maan- sorry darling gives her flower . she ignore it keep them in side

Gives ballons sorry  take them with flowers

At  last he take out chocolate & ask geet daadi & dev come & share it

Anu- nobody will touch my chocolate they r mine

 

 with that she came forward grab the box of chocolate from maan's hand goes back to sofa & begins to eat .all four starts laughing . after that they eat dinner & all comes on sofa anu goes to maan & sat in his lap

 

geet ' daadi I want to shift outhouse as u said

daadi- but

maan- no u will remain where u r

geet ' but

maan- I said no that means no outhouse is 10 min. far away from the house so u will remain here

geet- but I m ok with it

maan- brij is out of jail in bail & is in delhi r u ok with it now

geet went pale in her face

dev- who is brij

maan- her brother

geet ' he is not my brother he was my husband brother

maan- what r u married with shock

geet ' yes I was maaried to surender  handa  & told them her whole story

maan- so basicly they r after  anvesha & ur's properity

 

maan get very angry after listening all the story & sorry for geet that when she decided to accept the marriage fate plays his curel game .

 

geet- umm

daadi- u lived here with us maan is correct

dev- yes don't worry they can't touch u

geet ' but

maan- no but it's already very late tomorrow will ur first day in the office

dev- with a very strict boss

maan- dev

daadi & geet simles  geet went towards maan & try to take anu who is in her peaceful sleep but maan stops her

maan- don't worry she sleeps with me

geet- but

maan- go

they all went to their respective rooms only dev goes to daadi room they both discuss how maan take care of geet & anu he finally  turn towards his life .

 

 

 

 

in the morning geet & maan both r get ready eat their breakfast  in hurry to go to the office .

geet- daadi how I m go to the office I mean where can I get the cab

maan- there is no need of cab u go to the office with me

geet- but

maan- bus

geet  murmur uff babaji ye to kisi ki sunta hi nahi

maan- if ur prayer is complete shall we go to the office

geet- ji

they both left daadi anu & dev remains in home anu goes with daadi dev goed to his room .

 

 

they both sit silently on the way while the driver drive car at one stop geet saw brij at other cab she get very frightened & goes maan's side & get hold maan's hand maan look at geet hand he was about to speak what the hell but stopped in mid way as he saw geet's frightened face. He turn geet to face him as soon as she look at maan 's eyes she hug him & started weeping maan was astonished and continuely asked what happened .she was fainted in his arms as they reached in office. When he is about to tell driver to rushed to hospital adi calls & told him that Mr. chopra is already in office for meeting .

maan- take a new appointment  from him

adi- sir sorry in an hour he has a flight for London & he will not return India for 6 months.

Maan ' ok  m coming . he cuts the call . oh god now what i will do ? I can't leave her in this condition with driver . so he carried geet in his arms to his way of office .guard salute

Him but wondering who is she . as he entered the office all the stuff grasp at the sight of them . maan entered in his cabin & call adi .adi  immediately come to his cabin .

 

Maan- call doctor Mehta & ask him to come here & check her immediately & where is MR. chopra

Adi- in conference hall sir

Maan- m going there but u never leave her understand

Adi- yyyes sir

 

 

As maan goes to conference room sasha tasha & pinky entered his cabin & look at geet

Sasha- who is she adi

Adi- I don't know while he was calling dr. Mehta

Tasha- I think she is a relative of dd

Pinky- how lucky she is u know she is in dd arms think

Sasha- oh shut up pinky the important thing is who she is & what place she has in mk life

 

Ending his call adi answered sasha whoever she is but it seems she already take a very special place in mk's life . I never saw mk like this he is very tensed .

 

 

On the conference room maan  discussed his points with mr. chopra in 10 min. he leaves for airport with satisfaction . maan hurried towards his cabin he saw all the stuff gathered in his cabin . what the hell u all r doing here he roared. Hearing him all of them left his cabin .

maan- did u call dr. yet

adi- yes sir

maan- is she wake up

adi- no sir

 

dr. came & bade goodmorning to maan . maaan asked him to check geet .dr asked him what happened to her

maan- she came with me in the route I don't know what she saw but it look like it some thing frightened her & she starts weeping after 6-7 min she fainted .

dr checked her while maan was pacing up & down & adi saw his restlessness after some time

dr.- what the name

maan- geet

dr- who is she maan  call her family

maan- what happened

dr ' her family

maan- m the family

dr- what who is she

maan- my finac

dr- oh I think it's normal in her condition

maan- what condition

dr- look maan I think she is pregnant but for surety I want some testes are to be done

maan- pregnant

dr- ya  & take a good care of her   these r some tablets give her 3 times in a day & tomorrow I will fix ur appointment with dr. pari . she will take care of her.

 

 

 

 

 

Precap ' maan remembers the night in jungle when he saved geet & anu from brijWinkWinkWink

 

Thanx for all beautiful comments it motivates me

Plz like & comment more  

With lots of love

      Sanul

 



Edited by sanul - 18 June 2011 at 12:38pm

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 12:56pm | IP Logged

i read in one go

geet pregg with maan child
if i'm not wrong she didnt have
relationship with husband
anu so cute & adorable
awesome
love it
cont soonnn
pls do pm me

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 12:57pm | IP Logged
wow nice update.. anu is so cute.. luved the way he pacified her with chocolates n balloons.. awww geet preggy.. wow... precap is gud.. continue soon

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
thank you all guys who like & comment 
it motivates me really
love u all
sorry for the late update

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 1:12pm | IP Logged

Oooh i just read it all...whilst i was supposed to be revising lol and my god is it good!!

Ok soo the night in the jungle...what happened eh??

Lol

Please add me to your pm list and update soon :-)

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
it was amazing update!!!
Anu and maan's  conversation was adorable...oo he pacified her with flowers chocolates n balloons:)
Brij is out of the jailDead
Geet is preg wid Maan childShockedWink
cant wait for next part.
cont soon please
thanks for the pm 

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 1:19pm | IP Logged
interesting concept
add me in pm list
do continue soon

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amazing update

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