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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 16)

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 8:44am | IP Logged
nice update .. 

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Posted: 23 June 2011 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Awesome update 
pari and maan friendship awesome 
loved it
pls cont soon
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awww thats shooo sweet 

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loved it...maan getting comfortable with the kids and getting closer to geet...
pl cont soon
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buddy i love your story but send pm..plz
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Geet woke up.

To find fresh roses in her room……

She smiled……………………..

At the roses………………

And looked at pari and rohan…staring at her

Yesa kya dekh rahe hoo….

Maasi u look beautiful when u smile……………..

She reached to the office ………………………

She wished all………………..

She enter into the cabin.

She looked at his cabin…but no one is there.

She checked the watch……………………..

What's wrong.he never come late.

Is he feeling well………………………..

Fever…….ya……………he played in water

For long time……….

Is he struck with cold.

With all these questions.

She called km………………

The phone picked up by chandu

Hello chandu here……………………………………

Ji mein geet baat kar rahii hoo.kya mein maan sir se baat kar sakthe hoo kya.

Ji maan sir toh ghar pe nahii hay

Office ke liye nikal gayee

Office ke liye nikal gayee

Yeh kaise ho sakthe hay

Wohbtoh office pe bhi nahii hay…………………………………

Her heart beating very fast……………….

She felt restlessness.

Trying for his mobile but switched off………………..

She felt weird sensation…….

She is not in senses……………………..

After noon.

She keep on checking for him………..

At the afternoon………she didn't even done lunch.

Her mind is filled with lot of thoughts…..

She didn't find him……………..

Suddenly tears formed in her eyes………..

Suddenly there is a moment in his cabin.

Turned to find him.

She is so happy………….cannot control her emotions.

She hugged him…….

First taken back.

Then he felt something different in her eyes

The feeling he wanted to……………….

But the realization struck her and she left the cabin……..

He felt confused.

Actually he is on work……………………………

The detective he appointed want to meet him personally…………………

He need to switch off his mobile………….as he donot want to disturb.

He got information.

 

Her name is geet handa…………

Student of darjelling…………….

She is topper of the school and also college.

Fathername is mohindar handa.

She has sister …

Meera handa.married to dev shergil……………

Two children rohan and pari…………………………

Geet used to stay with them………………..

Until her father got a severe heart attack.

Her sister died of some disease…………………..cannot diagnosed the disease is……….

But according to the detective information.

There is suspicious of her sister's death

And she escaped from Mumbai….onto sudden.

He told detective to collect information…….and ordered him tobe careful to not to share this to anyone……………………..

He know who he is………………………….

Geet to the detective words………………geet is not safe…………………………..

I need to protect geet and also children.

No way geet………no one can touch u until im here………………………..

No one….can dare to touch my geet………….

A firm in his voice…………………….

His thoughts gone out…..

Where he checked his mobile……….missed calls………….of geet…….

And he also called km to find that geet called him……………

He felt happy that she care him,

Thank god.dadi is not there she went for marriage of her friends grand daughter…other wise…..

She will become another detective for him……

Turned to find geet came from washroom……………

Geet I know that u miss me a lot…………………….

But I had gone for ur work itself………………………….

No geet…………………………………

No one come near to u and kids…..until im there

First I need to find someother information from aditya……………………..

Sooner I will find the truth

And trust me geet let me find the person who scared u this much that u cannot be urself…………………

I will make sure he will see the hell…………………

And that's a promise

But who is the person

That day.she hugged him and cried………………………………..

Who is that animal………………..

Geet ur so nave and innocent………….and this is the reason im attracted to u.

And even rohan and pari also became part of my life

And I will not let anyone to harm u…………………………….

Just then he got a call……………………….

Sir…………………………

He said something

Ok lets us meet in personal……………………………….

I will meet u tomorrow at sharp 11 0 clock at rock gardens.

See……….u…………………………

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