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MG OS: You are Mine

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 12:05pm | IP Logged
hey beautiful maanetians...

Here in this tensed moment... 

a small gift to all...

another os...


MaanEet OS: You are mine...

London...!!!!

On a beautiful windy day...

Geet all smiling and packing her clothes...she is smiling and humming a old hindi song!!!!

pari: teri packing poori nahi hui hai kya... kab poori honge... 

Geet smiled and looked at her... flight parso hai...aur tune shuru ki apni packing!!!

Pari: ha ha ha... kar loongi mere ko kya hai... sab utakar suitcase mein dalna hai... baki ghar jaake... tu kya kar rahi hai...
sees geet keeping each photo seperately and smiling!!!
oh ho... memsahab Maan sahab ke sapnom mein hai kya????

Geet blushes.. es baar main maan ko bol doongi...

Pari kya... Geet blushes again and smacks her with a pillow...

Geet: ki main unse pyaar karthi hoon... bahut zyaada mohabat karthi hoon...

Pari: yeah yeah...tu agar bol degi tho main tero ko meri lucky charm denge...

Geet: leking tu to kisi ko haath bhi nahi lagane dete... aur 

pari laughs and goes geet understood.. challenge mat kar...

Pari yeah yeah...goes to phone!!!

Geet looks at maan's photo and smiles... maan sahab main aa rahi hoon aapke paas...

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New Delhi...

Weding preparation going around in the Khurana Mansion...

Dadi... yeh maan kahan gaye...

Nakul: ji woh office chale gaye...

Dadi... yeh Maan bhi na... etna kam pada hai... aur shaadi ki keliye sirf do din baaki hai..tho yueh office chale gaye...

Dadi calls up but Maan disconnects...

Maan calls back half an hour later... kya hai dadi... 
Dadi:" Maan kahan ho aap.. ghar aao.. shaadi hai.. aur aap office gaye hai... log kya sochenge...
Maan: dadi main aa rahi hoon kaam tha...

suddenly his phone vibrates and sees on the display Geet... he smiles ( thinking this is the only girl who can make him smile)

and reads the message...' main aa rahi hoon parson - Geet'...

maan thinks... etna hi.. kabhi phone nahi karthi... kabhi baat nahi karthi... ek sms bhej deta hai... aur wohi khatam...

ab woh bhi nahi hoga...

parso tho shaadi hai use bulane kaise jaaunga...

(Maan and geet are friends from childhood... they live near to each other... geet has gone for her higher studies and is coming back)...

Maan goes home...

Dadi says... is shaadi ke baad sab tik ho jayega maan... es ghar main itni khusi ayenge... ki poocho mat... jise main chuna hai... wohi hogi es ghhar ki bahu...sundar hai susheel hai... aur humare ghar ko jode rakhenge...

Maan smiles... and goes to his room.. opens his cupboard and sees Maan's and geet's childhood pic in this room...

and so many other pics of Geet...all side angles and all... taken without her knowledge...

******PAST*******

Geet:  Maan ... tumhare room ka color na.. change karna padega... yuck itni boring hai... aate hi mujhe neend aathi hai... 
Maan: achaji kya colour lagani ki irada hai...

geet : pink... nd she runs from there...

Maan smiles...

Another day...

she comes run ning to him wearing a saree...

Maan main kaisi dikh rahi hoon...

Maan: achi dikh rahi ho yaar.. kya baat hai aaj sadi mein...

Geet: thanks... leking baal khula chod do...

Geet blushes and maan sees that... and she runs away...

***********

Maan thinks humeshe mujhse baagne ki jadli main thi pagli...
hmmm

closes the cupboard and lies on bed.. closes his eye and sees Geet smiling and laughing and suddenly tears flow from his eyes...

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One day later...

Wedding at Khurana mansion...maniosn is arranged beautifully with white and red flowers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone is running here and there... lots of guest have come...

People are talking... even media people is there coz its one of the wealthiest familes's wedding...

Dadi is meeating everyone came and speaking to them...

Maan is no where to be seen...

everyone is speaking about the house and family and wedding arrange ments and so on...

*****************************************

Delhi Airport:

British Airways have landed...

Geet and pari comes out and is laughing and coming...

Geet: pari dekhna!! main na tujhe maan se milvaungi...woh zaroor ayega...

Pari: hmm mujhe bhi milna hai tere is Maan ko...

Geet and pari comes out...

Geet looks for maan doesnt see him... keep looking here and there...

Pari asks... kahan hai yaar tere Maan...

Geet: aata hi hoga traffic main phas gaya koga...

Suddenly pari sees a card with a driver...'GEET HANDA'!!!

Pari: dekh Geet tere naam ka ek board...

Geet and Pari goes there... and driver says... Maan sahab nahi aa paye... esliye...

Geet disappointed.. and smiles. says ok...

pari says... acha main chalti hoon...and huigs her... geet says,.,, chalo main drop karthi hoon yaar... chalo na...

Geet and Pari gets in the car...

Geet asks driver... Maan ne kuch kaha...
Driver:woh ghar pe shaadi hai nai... sahab ke...

Geet all tensed looks at Pari... her eyes water up... and she says!!! ghar pe...kiski...

Driver: sahab ke... dadi ne strict orders diye hai shaadi poori haone tak koi ghar se nikalega...

Geet: acha... ghar chalo fast... Pari gets tensed Geet; tu tikh hai...

Geet: driverbhaiyaa... jaldi ghar chalo...

Driver drives fast and Geet eyes starts tearing up and she starts crying... Pari consoles her...

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Khurana Mansion: 

The bridegroom is sitting in the mandap and his face is covered with flowers and Bride is coming with ghoongat on her head... 

Dadi all happy and smiling...with tears in her eyes...

Dadi says.. aaj maine jo chaha tha wohi ho raha hai...

Geet's mother comes and hugs her... khush ho na aap??? and wipes of her tears and says to go there... into the mandap...

Dadi goes there to the mandap...

Bride's father and mother comes forward...

they sit opp to dadi to do the kanyadaan...

Panditji starts the mantra...

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here Geet reaches in front of the khurana mansion and sees all the decorations... and gets out of the car and runs...

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Bride and the Groom stands up for phere...

panditjee again saying mantras...

Groom holds Bride's hand and starts walking...then Bride comes to the front and holds Groom's hand...

Dadi looks at them.. gives ashirwad to both...touches their head...

**************************************

Geet runs very fast and Pari is running behind her...

Pari: Geet...

****************************************

Last phere...

Bride is walking in the front and Groom behind...

Geet runs fast and reaches there and shout...nahiii yeh nahi ho saktha...Maaan...

She runs to the mandap... catches the Guy's hand and says... I LOVE YOU MAAN...

I LOVE YOU

I LOVE YOU

DONT DO THIS TO ME... DONT MARRY THIS GIRL...

YOU ARE MINE MAAN... YOU WERE ALWAYS... MINE

Everyone shocked... 

Dadi looks shocked looks at Geet... Pari looking at all who is staring at Geet...

Geet: Maan pyaar karthi hoon maan aapse main beintehaa pyaar...

itna pyar ki mera har din aapse shuru aur har raat aapse khatam...hoti hai

Maine humse aapko mera maana hai... humesha... aapki room meri hai.. aapki har cheez main mera hak hai... hai ki nahi...

aapne hi bola tha na... 

do saal hue na main aapse baat ki... par mujhe dar tha ki main aapse phone main baat karu aur aapko mera haal pata chale...

Suddenly... the Groom removes his turban and Geet shocked...

Yash...

Bride looks up and sees annie...

Yash smiles and looks at her...smiles

Geettt

Suddenly she hears that sound... teh only sound that makes her body tingle...

she turns and sees Maan coming forward!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Geet keeps looking down embarresed...

Maan comes to the mandap and drags her down and pulls her chin up and kissess her in front of whole people...All shocked, some laughing, some clapping...

Dadi smiling...
Yash smilinggg

Maan: taras gaya tha.. main tere yeh lafz sunne keliye... itni der kyun ki tune...

Geet hugs him tight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

par driver bhaiyya ne kaha shaadi hai sahab ki...

Maan: tumhe pata hai.. maine humse Yash ko apna bahi maana hai...aur jab hume pata chala ki Yash aur anu ek dusare se pyaar karthe hai tho...

aur dadi chahti thi ki uske shaadi yahan ho...

Maan hugs her and Geet cant open her eyes to look at everyone...

Maan smirks and says.. panditji.. mantra padiye...

Soon as Yash's and annie's wedding was over...bride and groom took blessings from others... Yash comes and hugs Maan and says thanks... maan tries to wack him...

Yash looks at Geet.. ( Geet all blusing and embarresed..).. bhabhi ji... kya entry maari hai aapne...

Geet: bhabiji??? 

Geet looks at Maan...

Yash: Aapko pata hai.. he was pining for you!! saara gussa mujhpar utartha tha...lekin kisi ko boltha nahi tha...
Oh i still rem the day when u left for studies... mera jeena haram kar rakha tha.. yeh maan sahab ne...

Geet looks at him and hugs him...

Yash pulls annie towards him and says yahan shaadi humari hui hai.. lekin lagtha hai honeymoon kisi aur ka ho raha hai...

Geet blushes and hugs Yash! and yash hugs back!!! and they say thier good byes and leave for their honeymoon

Maan looks at Geet and pulls her to him.. and says... kahan chali?
Geet: ek min, main meri best friends se milvathi hoon...

Geet introduces Pari to Maan... 

Pari: acha.. yeh lo... mara lucky charm...

Geet smiles and says nahi chahiye.. tu hi rakh...

Maan: mamla kya hai...

Pari... aapko pata hai jeeju... yeh do saal se Maan yeh Maan woh kehke mera kaan paka rahi thi.. aur humesha appko bol nahi paati thi...

es baar babji ne matters apne haath mein le liya.. geet ko akal dikhane...

warna yahan aake ... she would have not told you..

Maan hugs her and says... warna main bol deta...

Geet looks at maan.. and Maan looks at geet (Maahhhiii)

Maan drags Geet to the room and pines her on the bed and says... kitne din kitne mahine kitne saal se main yeh karna chahthi thi...

and kisses her forehead(Geet blushes and closes her eyes)...

Maan: geet look at me...

Geet opens her eyes...

Maan kisses her nose, her ears, comes to her lips... keeps looks at the rosebuds which taunted him for years... looks at her hazel eyes... 

kisses her... Geet brings her hand...around Maan's neck and keeps kissing back... They kept on kissing and kissing ...

Maan comes out of kiss for air... looks at his geet... who is all crimson and red...

Maan kisses her neck... the part where neck joins the shoulder,...

Geet moans...

Maan slowly tries to bring her kurthi down to expose her shoulders...

Maaannn...

and Maan bites her there...

Geet hugs maan tighter...

he brings the other side of the kurthi down and expose the other shoulder and kisses her there...

slowly, he touches her waist... and pulls her onto him... and looks at her all flushed...

Maannn Geettt

they broke outr of each other... and arange their dresses and opens the door and sees Geet's mom and Dadi...

Geet hides in the bathroom...

Geet's mom:... Maam Geet kahan hai.. woh yahan nahi hai kaki...

Dadi.. goes to the bedroom and check and sees her jhumki on bed and looks around...

Dadi goes to the bathroom, opens the door, brings Geet out and says... Rano... ab deri nahi kar sakthe... panditji neeche hi hai...

in dono ki shaadi kal ho sakthi hai thio.. kal hi sahi.. karwana padega...

Geet looks at Maan and all four of them laughs...

Let me know how u all liked it!!!

Deepti...


Edited by maneet1985 - 22 May 2011 at 10:58pm

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Edited by millie_maaneet - 22 May 2011 at 1:19pm

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by millie_maaneet


thanks yaar!!!!!!!Big smile

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Awesome !!!
Loved it <3

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 2:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by smallville

Awesome !!!
Loved it <3

thanks yaar!!!
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
Very nice!!Clap
Very dramatic, with Geet confessing in front of everybodyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Good jobTongue
 
and keep writingWink

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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by anupm04

Awasome dear

thank youBig smile
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Posted: 22 May 2011 at 7:40pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mirnalini

Very nice!!Clap
Very dramatic, with Geet confessing in front of everybodyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Good jobTongue
 
and keep writingWink

thank you buddy!!!LOL

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