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YOU NEVER KNOW (MAANEET) - # 1 (Page 8)

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Posted: 24 May 2011 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Really nice part!!
Thanks for the PM...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 4:25am | IP Logged
nice update dear. thanks for that
 
loved it
 
geet tufan has migrated to India. pata nahi maan ko haal kya hoga
 
continue soon buddy
 
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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Hi All ...Thanks for your support...Here is the next part
 
 
Part 5
Next morning in khurana mansion...Maan is cooled off and is all set for his day ahead...He gives call to Shahsa
 
Maan:"Shasha..I want to meet you and Adi for London project at 10:00 am sharp"
 
Shasha:"Sure MK...I will call Adi.."
 
Shasha(self thought):"Adi now u are gone...I am not going to inform u bout the meeting...Aur akele me MK meri baat acche se sunenge bhi and I will get good chance to to impress MK...aaj us meeting me sirf main aur MK..."
 
Maan makes call to his sec pinky and asks her to set up all other meetings for the day...
 
Mr Khurana:"Maan... beta aaj koi board meeting hai nahi...so Mr Handa, me and our group is going to our golf club...U handle office...
"
Maan:"Ok Dad"
 
Mrs Khurana:"Maan.. mujhe orphanage jana hai...can you drop me their..."
 
Maan:"Ok Mom..."
 
Maan enetrs his office and everyone as usual starts being desipline...After giving some dictation to Pinky he is ready for the meeting with shahsa and Adi...Shahsa enters his cabin fixing her hair and dress
 
Maan:"Shasha..where is adi.."
 
Shasa:"I left a message for him as I coud not connect to him through phone...Let's start Mk...when adi comes we will start with his stuff...he must have got stuck with other stuff"
 
Maan(Angry):"Other stuff..."
 
Shasha gives her wicked smile...they continue with there meeting with shahsa being more interested in impressing Maan than the meeting...
 
Geet enters the office and almost everyone is happy to see her...Life comes to the office..
 
Adi sees Geet:"hey Geet tum yahan...aaj suraj kidhar se nikla hai.."
 
Geet:"Stop Adi...I have come to meet Maan"
 
Maan:"Maan sir Geet...he is busy in some meeting..."
 
Geet:"I immedietly want to meet him...pinky se baat kertee hoon"
 
Pinky:"Geet tu yahan kya ker rahe hai..."
 
Geet:"Pinky tu mujhe boss nahi apni dost manti hain na..."
 
Pinky:"Haan Geet...per kya hua..."
 
Geet:"Mujhe Maan se milna hai...kab free hain woh..."
 
Pinky:"Per Maan sir to aaj 4pm ke baad he free honge.."
 
Geet(self thought): "Abb main guilt feeling itne der apne ander nahi rakh saktee...mujhe maan se milna hee hoga...abhi aur isi waqt..."
 
Geet is planning to enter Maan's cabin and Shasha and Geet see's each other...
 
Geet(self thought): "To Maan is idiot ke saath meeting me busy hain...good...now I got more better reason to disturb this meeting"
 
Shasha(self thought): "To aaj raeeshzadi office aayee hain...kaam hum kerte hain aur mewe yeh madam khatee hai...Ek baar main MK ko impress kerloon...phir isse batati hoon shasha kya cheeze hai..."
 
Geet enters Maan cabin without even knocking...Maan is shocked to see geet...Shahsa is shocked to see Geet in maan's cabin...she never expected Geet in Maan's cabin and is always happy with their difference.
 
Maan:"Geet tum yahan...mere cabin me...kya ker rahi ho yahan tum...don't you see i am busy in meeting...get out of my office right now..."
 
Shahsa:"Geet...if you don't know...this is a office...not a party place...aur yaha pe kaam hota hai party nahi...I think aap galti se galat jagah aa gayeen hai..."
 
Maan sees shahsa and signals her to stop...he doesn't like the way she talked to Geet but does't say anything...He thinks insulting Geet is only his Birth right...
 
Geet:"Maan mujhe aapse bhoot important baat kernee hai..."
 
Maan:"Geet mujhe pata tumharee impt baat kaisee hote hai...aur usme mujhe koi interest nahi hai..."
 
Geet:"Maan...aapko meri baat sunni he hogee..."
 
Maan now losing his patient...last thing he wanted today was to see Geet...He just comes ahead hold geet's arm and put her out of the door...
 
Geet is shocked and stays there for 2 mints
 
Geet(self thought): "Mujhe yeh guilt feeling jaldi se khatam kernee hai...aaj mujhe kaal kee galtee keliyie kisi bhi tarah Maan ko cheer up kerna he hoga...Unhe accha lage ya na lage...mujhe unhe cheer up kerna hai...aur yeh guilt feeling se free hona hai...Aur yeh shasha...isse bhi sabak sikhana hai...kaise bola isne mujhse...Maan ke wajah se main chup ho gayee warna...chalo chill Geet Chill..."
 
Geet again enters Maan's office...
 
Geet:"Maan mujhe aapse 2 mint baat kernee hai...plz Maan...akele mein"
 
Maan:"Geeet...tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha..."
 
Geet:"aap bhi sun lijiye.. main nahi jaoongee...main apna program badal ker yaha apse baat kerne aayeehoo...aur aap...mujhe 2 mint dijiye..."
 
maan thinks...better give her 2mints rather than listening to her blabber...
 
Maan:"Shahsa...can we meet again after 5.mints"
 
Shahsa not at all happy leaves the room...Geet gives her a teasing smile...she loves to irritate Shahsa...
 
Maan:"abb bolo...aisee kuan see afat aa gayee hai..."
 
Geet:"Maan...main kal se guilt feel ker rahee hoon...maine aapse itne bure se baat kiya...and I really hurt you...u were really disturb coz of me...I want to cover it up...I want to cheer you up"
 
Maan:"Geet...tumhe kya lagta hai...tumhare jaisee ladki kee batoon ko main itna importance donga jo abhi tak disturb rahoonga...I am fine...u don't need to feel guilty...just go now...I am really busy to listen to Ur useless guilty feeling stuff.."
 
She doesn't move so he gives her a fake kind of smile and says
 
Maan:"Dekho main cheered up hoon...aab jaaooo"
 
Geet:"aap cheered up hain ya nahi...that is not what matters to me...I did wrong with you...and I need to cheer you up...and that's for my satisfaction...I just want to be mentaly free"
 
Maan:"Tou sorry boldo aur jaoo yahan se..."
 
Geet:"Sorry main apse nahi bolungee...U instigated me to do that but I want to get out of the guilt..."
 
Maan silently gets up...holds Geets arm and put her out of the door ...he calls pinky to send Shahsa and also send Adi if he is in the office...
 
                                           ...Next to be continued    Part 6 Link


Edited by tellyme - 03 June 2011 at 7:22am

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
AMAZING...
CHEER UP WIDOUT SAYIN SORRY...

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 5:59am | IP Logged
wowww awesomeee
this sasha naaa oh goddd
bt lets see wt geet does

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
aree yaar ye geet itne buddu kyu hai.  I m sure u r gg to make her bit matured

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Posted: 25 May 2011 at 6:01am | IP Logged
nice update...plz continue soon...

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simply fabulous

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