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New FF: Kabi Tum, Kabi Hum: Chapter 3 , Pg 6

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 7:17pm | IP Logged

Hi Everyone!

This is my first time writing an FF. I have read some of this  FF in this forum and I absolutely love
 
them. I definitely wanted to write my own FF. So here it goes. This is my first FF and Im not use to
 
it yet. But I would  love it if  you guys comment and give me feedbacks. I am big fan of Geet. So GO
 
 GEET!! My FF is based on my personal life well only some bits. Its not all about my personal life.
 
 but some things are. Hope you like it !
 
By the way my name is Priya and I go to college.
 
Next Post Is Prologue!
Check it out!


Edited by PriyaK. - 04 June 2011 at 8:40pm

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Prologue

My life was full of love.

I enjoyed each moment preciously.

Each moment counted my life.

My family and friends were there for me.

When I was sad they taught me how to cry.

When I was happy they taught me how to laugh.

When I was mad they taught me to put my anger out to my grumpy old neighbors who needed a piece of there own cake.

In my heart there is a lot of space for my family like the universe has stars.

I am person with too many dreams, like a sleeping baby.

My hair is woven like the waves of the ocean.

My hands are petite as an ants feet.

My eyes are big as grapes.

I am sentimental as a tear of drop.

I am sweet as candy.

I have a heart.

But It stopped beating the day my family told me to leave this house, place, town, country.

Know I am wandering around this darkness.

My heart is shattered and lost count of my dreams.

I am all alone.

Miserable'

XOXOXOXOXO

- Geet Handa-

 


Edited by PriyaK. - 21 May 2011 at 7:43pm

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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 7:18pm | IP Logged

If you want to be in my Pm list... Pease hit the like button. It would be easier for me to Pm you.

Index 

Prologue... Page 1

Chapter 1 ... Page 3


Edited by PriyaK. - 22 May 2011 at 6:35pm

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  Enjoy =)



Edited by PriyaK. - 21 May 2011 at 7:54pm
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
OMG! I luv your prologue its interesting and very sad.
Please update soon as possible
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
wow..amazinf concepts.
love it.
do continue plz.
thx
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Posted: 21 May 2011 at 8:12pm | IP Logged
@ddkaur: Thank you for liking my FF.
@shah: thank you! I will continue

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