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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 14)

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged
wow great update
but dont u think it was too short?
anyways i loved it

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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
Awesome part l
loved it 
i have a request u inst of writing song ,
download song u cant cont stroy more space will get.
sory dont mind
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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 7:37am | IP Logged
great but do send pm to me
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Both are lost in each other

Suddenly she realized that………………………….

And her flash back…………………………………….

His sister saying……..to her

Choti………….

Didi………….

Pata hay……………………..

Didi aap hamesha iss chand ko kyon dekhtee hay.

Kyonki yeh chand hamara takdeer likhtha hay

Tak deer…………….

Ha usee chandini raat mein………..ek sapnoon ka rajkumar ayaga….safeed ghodi par aur tuje lekarchalaya jayaga……………….shaadi karegaa………………

Nahii didi……………….mein apko chod kar  nayee javuga………………………….

Lekin didi …..mein rajkumar se shaadi kyon karoo…………….pehle apke shaadi hogi naa..

Kisne kaha hay tume………………..

Just then mein ne…

Turned to find their father looking at the two princess…………….

Mere dono pari oo ke liye rajkumar ayege…………………aur dono khush rahenge…………………………….

They both hugged their mohindar……………………….

Suddenly tears falled from the eyes……………

He saw it and hugged her……..

As the tears are tearing him apart

He felt like hundred needles pierced her heart.

He hugged her tightly

And her sobs and trembling……………in his hands………

They stayed for longer………………

Suddenly the light s are on………

And she left for home.

Wait I will drop u……………………………………

And they drove to the car……………

Tears are flowing………………..

She is alone………………………

He stopped the car.and hugged her

Geet please don't cry…I don't know why.but I cannot see tears..in your eyes…………….

Just then she fainted………\

He got panicked…………..

And he drove her to his mansion………………………

He took her to his room……….

Made her to sleep on his bed..took his sandles off.and called nakul t o call doctor………..

The doctor came in…………………………..

He examined her

I think she is too stress and she had not taken her food……………properly

She needs to take rest…………………

And gave medicines\

And don't worry she will be open her eyes soon………..

And he left there…………….

Geet open her eyes…………………

She found her in a strange room……..big room……………………

And neatly arranged………………

As she about to get from the kingsize bed……

He came into the room……………..

Geet:take rest…………..ur not well ur fainted….that is why…………..i brought u here….

U need to take food and also medicines…………………………….

Other wise who are going to look after ur prince and princess…….

She is shocked about him…………

Maan singh khurana…is the same person who make the office people life hell………………………………….

And she don't want to change his mood.

So quickly she ate the food and also medicines.

Nowit is too late….so u take rest……

And I will be in the other room.no need to worry………………………

And take rest……………………….

With that he donot want to conversation………..as..he knows she never opens up.

And the tears………………

Why she is so upset.

What should be happened to this 18 yr old girl……………………………..

As she need to take care of 2 little kids…….and also her father……………………

Something drastic happened…….

And he know he need to find out the fact..and who is the person…………behind this…………….

And he needs a person who he can trust

Yes…

Aditya

I mean adi………

His father is accountant here…and now he…..

Brilliant and loyal to khurana constructions and also khuran a empire…………

Yes………

I need to talk to him when he returns from Mumbai…………………….

And misha also talking about some detectives………………………………..need to find out the truth

I know geet ur strongs……….and u never share pain to anyone…..but  I will make sure to find out the truth ,,,,,,,,,,somebody had hurted u a lot………and I will also find the truth and also person…who is behind all these

And I will promise to make his life hell…

I will make sure that ……………………….

The person caused tears to my angel's life……………………..

With firm decision he closed his eyes

To find the geet in his dreams…………………………………….

He knows the entry of geet had made his life……………………………..

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 11:39am | IP Logged

great update...once maan gets to know the truth i'm sure he will make dev pay heavily

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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
loved ur ff plz add me in ur pm list waiting for next updates
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Posted: 20 June 2011 at 5:20pm | IP Logged
wow superb 
loved it
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