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YOU NEVER KNOW (MAANEET) - # 1 (Page 76)

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Hi Dear All,
 
Thank you all so so much for your beautiful and sweet comments. Please continue putting up the comments and they are the energy giver and guide me for future updates...
 
Here I am with next part
 
 
Thanks,
 
Anu
 
Part 21
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Maan cathces the earliest flight for India...
 
Maan(ST):"yeh abb Dadima ko achanak kya sujhee...aabb khana pina band ker rakha hai...abb unhe kya ho gaya"
 
In Delhi...Dadima calls Geet
 
Dadima:"Geet Maan aa rahe hain aur aaj pahuch jayenge..."
 
Geet:"per Dadima yeh kya ...apne apna khana pina band ker rakha hai...apne mere liye yeh kya kiya...Main bhi nahi khaoongee jab tak aapp nahi khayengee"
 
Dadima:"aapp uske chinta bilkul nahi karen...yeh to apne bachoo ke khushee kee liye ek minnat hai...aur aapko bhukhe rehne kee jaroorat nahi hai...
 
sukhe chehre se Maan se milengee kya...aapp to bass maan ke aane ke tayaree kijiye...Maan jab aapse pehlee baar milen to unke hosh udd jaye...baass iskee tayaree kijiye...aur apne Mom se baat kijiye jo humne kaha hai uske bare me"
 
Everyone knows that Maan is coming back and they are excited but Mrs Khurana is disturbed by dadima's anshan...
 
Geet(to her Mom):"MOM aapkoo pata hai...Maan ajj raat aa rahe hain India..."
 
Mrs H:"Haan beta pata hai...bahut acchee baat hai...kitne dinoon baad Maan aa rahe hai...aabb unse milne ka hum sab ka mann ker raha hai..."
 
Geet:"MOM aisee baat hain to hum kaal Maan aur unkee puree family ko yahan dinner pe kyun nahi invite karen...chotee see family gathering...kaisa rahega..."
 
Mrs H:"aarre beta yeh to tune bahut acche baat boli...kaal Maan ke pasad ka khana main khud apne haathoon se banaoongee..."
Geet:"woh mom...desert kee kheer main banaooo...achchee lagtee hai na sabkoo meri kheer..."
 
Mrs H:"Achcha...main Dev ko bhi bula letee hoon kyun...Maan mil bhi lenge Dev se"
 
Geet:"Mom abb Dev ko bulane kii kya jaroorat hai...hum Maan ko welcome ker rahe hain...Dev ko nahi..."
 
but mrs H doesn't listen and also calls Dev...
 
Geet(ST - in her room):"yeh mom bhi na...chalo chodo...dev kee kahanee abb khatam he hone wali hai...OMG...Geet kaal Maan yahan aayenge..."
 
Thinking this shiver goes thru her body
 
When at night Maan raches his home...he asks about Dadi...mrs k. says she don't know why Dadima did this...Maan asks nakul to bring food to Dadima's room and rushes to Dadima's room...
 
he feeds her and ive her water...tears come Dadi's eyes to see the love of her Pota
 
Maan:"dadima...aisa kyun kiya aapne...kitna pareshan tha main rashte bhar..."
 
Dadima:"Bass mannat maanee thee..."

Everyine is in dadima's room and chatting to Maan...Mrs K informed him that Mrs h is very about Maan being back and she has invited Maan and all of them for dinner next night...Maan didn't want this at all
 
Maan:"nahi Mom abb kal main kahin nahi jana chata...ghar per hee rahoonga"
 
dadima:"to kya woh tera ghar nahi hai...Vimla ne itne pyar se bulaya hai...hum sab jayenge..."
 
Mrs k:"haan aur woh Dev bhi aa raha hai...usse bhi millena..."
 
This ran like a thorne within Maan...he could do nothing he have to go...
 
when everyone was gone...vicky and dadima called Geet
 
Dadima:"Geet...tera Maan aa gaya hai...aur kal woh aapke ghar dinner pe bhi aa rahe hain..."
 
Geet(excited):"sachii Dadi ma..."
 
Dadima:"hoon hoon khushi to aapkee awaz me jhalak rahee hai...aur aabb bilkul rona dhona nahi samjhee...kal Maan se baat kijiye aapp...aur aisee tayaree kijiye kee apko dekhte he Maan sahabzade ke hosh udd jayen..."
 
she cut the phone
 
Geet felt shy at dadi's word...

Geet(ST):"Maan yahan aa gaye hain...dil ker raha hai kab miloon unse...yeh mera dil itnee joor joor se dharak kyun raha hai...Geet thand rakh...baas shant reh"
 
Geet(ST):"geet dekh...Maan abhi bhoot gusse me hain...isliye kaal tujhse bura bhala keh sakte hain...bilkul shant rahegee tu...jo bolenge sun lena...pehle unka gussa shant ho jaye...phir jo bhi woh bura bhala kahenge unka hisab le lena baad me...lekin kaal bilkul chup chap sun lena jo bhi woh bolenge...phir se ladai nahi ker lena unse..."
 
next day after making kheer...Geet went to select a dress for herself...
 
her hand and legs were shivering as evening was approaching...she was getting restless...
 
Geet(ST):"babaji meri madad kerna aaj..."
 
In the evning...everyone came before Maan...Dadima as soon as she came went to Geet's room...
 
Geet:"Dadima...aapp aa gaye...sab aa gaye hain...Maan bhi aa gaye...mere to hath pair thande parr rahe hain...main kaise lag rahee hoon..."
 
Dadima:"Geet shant ho jaiye...Maan abhi nahi aaye hain...app bhoot hee pyaree lag rahee hain...bilkul pari jaisee...yeh lijiye pani pijiye aur shant ho jaiyee..."
 
Maan on his way approaching Handa Villa
 
Maan(ST):"Maan bass use avoid he kerna tu...just don't pay any attention"
 
But as he is approaching HV his heart beat starts increasing...he starts getting restless...his inner voice telling him "baas ek baar"...
Maan enters the house...he doesn't see Geet...his eyes unkowingly looking for her...
 
Maan(ST):"achcha hai nahi dikhee abb tak"
 
Maan is talking to All
 
Geet heard Maan's voice...she could not wait...
 
Maan's eyes still searching for her...while he was taking blessings of elders he heard a bangles sound and he looked up...

She was coming down the stairs in her light pink silk evening gown...
 
her hair made in bun and small strands of her hair encircling her pink face...he looked up...
 
cannot move his eyes off her angelic face...her beautiful bright eyes... moist...her pink lips...moist...her pink pearl bangles ... her matching earing all adding up and making her look like a real angel...his eyes were fixed at her...
 
She looked at him...ran toward him...Maan was lost in her...and unknowingly Maan spreaded his hands as to welcome her within his self...
 
Geet ran and hugged him tightly...unkown of who else were there...she kept her head on his chest...and both her hand held his shoulder parallely from back...
 
Maan enclosed his hand to bring her within his embrace...they were lost...peace flowed between them...they spoke no words
 
 
every one except dadi and viccky(who were very happy) was shocked to see this...Dev just looked at the scene open mouthed...is this the same Geet who don't even let him touch her hand...
 
After a while Geet spoke
 
Geet(very softly):"kitna intezar kerwaya Maan apne mujhe"
 
This broke Maan's trance...he came to reality...and removed Geet from himself...
 
Maan:"behave yourself...koi tamasha nahi chahiye mujhe...samjhee tum...just be away from me..."
 
Geet:"Maan yeh kaisee baat ker rahe hain aapp...aisa mat kijiye...meri baat suniye Maan..."
 
Maan:"Excuse me..."
 
he then met everyone and tried to make the situation normal...he shaked hand with Dev and gave a look at Geet...Geet was constantly looking at Maan...
 
Maan:"so Dev...you are a luccky guy...so how are you both doing together..."
 
Dev(who did not want anyone to know that Geet was insulting him):"very nice...we both really enjoy each other's company"
 
Maan gave a look at Geet who nodded her head in NO No No...Maan just gave a sarcastic smile to Geet
 
Geet(ST):"yeh Dev apne aap ko kya samjhta hai...we are enjoying our meeting...thorda sa bhi sharm nahi hai isme...aur yeh Maan bhi na...mere alawa sabkee baat sunnee hai inhe...Geet thand rakh...Maan pe gussa kerne ka samay nahi hai yeh..."
 
Viccky called Geet in corner
 
Viccky:"Geet cool reh...itna pareshan nahi hoo...aram aram se...yeh le appetizer le ja..."
 
Geet picked a tray of appetizer and went to the place where all men were sitting...she served it to mr. k, daarjii, her Dad and then went to Maan
 
Geet:"Maan yeh appetizers try kijiye..."
 
Maan:"No thanks...mere hath hain...main le loonga...u go enjoy ur party...Dev ko serve karo..."
 
Geet made a face to say plese to him but he turned his face and started talking to daarjii
 
Dev was ready to take appetizer from Geet's hand but Geet turned other way...
 
Dadima is looking at Maan's behaviour quitely and her anger on him is rising
 
At the dinner time Maan praises the food made by mrs Handa..."Aunty apke haath ke khane kee baat he kuch aur hai..."
 
Then after dinner...everyone takes Kheer...after taking a spoon of kheer in his mouth Maan says
 
Maan:"wow aunty this is delicious..."
 
Geet feels very proud and happy
 
Mrs H:"Haan per yeh maine nahi banaya...Geet ne banaya hai..."
 
Maan coughed
 
Maan:"lagta hai kuch atak gaya hai...main throw kerke aata hoon..."
 
Geet really felt Bad...and dadima getting angrier at Maan...she was actually furious at Maan's behaviour...
 
Geet ran behind Maan in the wash room...
 
She waited for him outside when Maan came out he saw Geet there...
 
Geet said nothing just came near him...Maan turned his face to the other side...Geet slowly came nearer to him...Maan's heart started beating faster...

Geet softly place one of her hand in one of Maan's hand...Maan closed his eyes...to feel her hand...she put her head on his chest and then she place her other hand on his face and started rubbing his cheeks from her thumb...Maan just closed his eyes for the moment and let Geet do what she was doing...he could not move...chill passed thru his whole body...this was a whole one month seperation which was making them hungrier for each other's touch...he tightened the hold on Geet's hand...he was skipping his breath...he felt heavenly
 
then Geet said
 
Geet:"Maan kyun khud ko aur mujhe saaza de rahen hain...itna gussa kyun Maan..."
 
this woke Maan up...
 
Maan getting furious at Geet for doing this to him and he also got irritated with himself...
 
Maan:"yeh do tarfa khel mere sathh maat khelo...jaoo uss Dev kee bahoon mein...ya phir ek mahine me usse dil bhar aaya tumhara...  don't play game with me...samjhee"
 
Geet got shocked with Maan's word...but said nothing...Maan went from there and after a while when geet came to senses she realised Maan had gone...
 
Maan went out...said he was tired enough and left for his home...
 
just after a while dadima and Viccky understood smthg wrong and they went to see Geet...they saw Geet quiet in her room...
 
Dadima:"Geet kya baat hai beta...Maan ne kuch kaha aapse..."
 
Geet:"Nahi Dadima...baas aise hee...naraz hain bhoot mujhse..."
 
Dadima:"Aapp nahi batana chahtee to theek hai...per hume pata hai Maan ne kuch bhoot bura behave kiya hai aapse...unhe aabb apse Mafi mangnee hee hogee...Bhoot jyada ker diya abb...kisi bhi baat ke hadd hotee hai..."
 
Dadima and Viccky immedietly leaves for KM...when they reach there...
 
Dadima orders Maan to meet her in her room
 
---Next to be continued

Precap1 :"Geet...mujhe pata hai tum mujhse naraz nahi ho...aabb bachpana chodo aur darwaza kholo..."

 Link Part 22

 
 
Hi All Buddies, please press like button if you like it and please continue to Give your super duper comment...Sometimes I am not able to reply but I love to read your comments so so much...
 
Thanks,
Anu


Edited by tellyme - 27 June 2011 at 2:36pm

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
yippee...me first...PartyPartyPartyDancingDancing
awesome update...ClapClap
love it...
dadima is sooo swt...Smile
geet made kheer for maan...BlushingBlushing
maans restless to see geet love it...
he denies  it but his eyes unkowingly looking for her...
oh god dev is invited for the dinner...AngryAngry
hate dev i want mant beat him .black and blue...OuchOuch
i hope dadi gave maan some sence...
cont soon...
waiting 4 the next...Smile


Edited by butterfly.tanu - 24 June 2011 at 7:01am

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 6:39am | IP Logged
nice updateClap

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
nice update...thanks 4 pm...cont soon...

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Posted: 24 June 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
wow nice part plz update te next part quickly cant wait to read it plz update it fast

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fabulous update

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awesome update...typical MSK...n typical geet,,,,,,,,,,,,,luvd it
cant wait 2 read d nxt part

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