Hello Everyone!
This is my second FF. First on Mayur. I really hope I'd be able to complete it unlike the last one I quit half the way... if I am able to catch the interest of some. I really hope it does. This is only a Mayur FF. No Sajan... That's because I did not have any well defined roles or scenes for them. So I thought I'd rather not offend their fans by including but side-lining them. So thought it was better not too.
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Chapter 1
And she closed her eyes firmly, breathed deeply, her shoulders rising and falling as she inhaled and exhaled... with her fists folded stiff and stepped into the college gates... EXCEL COLLEGE.
The first day in college could be unforgettable... for all the not-so happy reasons. Although she was not amongst the ones who'd take crap on their face, yet she could not settle down her anxiety. She continued playing with the edge of her dupatta with her fingers.
She thought to herself, "What are you afraid off? You have Sheena, no?"
And her eyes, mesmerizingly beautiful and deep, started curiously searching here and there for the latter. But she was nowhere to be seen.
BRINNNGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
"Ah!" She said to herself..." ... there goes the first bell!"
"And there comes trouble" spoke a heavy voice from behind.
She was shocked and turned back hurriedly and nearly lost her balance as she saw a group of 5 people looking at her, pryingly, standing at a distance of just a few inches close to her. She quickly regained her composure and said, "Sorry?"
Guy in the red tee: Already? *laughs*
Girl in blue short dress: Not so soon! We haven't even enjoyed it yet... *joins him*
Girl in pink tunic: Are you that easy? *smirks*
Guy in white trousers: She did not look like that when...
Girl in black tube-top: *glares at former* And we had plans to...
The Girl <in trouble> retorts, "Excuse me? By I am sorry I meant... "
Guy in white trousers: I knew it! See, I told you she's not of the type...
Girl in black tube top: *rolls eyes* Oh! So you were trying to flaunt a few expressions you learnt before you could come here, Miss Small Towner?...
The Girl <in trouble> ... *speechless*
Girl in black tube top continues: ... Or whatever is your name..."
The Girl <in trouble> :*in a clear tone, face reflecting confidence* Nupur Bhushan!
Girl in black tube top: I see... Your name totally suits your LS personality.
Girl in pink tunic: *smirks* Totally!
Other 3 laugh too.
Nupur: By God! The criteria for judgement of personality are quite weird here... Or do I say... eccentric?
The five smiles disappear instantaneously. It had been their first experience with a junior who ha used that tone with them.
Girl in black tube top: Attitude haan? Do you even know who I am? I am Dia... Dia Singh, the daughter of Brij Singh, one of the college trustees.
Nupur: And...?
Dia: I am the trustee's only daughter!
BRINNNGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nupur: There goes the bell again. Thank God!
<to Dia> Better go for your class... or even the trustee dad won't be of much help. Just saw the notice board, you're on the Black List!
Nupur leaves for her first lecture leaving five stumped seniors behind.
PRECAP: Nupur's pen is not working and she is about to use her partner's pen without permission when he holds her wrist tight...βΊοΈ
Chapter 2:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1689444?pn=3
Chapter 3:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1689444?pn=10
Chapter 4:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/1689444?pn=17
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