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Next day.

The young man introduced himself asarjun rathod

He met daadi..

And after some time even he meet maan and Vicky also

They liked the person

He belongs to rathod family

Very well know n and well n atured

After some time everyone talked about anee and arjun engagement

Where misha teased her to the end………………………………………………….

After some time………………

Geet and mohindar comeback

A girl enter………………..

To the police station..she wore chudidaar

Hello im manjari……sharma.

As ur case is going to court

So……………..court appointed me as ur lawyer

Dev looked a ther

She looks hot,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Manjari feels disturbed with his look

Hello are u there

I didn't have a whole day for u.

But before that I want to know everything about u

Can I mind if we sit and talk,

She asked him..tired of his oggleness………………………

On the other hadn,

Yes I need  to get out soon.other wise that maan singh khurana get my geeet.

I want her……………………

I will do any thing for her…………….

They talked.

Manjari recorded their convo……….

And even she wrote some points………………………….

On the other side

Maan on phone.

No please I don't want pari into this

Geet will get worried………………..as pari is so small.

What about uncle maan……………………

Yes that is possible but it takes minimum 2 week.

Don't worry…………………………

I wil manage

The date will be after 3 weeks

That s wonderful.

In the meantime……………………..geet got used to khurana house hold.

And also taking care of her father……..

He is improving………………

And rohan and pari,getting close to him.

Geet open the door

Tofind…..

Maan is a tsofa…………………….

Where pari is sleeping on his chest where rohan is curdled with him.

It is likea father effection………………………………………

She felt tears on her eyes.

She thought wshe will hate the male species.

But now she admired the person he is not less than god to her…

She slowly………reached him…….touched his cheek with her tremble hands.

She touched softly his eyes , his perfect nose……….his……….lips.

Stopped

Where she felt.a sensation.

I feel u always kiss me when I close my eyes why geet……………..

Maan slowly open her eyes……….

Geet felt shy try to move

Maan want to hold but see the children he smiled………………………….

And he also dragged…………………..heer.

Maan…………………

Umm………

Maan please………………………..

They all sleep peacefully

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After 3 weeks

Mohindar is very much healthier……………………….

Court case……………

Manjari came …………

As the judge also enter

Just then,

Maan step down with akshay

Seeing askhay all eyes poppedout.

As he is famous lawyer and he never fails in his case.

He came to the court and give a smirk to manjari.

Manjiri gave him a glare…………………….

And then ,

The court proceedings start….

The charges for the civil ………are …………………

Argued

And manjari proved him innocent

Dev gave a look to geet

Where geet trembled.

To face him,

Where the smirk in his face

But his smirk turned shock to find maan 's hand in her waist…………………..

He looked a tmaan as he is going to kill him with his eyes.

Maan smiled at his reaction…………………….

The second case

Shocked.
yes sir.

This is mr dev shergil had .killed..his wife meera shergil.by giving her poision……………………………

Manjari.tried to prove……him innocent,

But failed.

As askhay………..gave all the evidences

Dev is shocked.

As how far maan able to get them that b………….

But he is maan sin gh khurana…………………….

Geet surprised as how about all these managed.

All these planned……………

After some time mohindar enter

He shocked to find him healthy.

Sir…………………………………

My wife left me giving me my angel to my life

My big daughter is innocent,

When this person said he is goin g to marry my elder daughter

I felt very happy I let him marrie d to her.

She is very good but innocent…………….

I don't know that this monster laid his eyes on my second daughter

For this he killed my elder daughter

He created a bomb blast in my industries so that I will be nee don money.and due to my fina nicial losses

First I thought all this are created by god……………

But one day

One of my trustable employee doubted the accident

He phoned me and told that the incident is actually not accident

It is well planned………………………

And……………………he even told that he had proofs

But………………..

He gave me instruction that he want s to meet alone as he cannot trust anyone

I followed his in structions .

And he gave me some photos and evidence which got shock in my life

My daughter husband………

This devil monster…

Then I got why he is doing so.

I want to confront him.

Just tehn.

I heard his talk to the nurse he appointed for my daughter health

Nurse:mr shergil I can't do this if police find this then im going to jail.

Don't worry shena.nothing happen tom u.

Due to ur low doose she got strength to.call.that random person and help her

If that person gave the in formationto ngeet then I will be loose………….

And one more thing

I love geet like crazy I will do anything for her………………..

And one more thing

If ui can't give the dose………….then I wil l giv e it to her

On that day.was the most dreadful.thing nhappended………………

As I want to stop this monster

But he got…..the things

He pushed me from the stairs………….

I got injured…….

And finally…………………………….

He stopped.

My second daughter saved me.

When she found out his evil plans…

And even she ran with kids along nwith me…………………………

He cried.not able to control.

Thee court became silent………………

After sometime.

Akhay present some evidences which proved .that dev is a culprit

After some time…………………………………………

Judge had announced that mr dev shergil……………………had commited

So he will be imprisioned for his life time

He came down……………..to see geet and kids on besides

He feel guilt where his kids didn't want to see them

Rohan hide pari beside her….

Where maan hide all of them.

He came to mr shergil

Thisis ur dream na,

But not this is mine.

I will make sure u will never come to my family.

And this time

Mr handa got worthy full……….damaad.

Dev is taken away

Where geet hugged maan with happiness

Dev clenched his fist

Before he goes

Well mr shergil

Ur not able to attend………………………

So im informing u

That next week my marriage with geet ,

And next Saturday.

M y wedding night and he whispered

On that night geet will be mine forever……

U know what I mean na

Now go to jail…….

And dreams …………………………naa……………………..

He winked

He came out to find

Akshay hugged manjari

Sorry darling ………………………………………………

Darling geet surprised

Yes geet mrshergil don't know even htee prosecutor also ours…………

I just want everything under control

So akhay got a plan to involve his own finance who is a lawyer into this.

And some written statements where manjari made him to sign some papers…….also part ofour evidences……………

Sand by the way akshay whenur inviting us to ur marriage

Pretty soon.he winked a tmanjari.

She hugged him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

And all returned happily.

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The firs t day

Its is maneet sangeet.and mehendi.

Geet is sitting between…………….misha andanee……

Where they are teasing.

Where pari…………is asking lot of questiosnto dadimaa,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Suddenly she asked…..

Daadi that means I also neeed to go to someone house when I get bigger na.

Maan looked a ther

She came and hugged maan and saidl

I have my mf na………………………..

He will find.that someone will going to take me.

He will beat that boy hay na…….

Yes sweetheart…………………………..

She hugged him

Yes she will be his princess.

All are set ready

Sangeet………………………………….

All……………..

Are set ready

Pinky and adi came

Where they are confused that they should come along ladki nwale yaa ladke wale

Just the n.geet confirmed that adi going to be her side as he is bhayya for her.

He smiled and said yes.

Where pinky joined………………………….anee.

As ladke wale.

So lot of bolywoodnsongs.

 

Where geet whispered

Maan I want to ask u sommthing

Yes jaan,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Wow aap uss dev shergil ke kaano meinkya baat kar rahe thu.

Wow secret hay nahii bata saktha

Please maan

Ok but not now

If I tell what I get…………………………………….

He asked naughtily

Geet……understood.

Wow.dadi bula rahi hya with that she ran away

He smiled.

Geet aaj chod raha par kal o nahii………………….

He smirked

Next day………………..

Maneeet haldi………………

At that time…………..

Maan enter the room………………………….by giving bribe to pari.as she is part of the crime

She starts crying

All girls got panic..

Then she start that she is finding something

They know if geet sees this she cries and they can't control her

And dadimaa…………..will scold them.so it is better.they find better…………………….

All scattered

Then pari whispered maan,

Coast clear……………………chalo.

He smiled the little ….devil.

Geet came out inton the room.wearing uyellow dress.

Suddenly she felt two.hands

Maan aap.

Aap yeha kya kar rahe………………..

As he said chup bilkul chip andput  a finger in her lips.

And start moving,,

They all moved until she get cornered………………………………

And smiled and put haldi on her cheek

How can I allow others to touch my misty before me.

Geet looked at shyly…………….

U don't apply haldi ntome

Where pari whispered jaldi mf…………………….other s will come.

He turned to look a tpari.

Where geet put haldi ion  his cheek.

Just in time they left…………

And came into the nroom to take geet,

Where anee noticed there is haldi mark on her cheek

Geet yeh kya hayl……………………………

Lagtha hya kis ne pehle se lagaii hi hya.

On the other hand maan didn't notice that……………….hadli mark in his face.,

Geet sit between them shy………….

Where…………………

All girls came and applyu.

\aaj toh maan babu ke kaam tamam hum geet ko halde se lipatkar itne sundar lagayenge ke maan babu dekthe hosh ko jayegaa

Aurgeet ko kachha jabayagaa…………………..

Geet blushed……………their coments………………………

Where dadi came and saved.her

And after lot of teasing sessions geet haldi is finished

On the other had n…..vicky…………………..shooting the entire scene……………………..

Saw haldi mark

And he note to adi..

Where adi laughed he he he…………………………

Kya huwa.

Lagthahay kisise ne pehle se baazi mardi.

Maan noticed the haldi on his cheek

And gave a smirk………………..

And shoot glared to vikcy……………………………………….

And said

Wait mr vikrant singh khuran a…….ur time comes I will see to it…………………………………………

Vicky giggled with rohan……………………………………………….

At the evening all the khurana mansion is filled with laughter

Where maan came  down in his hot and happening…………………..cream ………………….sherwani dashing with shehera…….

Looking out of world………………………………………………………………

And waiting fornhis bride

Where geet brought down

Maan forget toblink

She is adorable with her jewellery…………………………………….

Lookingtop of world………………………….

He is sourounde damoung his friends

Where Vicky who is shooting.

Saw maan is staring at geet

Bhai moo band karoo.makki guss jayenge

And why are looking a ther like ur going to eat her raw….

Vachan

Sukh dukh.

Zindagi ke har safar mein

Zindagi ke har khusi mein

Zindagi ke har ghum mein

mein hamesha tere saath detha hoo……………………………….

Mere zindagi ke har nayee subha tum se shuru aur tum se katam …………….hota hay

Maut ko bhi pehle mujse guzar na ahoga

Tere izzat.atma samman.tere.har season mein pehla haq mera hogi

Har zimaadari

Mere tann…….mann.har doulat…………………..sab par sirf tumara haq hoGA sirf tumaraa……………………..

Geet,

Merea har saasson par sirf tumara haq hay

Mere zindagi.mere khusi sab se badkar tum hoo…………………

 

They are all promised………………………that they are going to be forever……………………….

And all rituals completed………………………..

Where maan carried……………………….all the steps………..

Ring searching ceremony

Maan start romancing inside the water making geet to blush

 

Mohindar got happy

And he took kids with him where adi

As long instances he agreed that he is going to live with for adi and after that he will shift to…………..mansion……………

This is night

SR>>>>>>>>>>>>

Geet is waiting on his bed

The room is filled with scented flowers…..

She is going to be alone with his room……………………….

She is dam nervous.

On the other hand maan is so difficult…………………………….as girls not allowing to his own room

Finally lot of………………..discussions he told Vicky to pay off.

And enter into his life………………………..his room.

Seei ng his gorgeous bride on his bed………………………he smirked.

He sat beside her………………

Giving some intense looks

Geet he wishpered in her ear……………………………

Geet shivered.

U want to know na what I talked to that person

She simply noded.

He said.

I told him.but before that what I get.

Whatu want

He smirked knowing how innocen t his wife…..is.

He slowly approached her………………….

And took his gunghat off.

And said……………………………………………….

I will answer ur questions  and I want no obstacle today from ur side.

He whispered

I told him………………..some details what im going to do with u tonight………………………….

Geet shocked open her mouth…………………………

Already………aroused maan……not able to controlling himself.

Took advantage of her open mouth.and gave her a passionate kiss…………..

And start playing with her………………………………..

He removed her maan tikka and said…………..

I said this maang will be filled bym e.and kissed her maang.

Geeet felt shy……………………………………………..

And he reached her eyes and kissed softly and said the almond shapped dovey eyes which I fall first tim e only kissedby me…………………………..

She shied……………where he reached ears and remove the earrings by kissing……………………………I can only tease this ear rings by kissing the ears saying that this belongs to me…………………………….he took the ear lobe in to his mouth and sucked,

Geet shied in pleasure……..closedher eyes

First his actions……………………….

Then his words…………………………………….

His smell…………………………

Teasing badly her senses.

An d she is perfectly trapped…………………………………………………….

He reached her hands.adored with henna hands.kissed.

Geeet mere kismet mein.tum hoo.aur yeh haat tab ache lagthe hay jab yeh mere……………………..hug ke replydesake…………………………………………….

She hugged him

He hugged back.

He removed the bangles…………………………………………..

And kissed with each one………………..

He unclasped necklace……………………………………………………………………

That every body of urs belongs to only mine…………………………………

And start kissing her neck passionately……………………………..

Her knees becoming week,……………………she close her eyes in pleasure……………………………………………

After sometime.he came to waist band.giving kisses…geet trembled…………………………………..at his touch………………………..

Then hecame to payal

He kissed her toes and said……………………..i don't want to remove the payal.

Because these ar emy heartbeats.and the chan chan sound………………………says that geet is with me……………………………….

He came up.

Hugging her and open her dori.

Maan…………….shh……………………

And caressed her back ……………..with passion

Cannot able tom control her hands reached to his back.but his hot sherwani…………

By that time maan open completely her blouse.strings.

And also the strings of her skirt

And he stood up…….seeing shy geet closing .her eyes …………feeling shy

He remove his sherwani.and also…………………………..his kurtha

And top of her.

And kissed her from top to toe

And enter her…………………..

Pleasuring her…………………………………………..himself…………………..finally became one………………………………………………

He didn't stop for first round.he continued until they tired……………………………………

They slept each other arms,

Next day morning.geet woke up.and find her self………………………….

Smurged sindoor……………………………..all the clothes ar shattered…………………….

Looked a the dream.which her sister had ……………………seen………………………………….

Suddenly she felt a tug.see the handsome husband……looking her naughtily……………………

Maan chodiyee na.bahut kaam hay……………………………………

She startsaying things

That she need s to get ready………………………

Making rohan and pari for school.

Etc .not noticing the sheet………….slightly…downed.

Seeing his wife…………………….slight naked form

Maan got hold of his wife

And made her to lie on bed.

And closed her mouth with passionate kiss……………………and start another love session…………………

 

 

Epilogue

 

After 4 years

Anee and arjun…………….married and went…….to cananda………………………….

Where even misha and Vicky also.went to Australia………..

After marriage …………………….

At breakfast table.

Rohan………and pari……………….having b reakfast at the table………………………….
where………………….

Riya…………………..a 20 old maid …looking after .the 3 yr old……………………………….

Sumeera………………………….playing on her lap……………………………..

Sumeera………….maaneet s daughter

Meera name…………………………………….

Dadi asked nakul are.maan aur geet kaha hay,

Geet came from the washroom to find his hot and handsome husband laying on his stomach.

With only vests and pants.

Maan bhi naa.

Maan uto na..

Umm

Geet .please dekho………..8 bach gayeee…………………..sab………………..jaak gayee…..chaloo.utiyana.

Pata hahy maan………………………………mein rohan and pari aur sumee…………………………….ko bhi sambalthi hoo.par tum ko nahii

Before she could say anything

Geet kitne bolti hoo.aur tume chup karne ka .illaz hayh mere pass

And with that he gave a passionate kiss

Bass kijyee…………..

Kisi ko yakeen nahii hoga ke aap char bachoo ke………………………………baap

Char……………

Maan shot up

That means…………..

Haa maan aap phir se …………….baap banewala hay…………………………….

Geet……………………

Itne good news aur yesi….

Celebrations time without she realize ………..

He pinned her to the bed.co vered her under the comfort.

And start.his……………………………mmm……………………..

Love making session……………………………..

After sometime.

They come down to share the good news with their family………………………………………………..

Always dreams come true

Happy ending

 

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