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interesting storyline...
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Part 3-

 

Maan ' I lived with my family so don't take it otherwise as u already tell me it's late & u don't know the address of ur frnd  so come with me & stay one night at my home in morning my driver will drop u & anvesha  wherever u want.

Geet look at him with open mouth & thinks what kind of man he is . he saved her life from brij veerji then snapped on police officer on looking at her with desiring eyes then get brij veerji arrested because of him after hearing his name PO did full attention to their report then dropped her delhi girls hostel & know he offer her to stay in his house as a guest .

Maan saw that geet is looking him with open mouth there r various emotions come & go in geet face maan can't fully able to understand that wat she thinks.

Maan- geet geet

Geet came out in her thoughts & stares blankly at him

Maan 'so what u decided

Geet ' I don't know

Maan ' now listen to me very carefully u have to go with me

Geet- but wat about ur family members wat they all think when they saw me & anu with u

Maan- nobody thinks nothing

With that maan forcefully take her hand lead  her towards his car . geet shockingly look at maan & he snapped her ' shut ur mouth with that anu giggles but geet's one angry stare make her stop in midway.

After 15 min. they reached at KM .geet jaw drop at the sight of KM . maan leads her to drawing room where daadi & dev waiting for him .he bade daadi happy birthday & give the cake to nakul who goes to the kitchen & comes with cake candle & knife . in between daadi  inquiry for geet to maan

Maan ' daadi she is geet & little princess is anvesha they were neighbor of munshiji in HP she wants to come delhi so I dropped her girls hostel but they refused to booked her  because of princess so I offer them to stay at our place as guest .

Daadi ' maan ye appna bahut aacha kiya vasa bhi itna time ho gaya tha ye akali kaha jaati come beta come don't be shy  . she extend her hand towards geet . make her sit comfortably with them

Anu- maasima can I go & sit with maan uncle

Before geet answers her, maan ' yes my princess come

Anvesha run towards maan & sit in his lap very comfortably & plays with his hand & maan simle widely. Daadi & dev exchage their look & geet looks lost at maan .

Maan- daadi cake is here plz cut it my princess & me r starving so we can eat it

Anu- yes daadi plz

Geet ' anvesha

Maan & daadi- leave her geet she is only child

After eating cake dev daadi  maan geet & anvesha have their dinner . at dinner anvesha made maan to feed her with his plate all looked at maan very happily . after finishing their dinner they all went to their respective room for sleep .

 

 

 

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      Sanul



Edited by sanul - 18 June 2011 at 12:56pm

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nice update...

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nice concept.. looks interesting.. add me onto ur pm list...

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Originally posted by swetha10

nice concept.. looks interesting.. add me onto ur pm list...
 
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Originally posted by suba2011

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
loved the update...
loving it that maan is getting more attached to anu...
loving their bonding...
will they leave the next day...thats the only thing i am thinking now...
pl cont soon

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