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the new story pt 3 updt 07/11 last part sepilogue (Page 13)

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supreb update.
love it

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ur ff is simply awesome
plz PM me by the time u update the next part
thanx
and good job

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more intersting 
loved it 
pls cont
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loved the update...
maan very eager to know abt geet...
pl cont soon
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Geet phone rang…..

Maan:on the line

Geet there is a party at the client place

We need to go…………………

Get ready in the evening

Party.at the evening.

How can I;as adi bhayya is not there

She looked at pinky….

She informed pinky.she is in relif because

Rohan and pari are great kids they never trouble anyone…..

As she is getting ready

Pinky came into the room

Wow geet aaj party mein sab ke nazar tum par hogi………..dekhna………………………

Kya karoon……………………….

Naii pinky.i don't like anyone attention…….

Wow geet ur so lucky

U know every time…………..

Sasha and………others………… trying to get him……….

At that time……………

Maan is at party

In his black.toxedo.looking extremely handsome………………..

Ladies are gaped at him…………..

He is near at the bar

And then mr Mehta came…………….

He introduced into his son

Mr rahul Mehta

A person came…………………..

He is good………..

He is going to say

Then the person………………….

His eyes are transfixed at the hallway

Saying wow……beautiful.

Maan turned to find

His angel at the door

She is in white saree…………………

Looking like angel from the different world

Her free hair

Flowing

Everyone party eyes are on her……………………

She is fixed on looking at him

His looks

He saw rahul disguisting eyes on her

Cannot bear a minute

He moved towards her

And dragged her to the corner……………………

His eyes are fix on her

Just then rahul came and introduced with her

She felt uncomfortable for his gaze.

She want to runaway

She cannot stand………….

Maan see this from distance……..

And within a minute she is in dance floor

Sir I don't know how to dance…………………….

Maan is not speaking.

As his senses is filled witn her

Her smooth skin of the waist………………..

And her scent……………….

He is not in his senses.

Moving……………………………

The song starts………..

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai Dhadkane Meri Sunn, Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal main Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun ... Whole 2x
Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu , Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeey
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo , Chahe Jo Ho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai... Repeat [ 1x ] - Em|D|C|G,Em|C|Am ..
Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane , Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane , Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla...
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aaye , Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane , Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota...
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo , Mere Jism O Jaan Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo , Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai... Repeat [ 1x ]

Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane , Siney Main De Chhup Jaane , Tujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha ... ? 
Tujhse Hain MujhKo Paane...Yaado K Woh Nazrane , Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera
Teri Yaado Main Rahoo , Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi , Teri Aankho Main Milu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main ... Sang Chalu 
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai... Repeat [ 1x ]  ..

they lost in each other


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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 4:35am | IP Logged
superbbb update
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Posted: 18 June 2011 at 4:37am | IP Logged
rahul here also...i so hate him...nice part...
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