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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 21)

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Posted: 04 July 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged
awesome update

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Awesome update
loved it
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great part continue soon
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Posted: 05 July 2011 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

add me to ur pm list ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
lovely part...people r shocked that he is smiling
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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
nice one...
so dadi ma playing cupid..
lets c whether dadi's plan succeeds
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Posted: 09 July 2011 at 7:34am | IP Logged
What happened yar. When u wil update it yar. Hamesha 2 din mein update karti thi ab kya hua? Do continue soon cant wait.

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First fall sorry guys.

For delay in update

So enjoy…………….

 

 

Geet is not in her mood

Suddenly she saw a person……………….

She just rooted on seeing the person

A scream escaped……..

Saying DEV

He is DEV SHERGIL…………………..

She got scared…………..

She don't know what to do

Mean time dadimaa wondered what's wrong with geet.

She is pale.

Her face turn s white…………….at that time.

Suddenly phone rings

It is from maan…………………

Geet looked at the number……………………………………

She picked the number……………..

Sir………….

Maan :geet

Sir……………..

She said no words……………………….

Suddenly maan felt something bad……………..

He just drove to the mall.

He just came to dadimaa……

Dadi where is geet…………………..

Beta she is in the mall………………….

On the otherhand.geet is hiding behind………..a pile of dresses.to avoid the person………….

Maan looked at her…………………

She came and hug him.

Its ok geet.lets us go from here…………….

He just took her from the place……………….

He just wonder who is the person……………………….

He dropped dadimaa.to the mansion.

Dadimaa worried suddenly what happened to geet…………………..

Maan told that there is a problem………………………..

They droved to their flat.

Geet sat in the sofa……………

Maan held….her hand………….

And she hugged him…………..

I saw him………….she wisphered……………

What.

I saw him…………………………….

I saw dev…..

He came .to find me……………..and children………

He will take away……………….and even he will reach………………………bauji also……………….i need to meet bauji

Soon………………..

It s ok geet bauji is fine….

He made her to sleep………………….

And he touched her forehead with his hands………………………..

That is sure that dev is here…………………….

He need to find the details.

He find geet in sleep……………….

He called the detective…………………

At that time………………………………….geet holding his hand tightly

Geet.its a promise.he  never come near to u.don't worry…………………

Everything will be alright………….

And now I want to shift to u a safe place…….

He then call adi………………….

Adi reached home…………………………..

First shocked to find msk in his house………………………

Sir aap mere ghar pe……

Tumara ghar.

Yes sir.geet is like sister……………………..

I mean distant relative to me sir.

And he saw geet on the sofa……………

Sir.what happened togeet.

No she is not in unconscious………………………….

Adi.don't ask any questions now.i want to shift geet and kids to km.right now……………………….

I will answer your questions later……..

Now do what I say.

With that he called his driver and gave some instructons………..

And he also called dadimaa.and told her that for some reasons geet and kids are going to…stay at km.

Wah mera pota yeh to badi fast nikala.muje jyada mehenat karne ke jarorat nahii aur bahu ko…..ghar le arara…………….hay

Oh babaji…………………mein aaj bahut khush hoo…………………

And she called……………nakul and given some instructions…………………….

Next day…….

Geet woke up and find her in km…….

It is a large room.

And she shocked.

Mein yeha kya kar rahee hoo………….

Khurana mansion.

She looked at the time……………….

It is 10 :30

Itne jya da sogayee mein

Ho.rohan aur pari kaha hay

To find maan and dadimaa……..looking at her.

Sir.thank u for saving me.but I need to go to home………………….

Its ok.geet.

Geet is worrying…………….

He is in delhi.

What if he reaches them…………

She came down to find rohan is very much busy with dadimaa….in questioning her regarding something.

But where as maan is working in his laptop………and pari lying on sofa playing with a new bunny in her hand………smiling.

Where maan is also smiling at her….

Dadimaa:are geet beta kaise hoo aap.ab apke tabiyat kaise hay……………….

Beta tum kamjoor hoo.lo yeh juice peeloo…………

Sir.we need togo home………………………..

But he is not listening.

What is wrong with him.I need togo from here..he is here..

He then turn tofind..adi looking at her

Bhayaa……………………aap yeha

Geet don't worry it is better u nee dto stay here…………

Ur and kids cloths are here…………….

Its is ok.

Calm down.

Please

Geet is shocked………….

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