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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 29)

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Posted: 11 July 2011 at 6:22am | IP Logged
nice update
continue soon
 
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Bhai

Aap sab kuch jaaqnte huwee…………………bhi anjaan ban nake

Who iss seher mein hay

Aur hum tak pounch sak tha hay……………….

And she broke into crying…………………..

Maan cam ethere running……………………..

On the other hand dadimaa also worried.

Then adi had told her everything………………………..

Dadimaa heart felt bad for the poor girl and the children………….

Lekin beta.woh legally unn bachoon ka baap hay………hum usee kaise rok sakthe hay……………………………..

Who legally rohan aur pari ka father hay……….

Lekin usne………………………apne wife ka murder kiya

Geet:lekin hum saabit kaise kareen.

Maan :pari saw it with her own eyes…………….

Geet:what……………..

Everyone shocked……

Yes on that day pari told me that his father had mixed something in her drink.

Not only there is some more thing……………………..fishy

He bribed the doctors to change the reports……………..

and he bribed the police also……..

he is  avery ugly man………

we need to stop him.

And not only that he is also responsible for ur father 's condition.

Yes geet………….

I had came to know that he bribed one of the employee of handa group of industries. To destroy the insurance.papers…………………….

And the fire accident…………..also created by him.

So that finanicial crises hit so that u will not any other option……….for ur father and u to come to his house………………

And ur father got doubt and he undergone investigation and he came across the truth……………….and ultimately he confronted dev

And dev made him fall from the stairs……….and the attack is happened…………………………………

The reports made by the doctor proved this fact……………..

Not only that …anjali had recheck the reports.and she also undergone some intense tests proved this part……………………….

Geet broke down

She is sobbing.

This is all because of me……………………………….

From the childhood im the bad onam…………for my family

First I took away…………..my mother from my birth

And di had given me life….she became not only my sister…..but also my mother and also my best friend……………………………………

And again because of me………………now bauji…………also……………..

She is sobbing…………..

And on the other hand…..

Dev in his room.

What where is geet.

I saw her with the old lady.and she is seem to be very happy…………..and……………….she missed..

I need to track her…………

First I need to track my dear father in law.

Which hospital.

Yaa city hospital

He drove to the city hospital.

He enter the room……………..

He saw him.

Open the tube……………….

And he rudely removed all the tubes

And the machine stopped.

Geet woke up screaming.bauji….

Maan woke up…………..

He is next to her…

She hugged him,\

Maan bauji.woh musibat mein hay.

Muje uneee dekhna hay.

Teek hay geet kal subha chalee jayenge.

No maan.muje………………abhi.

Please geet bahut raat ho chuke….

Aur bauji ko kuch nahii hoga.he will be fine…………

So don't worry

She fell asleep in his arms.

He looked at her

The tear strained face.

Her tears stabbing him…………….he felt huge pain in his heart.

He cannot see his angel like this……………………….

He dared not to move..

His anger boiled out ………..he want to kill dev with his hands…………….

He is sad………………….

So sad……………………………..

On the other hand.

Dev reached the hospital

He asked the receptionst……………..

Is there any patient name mohindar handa………….

No sir there is no patient with this name……………………..

What.

It is impossible ……………look nurse

My name is dev shergil and  he is my father in law….

i  need to meet him soon.so please…………………

no sir…………………….

There is no patient named………………….mr handa…………………

Shit.

This is the last hope………………………….

Where is he………….

And how it is possible…………………………………..

3 days back his person informed that mohindar handa in this hospital.

And how can he move from this hospital.

And even geet cannot change…….

What is going on………………..

On seeing this a person.called…………..

Hello sir………..

Haa.bolo.

Sir aap ka shaq sahi nikala….woh admi yeha aya tha.aur who…………………mohindar handa ke baaremein pooch raha tha………………

Aur hume usee kuch nahii batayaa.

Achaa kiya apne

Sir aap khurana parivaar hoo.iss hospital ke trustees hay…..

Hum apko kasie inkaar kar sakthee hay.

Yeh hospital apke wajah se chalthi hay……………………….

Haa…..mr ravi.i know that .don't worry.

I will take

Maan remembered how he had delete dthe details and also informed the hospital authorities to not to inform about the where about sof mohindar handa.

Even anjali also…………………shifted to other hospital………………………

Maan………………….turned tofind geet.staring athim.

Geet:maan bauji kaha hay

Maan:who teek hay geet.

No need to worry…………………………………

I know dev will not leave easily

He will do something with …………this.

So it is better I will keep………….geet along with me.

And even rohan and pari also……………………………..

And even he also added additional security for them.

Adi make sure pari and rohan are safe…………………

I don't want that dev to reach them………….

 

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Posted: 15 July 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
update soon ...waiting from long...back
plz update regularly Cry
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Posted: 15 July 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
Awasome update.
Dont make us to wait too long.
Update regularly.
Do continue soon ok
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Posted: 15 July 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
wow Awesome part 
loved it
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fabulous  update
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