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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 8)

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nice update

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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 8:54am | IP Logged
loved the update...
loving that maan wants to b with her very close...
loved their maaneet moments...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 06 June 2011 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Awesome update 
loved it
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wow...love it.
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They came back to the senses

Due to maan' s phone ring

Geet made a excuse

She Ran to the wash room

Geet terrified….

What's wrong with u

Ur so close and what are u thinking

Ur not a teenager.to fall with….u need to think about rohan and pari…they are ur responsibility……………………

U r in a verge of loss……………

And u thinking of ………………………

She wipe d her tears…

And came back……………

Till the evening……….she tried her level best to avoid him….

This made ……………….maan so curious.

At the evening……..as she made her arrangements to exit

Miss geet……..

She looked at him.at the door……..

Sir…………I need to leave……….

Miss geet……don't forget.i had given responsibility and ur assisting me on this project.

And one more thing………………………..i don't want any excuses from u.if u need any assistance u can directly ask me……..

And now within 2 minutes into my cabin…………………

From afternoon he asked for file.he waited for her

Instead she send pinky………..

And after that when he asked for coffee……….

Instead of her beautiful face……..he need to face dark ugly face of his peon……………

He got very angry……..he had given him the famous glare…..make him to run away……..from him………

He waited for 6 pm……….he know by that time…most of staff leave……………………

He smiled……………………..

Within 2 minutes she came into his cabin.\

Her expressions like she is entering into a lion's cabin……………………..

He looked at her…..and ask her to sit………………….

She sit in the table…………looking in all the directions other than him……………………….

Looking at this he frustuated…………..

And stand beside her………………….

And bend her……….

She got terrified……………

Look miss…geet….don't look like that means I am going to eat alive….

I know this work is new to u..but im here to help u and don't worry it is for ur benefit……….and everything in this world is someor other new to everyone…but the person who accepts and takes it as a challenge will ….succeded………………

I hope u got my point……………………………..

So if u have any doubts in your mind…then ur free to ask me………………….

Ok…………….

Sh simply nodded………………….\

She is completely amused at his words….\there is lot of understanding ……

She never thought that he will be so soft.because she learnt from the staff that he is very anger person……………..and never praise any one 's work………………………………….

She is still looking at him………………

Miss geet………………………..

Geet………………….

She startled……………………………..

And he explained about the project……..and about each and everything

Slowly she realized that her discomfort leaving her…………..and she started liking his presence….

Even he liked her work…..her interest in the work……her concentration……………….

He really liked.

They are quite comfortable with each other…………………………

It is going on….

She is completely engrosse din her work………

Both didn't realize the time……………………………….

And suddenly her phone ring…………

Geet lifted th e phone

To see bhayya…………………..

Haa bhayaa…………there isa work………at the office……………..

Geet just look at the watch……………………

She glanced….it is 11o clock..

She jumped.

What about rohan and pari…..

They both are in deep sleep…………………….

Maan glanced at his watch…………..

Let s go geet

She came out.and didn't find taxi.

Its ok geet I will drop u………..

No sir I will manage………………

If u.are coming with me…….or else I had different methods to make u sit in the car…..

She looked terrified ………………………and sit……………….in the car….fidging her duppatta..

He smiled…….

And drive the car………..

Winds are blowing…………………………

Her duppatta is flewing just like his mind………

Finally he broke…….the silence.

By the way…geet I want to ask u one thing………………………………

I mean our first meeting……….

U had gone to meet some one in hospital

Who is he………..

She looked at him,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He felt he hurted her..

I know I has no right……….if u want to tell then u can other wise it is not necessary…………….

She asked to stop the car………….

He felt she may be offended…..

Geet….im sorry..actually

No nee d here is my stop…………………..i mean house………..

I can go from here……………………….

Ok she open the door…..

She got down……………

He thought wrong timing maan…………………

She turned and bend……and said……………………..

Actually I m sorry sir….that day I didn't even say thanks…

The person in the hospital is my father…………………..

With that she stromed……..into the dark…..

Father……………………………………..

He felt relieved but felt bad…….

As he didn't have parents…………………..

He drove back to his mansion in silence……feeling the flower aroma of her's……………….

 

 

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JUST AWESOMEEEDay Dreaming
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loved the update..chalo its clear that its her father...
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The next day

Sunday

And geet is very busy with rohan and pari…………….

At that time…………………adi came in

He is tired…………..

Geet thinking………..yeh DD

Pari……..smiled at rohan

P:Yeh maasi ka boss ka naam hay

R:DD ka matlab rohan asked innocently

P:Dust danav

 R:And how do u know

Maasi get angry on him………she calls him and even she imitates him………………..

Don't forget That he was adi maamu 's….boss als

Then extra careful.

They smiled…………

Geet came back…

And they got ready for mandir………….

Where they met savitri devi their new friend which brings them chocolates and toys.

Geet used to refuses but she manages…………

Geet often wonders how a wonderful……………………lady she is

She knows she must be rich………but her simplicity and humbleness………………………most thing she likes in her

At the same time………………….

Savitri devi like geet and her kids…………

Their presence give much happiness to her.

Pari cute talks…….

And rohan………………….

Geet….smile ..everything

She already feels them to be part of family……

The sincerity in them………………………………

Maan observed the change in her dadi..

She is not pressuring …………….for marriage

And her face is glowed with happiness……………

Even she is taking her good care of her self.

Lot of things changing.in maan's life

His mind is filled with the strange girl………….

He then called to city life hospitals……

And also made enquire of mr handa

They given that mr mohindar handa is the person

But he is paralysed…………………………

He was shocked…………on listening to this…..

He closed his eyes

Why her pain kills me…………………

Why I can't see tears in her eyes………….

It hurts….

He smiled and drove to sleep

Next day….

He enter into his office.to find her engrosse din some work…

he smiled that he is the one who given her work…

and she is dedicately working on it…………

he looked her through the window……………

her lovely creamy dress giving color complexion of her.

Her long hair fanning her……..and forming locks disturbing him for the view…………………………..

Her hands……………are rested on desk………….as she is engrossed in the work………………….

Pencil on her lips…………………………

His eyes feasted ..on it…………………..

He called her……………

She enter into his cabin……….

The freshness in her face………………..hiding all the emotions…..

Geet:I just want to say that there is a new project high way contract…………….which is going to be build in Mumbai……pune road…………..

Mumbai……………………….

Geet just dropped her file

A unknown fear………………..gripped her………….she don't understand why babaji always make her a target……………………………….

Suddenly she felt shaking………….

Maan is very much engrossed his conversation…………..he didn't have a look …………….on the pale face…………………of geet….

As maan finished………he just looked a ther instantly.to find teary face and chicken striked face……………………….of her.

He just jumped from the chair.reached her……………………

With in  a minute…………….he shook her arms.

Geet………geet..what's wrong with u…………..what happened.are u ok.not feeling well……………………………..

She looked into the dark brown intense eyes looking her with pain and care……….

His concern…………….

She just shook her head.im fine sir….

And she ran from her……..

What is this girl.

What 's wrong with that……

Whyshe is crying…………….

He became frustuated……………….pull his hair……………………..

And quickly he came out….to look for geet………

It is almost half a hour…geet is not in her cabin…………

She is wash room…………..

Kya karoon mei n babaji……………………

Har baar takh gayee uu bhag ke

Aft some time she CAME back………………she is sad……………

Before he go…………….he saw adi running towards to her cabin….

Adi:geet

Adi sir…………chodo kya huwa…tum itne parishaan kyon ho..tere tabiyat teek hay kya……………………………………

Haa..bhayaa……………………adi sir teek hoo……………

Geet agar tum chaheyee toh………chutti le loo……………………..

On the other hand………………………………

There is  a problem…………………….

At the construction site……………

Maan need to attend……………….

He came quickly to geet 's cabin…………………..

Maan:Geet………..we need to rush to the construction site…………..at k road………

Just………then………………

Adi super confused.

And adi.u and sasha take care of mr Mehta meeting…………….

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