SS: Gopi's Ehsaas Last Part updated pg 56 - Page 17

Posted: 12 years ago
wow..wht an amazing update!!
loved it!!!!
continue soon plzzz :)
Posted: 12 years ago
That was a wonderful update Shilpa. How is Aham going to get Gopi to trust him again. Can't wait to read on. Update soon dear. 
Posted: 12 years ago
Again, a very nice update. Loved it. Please continue soon...
Posted: 12 years ago
That was fantastic, they should use your writing on the show ., that is how good it was.  Love very word you wrote... I hope jigarji does not forgive rashi...they were going to kill gopi.  If rattie and urmil has murder on their mind ... they will be ready to kill as any time... If I could describe this last chapter in one word  it would be   WOW
Posted: 12 years ago
 very nice update How is Aham going to get Gopi to trust him again really
fantastic,fabulous part loved it   
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by soni4eva


[da update was superb
plzz cont soon

Thank you Soni!

Originally posted by Jake-neil


My poor Rashi, again a vamp.

Thanks Jake bhai, that's exactly how I wanted to portray her.πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by aamirkhanfan


great part...never realised that urmila is so much evil

Thanks! Urmila of SNS is cruel, so I believe she has a possibility of being evil

Originally posted by sunshine33


Very well written chapter. I am really liking the pace of your FF. I hope the next update is really soon...just now getting caught up on my reads.

Thank you sunshine, I am glad you liked the pace of the story, I don't want to bore people.

Originally posted by angelirebelli


On the dot , just as promised...

Aham, the lover boy, is fab for a change.. Gopi well is just Gopi, always putting others first...

Loved the update Shilpa !!!


Thanks Angeli, so you like Ahem as lover boy, then I hope you like the next part.


Thank you everyone!
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by simi91


wow such sweet &adorable
with big heart still thinking
about others
gohem scene so cute
my love how the story shaping
up






Thanks Simi, running out of words to compliment your posts. Its fantastic.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by winter30


I just want to say your a fantastic writer. I love the way you portray Ahem and Gopi's chemistry. It is really well written. Looking forward to the next update πŸ˜ƒ

Thank you so much. Yeah I love them on and off screen.

Originally posted by swasthi


The attraction between Ahem and Gopi is nicely worded, and from Ahem's viewpoint.
 
Waiting eagerly for the next update.

Thanks, I am glad you liked the part.

Originally posted by Nafisa_blossoms


Wonderful Shilpa.

Thanks Nafisa!

Thank you so much everyone!
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by queenyuks


Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'πŸ˜†

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart firstπŸ˜‰

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks

Haye, Haye Yuks, what would my bhai say, I would get in trouble with him for sure if I killed of his two favorite people, besides that's an easy way out, they need to go to jail and suffer.
Ahem and his Kalakari, you know she won't be able to resist him for long.πŸ˜†

Thank you so much my sweet sister!
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Traxy101


What to say? I really like your story especially the rate it is going at as you can clearly see their relationship as it develops and you portray the characters and their emotions beautifully 

Thank you so much, that is the best compliment, I tried may best to get their emotions across, which we don't see much of on SNS.

Originally posted by Jake-neil


Nothing to say anout Urmi and her chudail daughter. Both should have a tragic accident

Then we'll see who has the last 'Haye Haye'πŸ˜†

As for Ahem, as much as I love how forward he's being, he's spooking poor Gopi
He should work his kalakaari on her heart firstπŸ˜‰

Lovely part shilpaben. Can't wait to read more

Yuks'

No comment!πŸ˜†

Originally posted by ayesha_78



aren't u suppose to take out yuks name out of the above post 

Capt Barbossa


🀣

great one shilpa continue on



Thanks Ayesha

Thanks everyone!

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