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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Jake-neil

Very beautiful start shilpaben. Must say you are getting better and better with each story. Loved it. Do continue

Jakebhai, thank you so much, that was the best compliment you could have ever given me, I do have little more time now that classes are over, so it has gotten better.

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 5:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ANJ4

Very nice start...Well we all know ahem is married to his work... so how can he think about Gopi ...In ahems mind who the hell is gopi.



Thank you Anju, and you are right, Gopi doesn't even register on Ahem's radar, to him she is not his wife, but his mom's vahu and that's all, what a moron.

Originally posted by shobi12500

very nice shilpa keep it up

Thank you Shoaib.

Originally posted by aamirkhanfan

i'm loving ur ss...waiting for updates

Thank you so much, will try to update soon.

Originally posted by winter30

Great start to the story, I really love your style of writing. Poor Gopi, I really do feel her pain, I hope Ahem realises his love for her
 
And  thanks for the pm

Your welcome dear, and thank you. I hope Ahem comes to his senses soon in the SNS, as for this fic, I will have to give him one big Zoro Ka Jhatka, to bring his head out of the sand.


Thank you so much everyone!

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by magi11

superb update .. pls continue


Thank you so much, will continue soon.

Originally posted by ayesha_78



Shilpa that was amazing,
u have got me hooked for sure
Lol
was just waiting for someone to post an ss or a ff when i finish my ff as am the only one doing it right nowCry
i am waiting for the day when u do a new ff.

loved the ss 

Thank you Ayesha!


Originally posted by aachus

i enjoyed a lot...ClapClap

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by evad

wow Shilpa just loved itThumbs Up waiting patiently  for more please

Thank you so much Eva, I promise not to make you wait too long.


Thanks everyone!


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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 5:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Simz786

Love It Day Dreaming

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by vmpp

nice start!

Thank you very much!

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Hi everyone. Thank you for your wonderful comments and encouragement.

Here is part 2, I have to warn you guys, you will end up hating Ahem at the end of this part.

Part 2

 

After breakfast was over and Gopi was sure that the men have left for the office, Gopi came down to the kitchen, she cleaned the kitchen quickly and went to Koki's room to talk to her.

Koki was in her room, in deep thoughts. She was at loss as how to bring Gopi and Ahem closer.

She didn't know what to do and who to turn to, she had a feeling Rashi had been feeding Gopi's head with wrong things, but her vahu is very nave, she believes everything her cousin tells her, she believes that her cousin loves her and she wouldn't do anything wrong for her.

How can she make Gopi understand that Rashi and her mom doesn't have best interest for her in their minds. They are not there to help her, but they are there to harm her.

Koki looked up at the sound of someone knocking on her door. Gopi stood there looking nervous and tense.

"Gopi vahu, come in, I was just thinking about you." Gopi walked in nervously and sat on the bed facing Koki.

Gopi twisted her hand and gathered courage to say what she wanted to say to Koki. "Maji, I know things didn't go as planned, and I am really sorry, but I think you should give up, and let me go from here. Maji I know you think Ahemji will accept me some day, but I don't see that happening at all, especially in these last few weeks." Gopi paused watching Koki's reaction to her statement.

Koki was shocked to hear Gopi once again talking about leaving, and she didn't know how to stop her this time, Gopi had that determined look on her face. Was this the solution? Should she let Gopi go for a while, away from her, Ahem, and Rashi? Was her mother right when she said let Gopi learn few things by herself?

But how can she let her nave, sweet vahu be alone in this cruel world. Then it hit her, that's what she needed to do, she needed to send her vahu to her mother, and let her handle Gopi for a while.

"Ok, Gopi vahu, I will let you go, on one condition." Koki waited for Gopi to ask about the condition.

Gopi was surprised her maji agreed readily to let her go, she felt sad and elated at the same time. Sad because she would be leaving her maji, who had loved her like a daughter and elated because she would be able to make her Ahemji happy by leaving his life permanently.

"What do you want me to do maji?"

"I don't want you to go to your mama's place when you leave here."

"Woh, maji, I wasn't planning to go there, I was going to stay at a hostel where Panna stays, till I found some work."

Koki was shocked to hear Gopi didn't want to go to her mama's, which made things easier for her to convince her to go to the village where her mom lived.

"Ok then, this is what I want you to do, I want you to go stay with my mother for a while, but this is only temporary, I will tell you when to come back. Just do as your Nani says, and take care of her."

Gopi gave Koki a big smile. "Naniji's place, I would love to go stay with her, and don't worry maji, I will take good care of Naniji."

They were both unaware that Rashi had been standing outside the door, listening to their conversation.

~*+*~

 

Rashi had been furious at Gopi when she told the whole family that she was the one who wrote "I Love you Ahemji, instead of just "Ahemji", not only her husband, but this time even her mother-in-law and father-in-law has scolded her for the incident. And now her husband refuses to talk to her and he is always standoffish to her now.

She was not going to let that Kagri send Gopi to her doshi Nani. Gopi will be leaving Modi Bhavan, but permanently, she will never come back.

Rashi looked around to be sure no one had seen her lurking around kagri's room, she went to her room and closed the door and dialed her mother's number.

Soon as her mom answered the phone Rashi started talking. "Mummy that gawar is leaving the house, but that kagri is sending her to village to be with Nani for now, she is not sending her out permanently."

Urmila had been elated at first when she heard Rashi tell her Gopi was leaving but her face fell when she heard the rest of what Rashi was saying.

Urmi spoke to Rashi with clenched teeth. "So that's what that big Kagri is planning, but you don't worry about that, I will take care of it, Gopi will never make it to that Nani's place, you just let me know when that gawar is leaving."

Rashi smiled at the other end, and hung up the phone, she wasn't allowed to talk to her mom too much since the whole phone bill incident.

~*+*~

 

Next day Koki called her mother to let her know that she is sending Gopi to her, and she wanted her mom to teach Gopi the ways of the world, and also to help her with some formal basic education.

 

Koki had not realized that how serious Urmi and Rashi were about getting rid of Gopi, she didn't know that they consider Gopi their enemy, and would do anything to get rid of her.

Koki told the whole family of her plan to send Gopi to her mother, she only said she wanted Gopi to go there to help her mother, who wasn't felling well. She asked Ahem, who was shocked that his mother was sending Gopi away, to make arrangements to send Gopi to the village.

Parag spoke for the first time. "Koki, we shouldn't let Gopi go by herself, someone should go with her and stay with her to help her get settled."

Koki was thoughtful, she almost forgot about the fact that Gopi was going to need help to get to her mom's place.

Rashi thought about volunteering to go with Gopi, but decided not to say anything, because she knew the family would never let her go with Gopi.

Koki looked at Parag. "You are right, so why don't you go with her, I am sure you would also enjoy the trip."

Parag was surprised Koki was speaking to him so nicely and agreed to escort Gopi to Nani's place.

Later that night Rashi listened once again as Ahem told Koki about all the arrangements and went and made a quick call to her mother giving her all the details, she also told her to be careful since Parag was also going with Gopi, Urmi reassured Rashi and said don't worry I will take care of everything.

 

~*+*~

 

So Ahem, Gopi is going out of your life for a while, how do you feel about that?

"How should I feel? Of course I am happy that gawar is leaving my life, I hope it's a permanent solution and not a temporary one, who cares where she goes and what she does."

Ahem hadn't realized he spoke loud until he heard a loud crash behind him, he turned to see Gopi picking up the glass she dropped on the floor, and realized by the look on her face she had heard everything. Damn his conscious that has him talking loud to himself.

Ahem was frozen in place, he saw her flinch when a piece of glass pricked her finger, but she didn't stop doing what she was doing, in fact she moved quicker, when she was finished, she ran out of the room without looking up, and he just stood there and stared at her retreating back.

Good going! Why didn't you just take that piece of glass and stab her with it.

How was I supposed to know she would be standing there, up until now she has avoided me like a plague.

And do you blame her? Ahem Modi you are an idiot, if something ever happens to that girl and your wishes come true, you will regret those words.

Ahem ignored his inner voice and went back to doing his work without giving Gopi a second thought.

 

~*+*~

 

So now you know how he really feels about you, and you know you did the right thing by talking to maji and leaving this place.

Gopi once again on the terrace gazing at the dark sky, she has finally realized that, Ahem will never accept her or love her; she needed to move on.

In two days time Gopi will leave Modi Bhavan forever, no matter what maji says, she won't be returning to Modi Bhavan ever.

Gopi forget about Ahem, and enjoy your last two days in Modi Bhavan, so what if he doesn't care for you, rest of the family loves you, so why not take those memories with you, show him you don't care for him, and stop avoiding him.

Gopi knew it would be hard, but she needed to show him his words didn't effect her, she needed to pretend she didn't hear what he said when he was talking to himself.

~*+*~


Hope you enjoyed it!

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Awesome part Shilpa ben!

I have no words. I love the idea of sending Gopi to Nani rather than back to Urmi

I love how that mind of yours works. Thanks for this lovely part

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wow shilpa that was amazing..it was too good for words...have to completely agree with yuks...you are too good...cant wait to read more...

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This Gopi is awesome! Smile

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