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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 28)

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Posted: 04 August 2011 at 11:54am | IP Logged
nice update...
so msk worried abt his date on how to propose to geet...
pl cont soon

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Geet looked at the direction

She felt she may be in wrong  place……………………………

But as soon as she looked in the maan's eyes

She felt dumbstuck.

As he is not in his official attire…………he is in tuxedo..tensed…………………..

And the way he is staring at her ..as he is seeing the won derful sight in front of him……………….

She is lost in him…………………….

He came towards her…and she felt her limbs week…………………….

He is so handsome and his eyes…………………

.on the other hand.

Maan is looking at her.

Her dress.

Long hair.with slight make up done by………………………misha…………added glory to her………….

She is heavenly…………………beautiful…………………………….

She slowly take steps…towards him.

Sir…yeh.

Who geet…muje tuje kuch kehna hay.

She surprised ……………………for his words.

Where a smaan sighed as his 1 hr practi ce is into water…………….on seeing her………

As she is the onlygirl which makes him speech less.

Her eyes……………….lovely expressions.

Who…………

Accha beto geet..

He can only able to said that ……………………

Geet………………………lost in the sourroundings as it is of her favourite……………………….

A table is set.

She thought yeh jagah ko lagtha hay.ke yeha koi meeting nahii.sacvh mei n date hay.

She remembered misha wink  when she left the room.

Unknowingly she blushed……..

She liked him,

She forget everything…if he is arou nd,

She is trying to control as she could…for rohan and pari………..she forgot to live his life…………………

At that time…………..

Maan is seeing herr.

He don't know howto start.

Geet I just want to say…………………

First……………………….

I need to say something…………………………

He is fumbling with words.

Sir.

Let me say u geet……..

I Love u geet……………

I Love u when I saw u first time………………………on that day when u accidently came into my way…………..

And I felt for u geet.

And when u came into my office

I came to know there is a pain in your eyes.which always hurt me….but ur presence made me feel that im living.

Everymorning…every night I just think of u geet……..

Feel u at my place……………..

My thoughts.of ur safety.

I want u in my life.i will always with u..in your all struggles………..smile…………….ursadness………..every part of u.

I want u hold u…took ur hand and walk into the life of love………………………………..

I will not force u…………….

Everytime when u feel alone……..

U will always find me.

I will protect u fro m all the evil sources.

Every trouble that come to ur life should face maan singh khurana…………………………………….

And regarding.kids.

Rohan and pari.will be always part of our life…………………

And they will.

Our life full oflove and life…………..and that is promise.

Suddenly he felt geet is crying.

He step ahead and took her into arms.

Im sorry geet…………..

Im really sorry geet.

I forced u…………………..

He is blabbering……………………….

As forgot .that geet……is smiling.

Kab se maan singh khurana itna bholna seeka……………

She said without breaking thehugl.

Jab se geet handa…………………..mere zindagi mein aya toh…………….

She smiled……..

Maan very much happy.

As geet about to say something.

I know geet…………………………….u need some time to think.

But still I will wait………..

And inorder to lighten the mood………………………..

I don't mind if u stay in my arms till end of life but geet……………..

But we cannot control some of the parts………………………..like hunger……………………..

Im starving….so can we start our lovely dinner……………..

He said with a chuckle……………

Geet wondered how many faces did this person had.

Sometime s tough dust danav boss making their employees hell…………………and suddenly convert himself to loving and caring grand son…………………which always escapes from her plans……………….

And sometimes a different family person convince rohan and pari……………………………………………

And sometimes……………………

She is so surprised.

At that time….

Suddenly there is raining…..

And she ran towards and start drencing

She is dancing in rain

And maan  simply staring at her

Arre aankh se boond gira koi
Chingari ka tukda jala koi
Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara..

Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara..
Ghan itna baras ke galne lagoon
Main paani ke upar tarne lagoon...

Behne de mujhe behne de mujhe behne de
Behne de ghanghor ghata behne de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai behne de nadiyaa ki tarah
Shart lagi hai mar jaane ki jeena hai toh pyaar mein...

Deh kahi bhi ho mera, jaan rakhi hai yaar mein,
Beh jaa beh jaa, hai saagar ka kehna,
Beh jaa beh jaa, hai nadiyaa ko behna,

Patte se tapakti boond ki aawaz sunai di thi
Nadiyaan mein tapk aur gum ho jaa, beh gaya beh gaya.
Jo rah gaya rah gaya.

Behne de mujhe behne de..

Mera pal pal ang ang bhar diya,
Tune jaan pe junoon sa kar diya,
Mera hai kya jo main haar doon,
Jaan teri hai tujh pe vaar doon.

Doob gaye jo suna hai saare
Tere dere aate hai,
Dil ke chullu mein bechare,
Doobkiya gote khaate hai,

Beh jaa, beh jaa, Chal tod kinaare ko,
Beh jaa, beh jaa, dhar le majdhaare ko,
Chingaari uda ke raakh se, ek boond gira ke aankh se,
Chalne ka ishara kar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya
Sab bhar gaya bhar gaya...

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 12:52pm | IP Logged
Awasome update
wow maan confessed his love to her!!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 2:39pm | IP Logged
lovely update dear

continue soon
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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 4:30pm | IP Logged

wow..awesome update.

love it
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Posted: 08 August 2011 at 6:41pm | IP Logged
great part...loved the way maan proposed to geet
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Awasome update
wow maan confessed his love to her!!!
Continue soon

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