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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 5)

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wow interesting ff...
i doubted that dev might b the reason behind everything and he was...
hope geet is safe now...
pl cont soon

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There is a huge office building……….

KC

Khurana Constructions……………

A girl which is munching chips dashed with a person………………………….

Pinky:

Adi sir…….This is the same person which geet calls him bhaiya………….

And staying in his apartment……………

A short skirt girl came into the office

She is sasha…she is head of the artect………..

She secretly loves MK……..but her boss never pays any attention..

Her assistant pony tail girl………….tasha…

And a aguy always…………around he is romeo………………..

Suddenly the sound of siren.

The angry hot handsome boss of them entering in the office

With some….men following him.

He is the man of terror…………………………..

He himself a power….no one dare to speak .in front of him…………..

He calls adi and sasha in to his cabin……………………….

And he is discussing something.

On the other hand….

Geet is working with the hotel.

She suddenly sees a person……..

She finds that he is the business associate of dev.

She feared the thought.

So she starts hiding ……………………and in a confusion……..

She dails the first number without seeing..

Actually she wants to call misha……….

But accidently the last call is adi……………..

As adi is in meeting…………….

His phone rings………………

His boss give him angry glare……………..

Adi looks at the number but ignores…………………

Maan asks to speak…………

So hestately he lifts the phone.

Hello adi bhaiya…………..

Geet:he answers………………….

Maan looks at adi………………

Bhaiya…………….im In problem………

He make excuse and come out……..

Maan thinks.

A girl s name on adi's word

Aditya sharma………….his………..old employee…and trustable person…….he is very much hardworking……and talented……………and sincere, he is the only person………….who can enter Khurana Mansion……because his dadi likes him a lot……………….

On the other hand…..

Adi listens to the convo…………..

Ok……….geet do one thing..make sure u leave the job….and reach the apartment ASAP..

I will come home  after work..then we will discuss later..

With that he ends the phone….

Pinky and others confused……………………..

And he went back to the conference room……..

He liked geet as a sister……………she is brave.and young women he ever seen in his life…………..

She is not only protecting her sister 's children but……..also…………….her father………………………………

With the thoughts.he came back to the conference room for meeting……………………..

After some time…he ends the meeting …………………..

And gets  a call from dadi maa………

Daadi:I told u im not interested……………..pls………………

Ok……………donot try to black mail me………..i will attend the party…..

He knows his dadi well.yet another plan to make him meet another family……….girl…………….she tries her level best to persuade him for marriage……………..he listens to her…………….

With that he end up the call and close his eyes to find the hazzle beautiful eyes before 2 week………………………

He sees the clock…..

And get s int o the room..which is dull and alone like him…..

And he picks up a dress….and attends the party…..

On the other.hand.

Geet is trying level best to escape.but not possible for her as there is a party at the hotel….and she need to supervise the ……………..details…….she is busy………….

She is fumbling……..

As one of the department………head.informed her to handover guest list….

As she ran towards the door.to bump with some….one as she about to fall……the person.caught her……..on the waist……………to regain the balance…

She closed her eyes in fear….as she knows she must be bumped with one of the VIP and he is going to make fuss……..

On the other hand as the person going to yell at the girl bumped with him…………..where on seeing the eyes he stopped..

On seeing the same dar k brown intense eyes which gave her lift two weaks ago……………….the same person………………..

And MSK………..does not believe the fate the girl which not stop chasing in his dreams…..in front of him…….wearing a white saree………………….hair locks on the face…….

In the first instance he never thought she belongs to a ordinary family………..as however………she carried herself.on the day on the car………………..andnow in the hotel uniform..attire…………………..

She belongs to a wealthy family……………………………..

She tried to free from himself…..but the person lost in her……………………

But he came back and leave her…………..

For instance she ran to the door…………………………………

He cursed himself for loosing the concentration…………………….

He diverted towards his dadi.where she introduced to some kapoor family for her daughter anjali kapoor……………..

She looked a t him in awe

As it is the dream to be bahu of khurana khandan……and mostly hot and handsome hunk of khurana empire………………..none other than maan singh khurana………………

But maan thoughts is preoccupied by the girl………………………….

Bumped with him.

Why he always meet in accidents……

First she came to sit in car….now in party……………..

Unknowingly he smiled…for the first time…..

He excused the drooling session of…………….anjali……and managed to sit In the corner…………

His eyes caught her again…………………….as she is busy in ordering bar tender for getting more drink….

She is completely engrossed in her work…………….suddenly felt his eyes on her……………..

She shrugged………………..

And getback to work..

First time…a girl does not paying attention to him…….

The deadly hot handsome maan singh khurana..

But he admired her sight……………………..

In a pale white saree.as a uniform………………………..with a long note book….hair locks on her face..but busy……………..and her lips……curting everytime…….waking unknown desire s in him………………

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loved the update...
so they meet again and maan is attracted to her...
pl cont soon
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Geet is busy in work…………

She didn't pay any attention to the time…..

And suddenly she got the call………

Haa bhaiyaa.party hay hotel mein isliye………………….

Jab party katam hojayagee then I will come

Ok bhaiyaa I will take care and bye.

As she proceed…….

Some one try to grab her and pinned her to the wall………

Strong alchol………………scent.

As the person come to near her

She felt there is a pull……………

She felt numb to find………….the person is getting beat by the person who gave the lift…………..

He is beating the person in angry tha the person had touched most precious thing of his…………

Maan is looking for girl……..

But suddenly she didn't find..instead she saw a person following her…he is completely drunk………………….

He sensed the danger……………………………………

He followed the guy…………on the other hand…………..he saw the guy who is trying to strangling her…

He got angry…………………………..

An he beat the person to the blues…………………….

And made him to fall on the floor.

He saw fury in the beautiful,hazzle eyes…………………..

She ran from there…….

And reached the home to find…………………….rohan and pari are sleeping.

She looked at her…………she felt disgusting……………….

Always me why babaji.

On the other hand.

How can be so nave……………….her beauty is the enemy for her

I need to find out about her…………….

And make sure she is protective………………………

The next day is Sunday………….

As usual..geet visited hospital with rohan and pari….

And after that she taken them to the water park.near by.they enjoyed a lot…….slowly pari is coming back…………..

She felt happy……………….

Rohan is always protective towards his sister….just like his mother………..

Geet remembers meera………………

On the other hand………dev is going insane to ……….findout for geet..

He is getting mad and wild……………

He hired detectives but no use.

As misha is very clever……she had cleared all the evidences…that connected with………geet…………………..

Even her friends……………….

Next day……………………..geet took rohan and pari to the temple………………

Suddenly rohan bumped with a  olderly lady………

She took the hand of the boy………the blue eyed boy looked her and said sorry………..auntijii………….

She took back…….

Then shee saw a agirl………same of the boy age.called bhaiyaa.

Chaliyaa na….maasi hame doond rahi hay.

Then she looked at a girl of her 18 -19 yrs.searching for them.

Both hugged her………she looked at the olderlylady

Sorry maam….hope kids had not trouble u………………..

The lady looked at her In awe.beta mera naam savitridevi.hay

Aur tum

Jii mein geet……………………………

Kya baat hay auntyjee.aap parishaan hoo

Pehle beta tum muje antuyjee nahii balki dadi bolo

Jee dadi………………..

Haa beta mere pothe ke shaadi ke baremein soch rahi hoo

Lekin pata nahii.kuch ho nahii raha hay

Geet:dadi……ismein parishaani ke baat kya hay…………………didi hamesha kehtee hay………..hame kuch baatee unpar chod na chaheyee……….wahi kuch na kuch hal nikal denge..aur babaji ko hamere parishaani ke baaremein kabar hoti hay

Jab waqt ayaga tab…….babaji koi koi chakkar chalakar………………………saar I problems solve kar denge……………….

Aap bas babaji par barosha rakhna……………………….

At that time

Pari came and called maasi…..

Haa pari………princess…………………..

And rohan comes to her

And she hugs them both

Aur ayee bachee…….

Mere didi ki……………………………………

Im the care taker………..of them…………………

She bid farewell to her……..

Why I feel im so attached to her.

So beautiful and nave……and innocent……………………………and she is so good………..and what ever she said this is so nice

I think I need not worry………..

Oh god…

If u send any girl in my pota 's life

Make sure some good girl.

Or else pls make sure………..this is the same girl……

That is why she cleared

She smiled……………at her thought….

She got a call from the home………………….

And she drew away……..hoping to meet her next time.

So simple….and…………….yet beautiful……….she felt happy………………..

After long time…………….she felt very happy………………………..

As maan is getting ready for his camp………………as it is necessary for him……………………..as he need to get away from the girl's thoughts………………….

He is setting………………the thoughts…………………

He listened to the car…….he knows it is dadimaa……………….

He knows she again comes up with the proposal.no ways.before she comes u need togo.

As he is going…..

He came across with dadi…………………

Oh dadi.

Maan hame aap se kuch jarori baat kari ni hay

No ways dadi.pls donot force me…..im not interested.and pls never try to emotional black mail me……………..

Dadi smiled………..no beta.im just want to say…………..now today onwards im not going to force u for any thing……….and I will not ever try also.

Maan looked at her…………….

Oh god suddenly what happened to hisdadi……………I remember she went to mandir………

Unknowingly she thought…………………

By the way………the person who changed her dadi.should be…helpful……………….

I really thankfull to the person.

Iss epehle dadi ka mood badla.let us go from here.

And with a excuse……………….

And he leave his mansion,…….for his campaign……………………………………….

He is far away from the place..

In the jungle……………………..

On the other hand…….

Geet is very much busy……………….for searching…………..for new job……………….

 

 

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