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FF:Mehrbaan saayein(chapter15,,the end,,,page37) - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks a lot rubal for pm and update please don't let this sonali create  any problem for tasha and start their romance soon,waiting for next update ,and all the best for your exams.👍🏼 Edited by krishaa - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update dear
nakku is mixing up with everyone now like madhu and sahil lovely
but give some tasha scene waiting for that
thanks for pm

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sorry guys for long wait but what to do
1st was my exams and after that i got sick
i m recovering now so jo likha just bear it
 
 
 
 
chapter 13( dedicated to Krishaa)

Dutta:(giving the phone to nakku)nakku ye le baat kar

Nakku:kaun hai

Dutta:sonali

Nakku:(taking phone from dutta) dii... is waqt...ji di

naku main sonali bol rahi hoon

Nakku:ji dii boliye...aap kaisi hain

main theek hoon nakku ,tum batao tum kaisi ho

Nakku:main theek hoon dii,kya baat hai aapne is waqt call ki

haan wo main bore ho rahi thi

Nakku:oh,...ghar pe sab kaise hai,ma ,papa ,jiju

ghar pe toh sab theek hai,wo mujhe teri yaad a rahi thi

Nakku:meri yaad,,,,,,,,dii par kyun,,mera matlab ,,,,,,,kya huya

kuch nahi ,bas yunhi ,nakku kya hum mil sakte hai

Naku:dii , haan par mujhse inse poochna hoga

poochan hoga?????????? chal theek hai pooch kar bata apne pati se

Naku:(dutta listening their talk and signaled nakku in yes)ji dii ham mil sakte hai

chal theek hai, toh main kal tere ghar aaoungi

Nakku:dii,,,,,,wo kal hum nahi mil payenge

kyun?

Nakku: wo kal hum sab bahar ghumne jaa rahe hai,,,,isliye

oh,,,,,,,,,kahan par jaa rahe ho tum log

Nakku:dii wo mujhe khud nahi pata ,,,,,,,,,,,i think shopping ke liye

nakku main soch rahi thi kyun na main bhi tumhare saath chalun,mera matlab main tumse zaroori milna chahti thi

Nakku:dii theek hai main aapko kal subah call kar ke bata doongi ke hum kahan mil rahen hai,aap jiju ko bhi saath le aayie ga

theek hai nakku ab main rakhti hoon,kal subah yaad se call kar dena

Nakku:ji dii,,,,,,,,,,,good night

They disconnected the call.

Nakku:(to dutta) wo kal dii,,,,,,,,,,,,wo ham kahan jaa rahen hia mujhe dii ko batana hai

Dutta:wo to kal hi pata chalega,,,,,,,,,,,,madhu ke mood ke hisab se

Next morning at dining table.

Aayi sahib:wo koi dikha nahi de raha mera matlab dutta uski patni,sab kahan hai

Daayi maa:wo to subah hi bahar ghumne ke liye nikal gaye

Aayi sahib: bahu bhi,,,,hum kal hi to aaye hai aur wo humse aashirwaad lene bhi nahi aayi,,,,

Daayi maa:wo ...use mauka hi nahi mila,,kal aap itni raat ko aaye aur aaj subah hi sab bahar nikal gaye

Aayi Sahib:sab kab tak aayenge?

Daayi maa :aa jayen ge ,,,,,,,,,,,,,bata kar nahi ge,,,,,,,,,,Malik kahan par hai?

Aayi sahib:wo apne kamre hai

Mandir

Nakku:mujhe lagta hai hame dii ko call karni chahiye thi .wo meri call ka wait kar rahi hongi

Dutta:nakku ,agar tujhe unki itni yaad a rahi hai to unse milne chali jaa ,main tujhse wahan chod deta hoon ,kal wapas aa jana

Baaji:( coming towards Tasha with madhu)kya baatein ho rahi hai

Dutta:teri vahini ka hamare saath dil nahi lag raha,isliye apne ghar jana chahti hai

Madhu:kya bhabhi bhaiya kya bol rahe hai

Nakku:arey aisa kuch bhi nahi hai,yeh mazaak kar rahe hai

Baaji:bhao mazaak bhi karta hai , wwaaahhh mujhe to pata hi nahi tha( Dutta glares at baaji)

Dutta:nahi nakku,agar tum jana chahti ho to jaa sakti ho main tumhe aaj whan chod deta hoon kal wapas lene aa jaunga

nakku:par daayi maa aur parents kya soche ge

Dutta:Chinta apno ki kee jaati hai,mera unse koi nata nahi hai,aur tum bhi rishta jodne ki koshish mat karo

Madhu:bhaiya aap bhabhi ko daant kyun rahe hai,wo sahi bol rahi hai

Dutta:madhu,mujhe is baare mein koi argument nahi karna,please is topic ko mat start karo.Main nakusha ko uske ghar chodne jaa raha hoon,tum log ghar jaao

Baaji :theek hai bhau ,par ghar jaane se pehle main madhu ke saath shopping jayega.Kyun madhu chale gi na meri saath

Madhu:haan par hum ghar jaldi jaayen ge ,wo sahil zyada der tak bahar nahi rehta

They all left from Temple.

Dutta( driving to the Raj Mahal)sorry

Nakku:ji sorry par kyun

Dutta:wo ,main gusse mein tujh par chilaya

Nakku:aapko nahi lagta aapko unhe ek mauka dena chahiye

Dutta:nakku ,shayad dena chahiye,mera man bhi karta hai main unse baat karoon par aaj tak zindagi se jo sikha,mujhe lagta hai wo kabhi nahi badle ge

Nakku:aap madhu se bahot lagav karte hai

Dutta:Madhu ko wo sab milna chahiye jo uska haq hai,SRP jab tak madhu ko apna naam nahi denge tab tak main unhe maaf nahi kar sakta

Nakku:aap dii ke baare mein jaante hai

Dutta:tu tumhe mera yakeen ho gaya

Nakku:abhi tak nahi,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,wo theek hai main maan leti hoon ki wo sudarshan jija ji ko pehle se jaanti thi,,,,,,,,,,,par wo Rani maa se jhoot bolegi ,,,,,,,mujhe aisa nahi lagta

Dutta:nakku,jo sach hai main tumhe bata chuka ho ,,,ab yakeen karna na karna tum par hai

Nakku:wo ,main dii se baat karun gi

Dutta:tumhe lagta hai tumahri behen tujhse sach bolegi

Nakku:haan,,,,,,,,kyun ki ab toh unki shaadi bhi ho chuki hai,,,wo sab huya jo wo chahti hai

Dutta:nakku,wo sab huya jo teri behen chahti thi , ab to sab kuch theek hai , phir baat karne ka kya faayda

Nakku:aap nahi samjhe ge

Dutta:teri behen ko nahi pata the ke main tujhse shaadi karoon ga

Nakku:main unse is baare mein baat nahi karoon gi , mujhe sirf unse poochna hai ke unhone aisa kyun kiya,wo rani maa ko bata deti to accha hota,agar kal rani maa ko is dhoke ke baare mein pata chale to unhe dukh hoga

Dutta:to tum rani maa ko sab batane waali ho

Nakku:nahi ,mera wo matlab nahi tha

They reached to the palace.

Dutta:chalo aa gay etummhare ghar,tum jao kal phone kar dena , main lene aa jaunga

Nakku:aap andar nahi aayenge

Dutta:nahi mujhe madhu aur baaji ke ghar pohenchne se pehle ghar jana hai

Nakku:par ,kyun

Dutta: tum janti to ho wo log madhu ke saath kaisa bartaav karte hai

Nakku:par agar aap andar nahi aayenge to sab kya soche ge

Dutta:kuch nahi sochenge ,bol dena mujhe kaam hai

Nakku:theek hai,,,,,,,,aap apna khayal rakhiye ga

Dutta:hmm,,,,,,,tumm bhi apna dhyaan rakhna

Nakku: ji

Nakku steps out from the car.

Dutta:nakku,,,,,,suno

Nakku:ji

Dutta:woh ,sorry

Nakku:(confused) par kis liye

Dutta: wo aaj jo mandir pe main tumpe chilaya usliye

Nakku:( smiled)wo...aap jayiye aapko der ho rahi hai

Dutta:haan ,,,,,,,,,,,wo main chalta hoon

Nakku:(waves to dutta)

Raj Mahal

Nakku comes in the palace.

Rani maa:nakku , beta tum yahan( rani maa hugs nakku)

Nakku:ji wo hum yahan ghumne aaye the isliye,,,,,,,,,,,mera man kar raha tha yahan aane ka ,isliye wo mujhe yahan chod gaye

Sonali:( coming towards nakku)nakku kaisi ho,dutta dikhayi nahi de rahe

Nakku:wo ,,,,,,unhe kuch kaam tha isliye

Sethji:koi baat nahi nakku jiju nahi aaye to tum to aa gayi na,waise bhi mujhe tumse ek zaroori baat karni thi,par wo tumhe lene to aaye ge na

Nakku:haan kal aaye ge

Sethji:phir to theek hai main apni behen se acchi tarah se baat kar sakun ga

SonaLI:sethji aise kya baat hai jo tu nakku se karna chahta hai,mujhe bol deta , main to yahan hi thi

Sethji:yehi to problem hai ke aap yahan hi hai

Sonalli:matlab

Sethji:kuch nahi aap nahi samjhe gi

Rani maa:nakku tu apne kamre mein jaa ,araam karle,lunch pe milte hai

Nakku:ji rani maa

Rani maa went from the hall.

Sonali:main bhi nakku ke saath chalti hoon

Sethji:kyun aap kyun nakku ke saath chalen gi

Sonali:yeh kaisa sawal hai sethji,main nakku ke saath kyun nahi jaa sakti

Sethji:kyunki rani maa ne abhi bola ke nakku araam karegi,isliye

Nakku:aap dono jhagadna band karo,dii aapko jo baat karni thi abhi kijiye

Sonali:nahi nakku ,mujhe tumse akele main baat karni thi

Sethji:ab aisa kya secret hai jo main nahi jaan sakta

Sonali:sethji ab tu chup ho ja ,mera gussa mat bada

Sethji:kyun tum koi pari ho jo main tumhare aage bol nahi sakta

Sonali:tu bahut batmeez ho gaya hai , abhi rani maa ko tere baare main bolti hoon

Sethji:ab kya jhooth bologi rani maa se

Sonali:tum kehna kya chahte ho

Sethji:yehi ke aap koi na koi jhooth bol kar mera Raj mahal se bahar jana band karwa deti aur kya

Sonali:tumhe huya kya hai, subah se chidh chidhe bol rahe ho

Sethji:nakku tu chal , mujhe tujhse ek important baat karni hai

Sonali:theek hai jao tum dono ,,,,,,,,,,,nakku hum lunch ke baad baat karenge

Nakku:ji dii

Sethji and Nakku went to nakku's room.

Nakku: haan sethji ab bol tujhe kya baat karni thi

Sethi(locks the door) mujhe tujhse ek zaroori baat karni thi

Nakku:tumne darwaza kyun lock kiya

Sethji:ta ke koi hamari baat na sun sake

Nakku:ab aisa kya huya jo koi nahi jaan sakta

Sethji:sonali bahar khadi hai hamari baatein sun ne ke liye,kya yahan tere locked darwaze se awaaz bahar jaati hai

Nakku:haan agar koi dhyaan se sune,,,,,,,,,,,yeh sab kya ho raha , mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha

Sethji( lowers his voice)mujhe lagta hai sonali ko mujh par shaq hai ke mujhe sab kuch pata hai

Nakku:kya pata hai

Sethji:dheere bol,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,main tujhe yahan nahi bata sakta,sonali bahar khadi hai,,,tu aaj raat ko mere kamre mein ana ,main tujhe kuch doon ga aur kisis ko mat batana

to be continued...
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Posted: 12 years ago
res :)

Edited:

Chotii...another good part :)

liked the interaction with DN but i want romance 😆😳

I am more curious wat sethji has to say...and u had to end it there 😛

jaldi se next part update karna 😳




Edited by daya0628 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wah ji wah
last chapter wali abhi bhi res hai , use unres ki nahi ise kab karogi🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
haha i totally forgot re...ok i have edited both spots 😳
Edited by daya0628 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay now ur gona make us wait even more man
 
 
1st it was sonali n her 'secret' now sethji aswel
 
 
loved tasha part ..so cute..
 
 
 
pls jaldi karna update...dnt make us wait 4 2 long
 
 
thnx 4 pm.x
 
 
btw wa hapend on monday...wit u n ur m8...did u sort stuf out wit her n teachers...?!?! hope all is wel honey.x
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally you updated am very happy to see youlove tasha
Edited by rrs1391 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

v nice part choti...

u know i was thinking y u didnt update ur FF.. but did not go to ask cos u were ot well😳
any way thanks for the update🤗
what is on Sonali's mind.. is she planning on something and what is Sethji have to tell Nakku... bada suspence build up kar rahi hai na😛
hope this will not seperate tasha... and Nakku be na always trying to run away from Dutta😕 
n D says Sorry... heyee mar dala☺️😆
do update reg.. v nice choti...
hope u r fine now 😳n hope tp c u soon back in action..😛
love
Azy Didi😳
Edited by AzMishy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks a lot rubal,i m glad that you updated finally ,i think sethji know's the truth that dutta told nakku and now after knowing that our most awaited love story will start waiting eagerly for that to happen,thanks for PM and update do update soon and take care ,i hope now we will have back to back update.😊 Edited by krishaa - 12 years ago