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chapter8

 
Madhu:aap bhaiya par vishwass nahi karti
 

Nakku:jis tarah se behave karte hai,pata nahi,,,sab kuch alag hai.Yahan pe kab koi khush hota hai aur kab koi dukhi samajh hi nahi aata...

 
Madhu:aap abhi yahan nai hai ,isliye aisa lag raha hai
 
 
Nakku:par shaadi se pehle aisa nahi tha,main ek baar mil chuki hoon inse ,inhone mujhe lift di thi
 
 
Madhu:bhai aache insaan hai
 
 
Nakku:yeh mujhe pata hai,isiliye to maa ne inko dii ke liye pasand kiya tha
 

Madhu:aap pichli baaton kon bhool jayi ye,ab sach yeh hai ke aap bhai ki patni hai.Main aapse yehi kehna chahti hoo,mere bhaiya mein zindagi mein bohut kuch saha hai ab aap unhe koi takleef mat dena

 
Nakku:Sahil,,,,,,,,,,,woh kalatdidi kahan hai?
 

Madhu:woh is duniye mein nahi rahi,wo...

 
Nakku:kya?
 

Madhu:bhabhi,aap jaankar kya karen gi

 
Nakku:mujhe batao,jab mein inse pehli baar mili thi mujhe sab theek laga ,par shaadi waale din sab ajeeb sa tha,mera kehne ke ka matlab wahan inki aur se shaadi pe koi bhi nahi tha
 

Madhu:bhai apne gharwalon se rishta kab ka tod chuke hai

 
Nakku:par kyun,main unki patni patni hoon aur mujhe ye jaan ne ka haq hai
 

Madhu:Bhaiya ,yane ke poora patil pariwaar india aaya huya tha,kaladidi ki shaadi ke liye ,unki shaadi yahan ek software engineer se tai huyi thi Kishore jiju se,love marriage thi, jiju london mein ek hi saath university mein padte the,pehle to papa maane hi nahi the.Par unki patni kaise bhi papa ko mana liye.Sab khush the,kaladidi ki kushi ka to theekana hi nahi tha,bhaiya bhi bohut khush the.Par mehndi waali raat ko,didi ki saheliyon ne bahar junk khane ka plan banaya tha,mehndi ke baad jab sab apne apne ghar chale gaye the,didi aur unki saheliyaan bahar gayi thi,lekin tabhi woha bheed thi, kisi gang ka jhagda ho raha tha,kaafi bheed thi sab log dekh rahe rahe the, par didi ne un ladko ko rokne ki koshish ki,par wo gunde the aur didi ki baat nahi maan rahe the,sab wahan se darr kar chale gaye the,didi ki saheliyaan bhi,woh gunde bhi par wohan oar ek aadmi zakhmi pada tha,didi us aadmi ko hospital lekar gayi thi ,tabhi police wahan aayi aur pooch taash karne lagi,didi ne bola ke woh gawahi dengi,jab bhaiya ke phone karne par didi ne sab bataya ,toh bhaiya ghar se nikle the ,doosri aur se didi bhi hospital se chal padi thi ghar ki aor,tabhi didi ki gaadi ke saamne wo gunde aa gaye the,unhone ne didi ko dhamki di gawahi na dene ki,pat didi ne mana kar diya un logon ne didi ko car se bahar nikala,didi madad ke liye chila rahi thi par wahan koi nahi tha.Jab bhaiya wahan pahunche didi wahan sadak par thi,unka rape ho chuka tha.bhaiya didi ko wapas ghar laaye ,didi kuch bol nahi rahi thi.papa kaafi guusa the,unho ne ye baat sab se chupane ko bula.Par bhaiya kaafi gusse mein the,wo didi ko insaaf dilana chahte the.Didi kaafi der tak kuch nahi boli,sab unko sam bhalne ki koshish kar rahe the,Shaadi nahi ho payi,kuch din aise hi nikal gaye.jiju ne apne ghar waalon ko kaafi samjhane ki koshish ki thi ,par wo nahi maane.Jab bhaiya police station jaa rahe the to papa ne mana kar diya yeh waja dekar ki khandaan ki badnaami hogi ,,,,,,,,,,,par unki police main na report karne ki wajah kuch aor hi thi,sach toh kuch aor hi tha.

 
Nakku:kya tha sach?
 

Madhu:main tab india mein the,papa aksar mahine mein ek chakkar to india mein zaroor lagate the,mujhe nahi pata tha main unki najayez aulaad hoon

 
Nakku:(shocked)tum...inki sagi behen nahi ho
 

Madhu:nahi,main ...jis ladke ne didi ki yeh halat ki thi wo papa ke purane dost ka beta tha.Papa ke dost ko mere aur meri maa ke baare mein pata tha,usne papa ko dhamki thi ke agar uske bete ki khilaaf kuch huya to woh yeh baat prees mein faila dega.Jab bhaiya ko hamare baare mein pata chala to wo bahut gusse mein the,hamare ghar aaye the ,mumbai mein ,meri maa se baat karne ,main bhi thi yahan ,main kaafi choti thi ,mujhe aachi tara se yaad nahi hai ,par maine dekha tha bhaiya ki aankhon mein aansoon aur gussa dono hi the.Meri maa bhi ro rahi thi.jab bhaiya ne gusse mein pooch ki meri maa aisi zindagi kyun jee rahi hai.Tab maa ne mujhe mere room mein jaane ko bola ,maine waisa hi kiya par door pe hi khadi rahi jaan ne ke liye yeh kya baatein karen ge.Jo maine suna usse bahut zyaada dard pahooncha tha.Meri maa ne bataya ki papa ne unhe dhoka diya tha unhe khud papa ki pehli shaadi ke baare mein nahi pata tha,jab unhe pata chala tha tab tak main is duniye main aa chuki thi aur wo kuch nahi kar payi papa bohut aamir the.main maa ke saath hi london mein rehti hoon.Sahil bhi mere saath,kyun ke jab sahil is duniye mein aaya tha tab bhaiya ghar chod chuke the ,unke paas koi kaam nahi tha.Baaji bhi tab college mein tha,aur mujhe itni samajh nahi thi.

 
Nakku:kaladidi ki maut kaise huyi?
 

Madhu:papa ne apni poori takat laga di thi ke bhaiya kuch na kar sake,aur wahi huya jo papa chahtee the.Par kuch dino baad pata chala ki kaladidi maa ban ne waali hai,Papa ne bahut majboor kiya kaladidi ko abortion ke liye,par kaladidi ne mana kar diya,har roz jhagde hote rahe,phir ek din subah bhaiya hamare ghar aaye ,unhone maa ke saath kuch baat ki.Jab usi din bhaiya kaladidi ke saath aaye tab maa ne mujhe samjhay ke yeh mere bade bhai behen hai.Kaladidi ne muujhe pyaar se gale lagaya tha ,par bhaiya ne nahi tab maa ne mujhe samjhaya tha ke wo thodi der ke liye mujhse naraaz hai.Unhi dino bhaiya apne saath kisi ko laye the ,kishore jiju ko,kuch hi dino baad kaladidi ki kishore jiju se shaadi ho rahi thi,main bhi thi wohan,main baaji aur daayi maa se pehli baar wahan hi milli thi.Papa nahi the,kyunki woh chahte the,yeh shaadi naho,par kishore jiju kaladidi se sacha pyaar karte the is liye unhone kaladidi ko apnaya.bhaiya bhi hamara ghar chod chuke the aur kishore jiju ke ghar shift ho chuke the,baaji bhi wahan hi rehta,suna hai baaji anaath tha kishore jiju ke saath rehta hai,jiju ne use panah dii.Sab kuch accha jaa raha tha tabhi ek din maa ke tabiyat bohut zyaada khraab ho gayi thi,maa ko hospital mein admit hona pada tabhi kaladidi mujhe apne ghar le gayi thi aur wo pehli baar tha jab bhaiya ne mujhse baat ki thi,Sahil ke janam ke baad jab ek din papa ki call aayi tab kaladidi ki khushi ka to takana hi nahi tha,wo bol rahi thi papa unse milne chahte hai,apne naate ko dekhna chahte hai.Bhaiya is baat se koi zyaada kuch nahi the unhone kaladidi ko mana bhi kiya tha par kishore jiju ne kaladidi ka saath dekar bola ki unhe papa ko milne jana chahiye.Papa ko milne jaa rahe the kaladidi aur jiju ,sahil hamare saath ghar par hi tha tabhi call aaya ke unki gaadi ka accident ho gaya hai aur dono is duniye mein nahi rahe.Bhaiya ,hum sab kaafi udaas the,tab us din ke baad bhaiya ne kabhi papa se baat nahi ki.Meri maa ke paas kaafi paise the,unhone bhaiya ki help ki,jab doctors ne maa ko london mein ilaaz karwaane ko bola to bhaiya ne bhi saath diya,hum sahil ko apne saath hi le gaye the ,bhaiya ke kehne par ham sahil ko saath hi le gaye,main har saal yahan india aati hoon sahil ko lekar,ab doctors ne bhi bola hai meri maa kuch dino ki mehmaan hai,lekin bhaiya ab bhi maa ka ilaaz karwa rahe kyunki unhe lagta jab bhaiya sabse zyaada dukhi the maa ne bhaiya ka saath diya tha kaladidi ko hamare ghar rakh kar ,unki shaadi karwa kar.BHaiya in sab ka zimedaar papa ko maante hai.

 
Tears were falling from madhu's eyes.
 

Nakku:woh sahi hai

 
Madhu:sab pehle jaisa nahi ho sakta,jahan sab khush ho,meri zindagi ke sabse zyaada khoosurat pal kaladidi ke ghar ke hai jab ke meri tab hospital mein thi.Bhaiya ab bhi maante hai ,ek insaan ki wajah se sab ne dhukh paya
 

Sahil(came running)bhua mujhe dar laga raha hai

 
Madhu:chal sahil,mai tujhe lori suunati hoon,bhabhi aap bhi kamre mein jaake so jaayiee.
 

Raj Mahal

 
Rani maa:sonali beta mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni thi
 

Sonali:boliye na Rani maa

 
Rani maa:beta shaadi par tujhe jo jwellry di thi wo mujhe wapas kar de,wo dutta ke ghar ki thi,mujhe nakku ko wapas deni hogii
 

Sonali:par maa,kya saare gehne nakku ke sasuraal ke the

 
Rani maa:haan,sonali.unhone maange nahi hai ppar kal jab nakku aaye gi to main usse de doon gi,yeh uska haq hai
 

Sonali:aapna kehna kya chahti hai

 
Rani maa:mujhe tumse koi jhagda nahi karna par sach ye hai ke wo gehne dutta ki daayi maa ne apni honewaali bahu ke liye de the aur wo bahu ab nakku hai tum nahi,jaakar apne kamre mein se wo gehne mujhe abhi laa kar do...
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I am going to be beat to death for this but...Res😆
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I am going to be beat to death for this but...Res😆

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