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MN - The JOURNEY towards MAGIC. (Page 17)

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:47am | IP Logged
a poignant update Kinza.
i am spell bound & speech less.
both are hurt by the circumstances.
loved Mayu's one liners very much.
all in all i loved the update very much.Hug
first to comment againLOL
ps- don't go by what some random individual has to say. we all love you & your stories very much.
so just shrug off the irritating comments . be happy & keep writing such magical stories.Hug


Edited by shubhie - 26 May 2011 at 1:59am

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
Beautifull written Kinza...i could almost feel the whole scenario Mayur were in n i can feel how the love in Mayank's heart is getting hurt but is still drawing him to help her in every way he can...love is always like that naa...Day Dreaming
n Nupur...oh i see a regret in her which is very hard to admit the way she started to explain things to Mayank...amd sure she has had a bad time between Mayank being there for her...Ouch
update soon...n i liked the fact that u stopped the story at this point...it made u think over the points we wud have missed otherwise...ClapEmbarrassed


Edited by Payal-15 - 26 May 2011 at 3:00am

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:58am | IP Logged
commented on pg 17LOLWink


Edited by shubhie - 26 May 2011 at 2:00am

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 1:59am | IP Logged
 
"you are right Sharma, wishes don't come true, I so wish you wouldn't have left me alone that day"
     seeems this line is very important for the story to proceed further...
 
eagerly waiting to read more
amazing update as usual...loving the way its proceeding...
wow!!!...
 
thanks for the PM...

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 2:01am | IP Logged
"Relationships don't have statuses",
Clapi liked this line...
nice update kinzaSmile

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 2:13am | IP Logged
awesome update...
luvd it...
specially lst line
"you are right Sharma, wishes
don't come true, I so wish you
wouldn't have left me alone that
day"
luvd it...
hope dat sadu is out of mayur's lyf..
n plz update soon...

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 2:19am | IP Logged
did nupur get married to him? did that man broke her heart?
and now nupur wishes that mayank never left her that day? i bet mayank wishes that day never came when she walked on with her fiance and broke him to pieces.

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 2:24am | IP Logged
OMG!!! the story is progressing amazingly and i don't find it typical as its MAGICAL...!! 
Fanta, huh? :P shezan ka kya bana... LOL! 
GReat update but I Wish it was longer! 
Good JOB! 

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