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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 14)

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 12:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by euphoric

Originally posted by 20tullip2000

bapu ko kaise samjhaun
he wanted more
yaar wat do i do?????????????????
don't worry... he'll come around... their concerns comes out of the competition around naSmile

par mere peeche kyon pade hai yaar??????????????????

i toh cannot celebrate...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 1:41am | IP Logged
bye dear


thanks for your suggestion

Edited by 20tullip2000 - 23 May 2011 at 4:10am

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 4:08am | IP Logged
Dear sonia

really really sorry for commenting late


on that day i slept while reading the part i reserved the post i thot i will comment in the morning but then i got busy and huh now i m commenting     


   this part was fantabulous dhamakedar amazing fabulous fantastic flawless   


thank god u knocked some sense into maan ab ayega line per Ab apna dimag to use karegaplz plz ab jaldi se unhe milado   


aur plz kick this arjun out the picture . . ...


Will be desperately waiting for nxt part

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 7:01am | IP Logged

Hey Sonia!!

First of all, sorry for being gumshuda from this thread, I mean thread 4 since quite sometime...
My exams are on and i am Dead
so, excuse my absence!
The updates ahev been great, finally Maan has been made to see some sense by the gREAT VICKY SINGH KHURANA!!
I like him...he is great, but Anu's ArjunAngry, he seems to be hell bent to spoil the funOuch
Hope Maan mahaaan finds out the truth soon and Geet is relieved of her pain!
Continue soon...
I will be back in full swing after the *8th* of june!
till then,
take care...
love
Swati

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Congrats for the new thread Soni.

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Lovely update. Now that Maan has seen the chain in her neck, usko lag raha he k kuch to gadbad he. Loved how Anu has planned to have her engagement in Mumbai so that she can meet her best friend and share her pains. But phir, Arjun bhi to waha hoga. Waise nothing to worry, as Maan is also there.

Waiting for the next update to know what Maan will ask Vicky and what is Vicky going to tell him.

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Crap!!! I am on page 15...Disapprove 
 
Sonu...Congratulations for the fifth thread... *thu thu...* nazar utaar rahi hoon yaar...LOL
 
Will read n comment... baaki ke bhi posts unreserve karne hai...Embarrassed late hoon...
 
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I knew I had reserved but had to go through all the last 10 pages...I thought it was page 5..Silly
Chalo chaddo... haan update ki baat karte hain... drum roll... good...LOL
The start was so fab...Embarrassed the whole Geet getting hurt unintentinally and Maan to the rescue... amazing... haaye he found out she was wearing his chain... ooohhh ..i loved how he wanted to calm her but usko dekhi bhi nahi...haan Maan babu aisa bhi ek time tha jab Geet sirf aapko hi dekhti thi...
 
I loved the flashback... a breath of fresh air...Embarrassed i say the same line to my hubyy when he is engrossed in his office work on lappi and that scene brought a smile on my face...Big smile Mujhse achi kismat toh is laptop ki hai...  aaah... her parting dialogue brought out the fireceness and the fear in Maan... even though she was just kidding...he didnt take it lightly...Embarrassed loved the kiss...Day Dreaming it was sensual, sizzling and HOT lips na sahi uske haath to neck se neeche gaye...LOL.. ooohhh... goosebumps...Blushing 
 
SO Maan finally finds that Adi is her brother... dheere dheere jhatke de rahi hai bechaare ko...LOL but moi loving this slow pace...i loved it even more when i read the 5 updates in one go...Cool LOL now he is burning in the fire...uski fikar hai but trying to put up a hard front... i feel bad for him ...sachchi... jaldi jaldi in dono ko milwa de...Cry
 
Anu ne sab ko mana hi liya to have her engagement in Mumbai...Embarrassed ismart kudi... vahi hoga is kahani ka penultimate climax...LOL Arjun ki baje ki band...aur hum sab honge baaraati...Big smile
 
Loved adi-pinky scene...these two r adorable... serial mei to Adi ko bharamchaari bana diyaAngry...chalo yahi pure kar lete hain sapne...Tongue
 
Awesome part kudiye... Muaaah...Heart
 


Edited by -jia- - 15 June 2011 at 7:55pm

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Posted: 23 May 2011 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 20tullip2000

helooo
sonia , esha , jia , aash
 
mera result aa gaya

 i got 77%


i m happy (cud have done better)
but never the less i m happy

 
 
Awesome job Kanika... ClapClapClap I agree with you...u could have done better...LOL 
Congratulations Hun...Hug

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