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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 132)

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 12:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by heermeher

Hi Sonia,

Morning when i woke up at 5 for my yoga just thought of checking if you updated but i got a pleasant surprise of  2 updates that was a sheer treat to read:

1)  I m seriously started feeling pity for maan his longing for her and viceversa.  But yet i dont want her to forgive maan easily
2)  the way whole scenario you created was awesome Clap any words/comment will be too small
3) Pinky being possesive and finally telling geet is not married was awesome
4) Luv the way Anu informed dadi about everything.
5) Even now i feel geet will yet try to run away from maan thinking he is engage to sameera (nahi tho ye ekta mata ki chaeli story agae kaise badayegi)
6) vicky and sasha are always awesome
7) Gurvider and Teji like them for standing for truth

Overall its like pizza want more but please do keep give this kind of surprises
 
thanks a bunch RakhiBig smile
 
he he... i knw knowin my reputation of hardly being able to put more than 1 update per week... this was kind of a shockerLOL
 
Maan will have to do a little more mehnat on tht... coz she's going to give him a tough timeWinkEmbarrassed... glad u enjoyed the whole relevation bitBig smile... this was one of the crucial updates by farSmile 
 
haila main strawberry se ekta mayiConfused no no i m not liking itCryCry main strawberry, NQ and CQ hi theek hoonTongue
 
hmm i like pizza too... with loads of cheese (my guilty pleasure)EmbarrassedLOL

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by esha143

ROFL...haayee running around trees...n we running in rain using chathaasROFL...kya nazaara hai sach mein...happily ever afterROFLROFLROFL...ufff...

haan haan aayegaa...aayegaaa...aayegaa...humaara bhi waqt aayegaaROFL...tab we'll use teh gyaan n shiksha that we have praapted from our Jiu guru maiyya on herROFLROFLROFL...Loose controlll...kaminis ki paatshalaaa...ROFLROFLROFL
 
OMG... loose controlROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL
babu yahan toh control hi nahi hai... brain ka har screw loose ho gaya haiROFLROFLROFL... oh i can't wait for the other two kaminis to read this! ROFLROFL
 
ha ha if we wud be singing pyar hua toh wht wud jijz be singing... chal chale apne gharROFLROFLROFL

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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -afsha-

Thanx for double update
Brij is an ewww
I wish when Maan cums to knw the truth he punches him n Arjun lik hell
Why is Anu talking abt Geet so much at home
Now evn NT knw it
I so hate them all
Gurvinder was helpful
I wish Teji dosent back out at last moment
Maan got to knw thgs fab
I jus hop Geet tells him whole truth now
 
Thanks Afsha
 
don't worry Maan will do the requisite when he finds the truthApprove
 
Anu has alwasy been talkin abt Geet na... and here toh Arjun stumbled upon and NT eavesdropped... he's gonna be busted anyways na... don;t worry he won't be able to harm Geet in anyways now
 
Teji and Gurvinder won't back out... they r going to help them and Maan will eventually find the truthEmbarrassed

Originally posted by cyum321

finallyyy


awesome parts...Cry

 
 
awwHug thanks dearSmile
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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shalve

awesome... superb updates... loved it...
 
thanks dear
glad u enjoyedBig smile
 
Originally posted by nahtani88

both the parts were mind blowing
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
 
thanks dear
glad u liked the updatesEmbarrassed
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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ROMANAGURU

nice story love this
 
Thanks DearSmile
 
Originally posted by sana.saba7

very  nice  update...
 
Thanks SanaEmbarrassed
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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by simi91

wow maaneet getting restless
but in different reason
mission to find the truth
finally geet crying in maan arms
was satisfying they really got hurt
so sonia a we going to get the
kiss next update sweety
it better be passionate kiss
thanks for double treat was
so delight when got in my pm
excellent both part
love it core enjoy read it
waiting waiting to read next part
thanks 4 pm
muah
bless yu
 
Thanks a bunch SimiBig smile
 
both had been in their quest of truth... each ablivious of the other! yet completely attunedEmbarrassed
 
ha ha ha... u may expect a kiss in the coming update... the hurt is evident both r in pain and adamant in their own ways... glad u enjoyedSmile
 
Originally posted by amzu32

Omg! Double updateShockedBig smile

I am glad finally Mann came to know his geet is not married Smile

maan comforting geet..

thank you so much for wonderful update!HugHugHug

Thanks a bunch AmzuHugHug
 
glad u enjoyed... i said the revelations were on the wayEmbarrassed
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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kyphfanz

i hve no idea how i missed this FF !! i read it from start in less thn 24 hours!!! my eyes hurt...its realllyy nice..loving it!!

 
Thanks a bunch dear
glad u liked the ff... and i hope u keep enjoying the same
would love to hear more from uBig smile
 
Originally posted by puth

thanks for the double updates sonia...
maan comes to know the truth only bit by bit each time...except geet no one knows the entire thing conspired...hopefully i want geet to tell everything to maan but i don't that comingCryCry
 
Thanks a bunch dearBig smile
 
Well Pinky knows the whole thing na... and Maan is in for a roller coaster... getting jolts in installmentsWink... don't worry dear.. they'll be togetherEmbarrassed
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Posted: 16 June 2011 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mandymore

Wow,both parts r superb,mahiive song is so apt 4 dem n it match accurately wid their situation.thnk god nw maan knw she's nt married.brij is so so cruel.grt prts,luvd dem. Clap
 
Thanks a bunch dear
glad u liked the update... mahi ve is one of my fav numberTongue
brij and arjun will get their dues for their cruelty
 
Originally posted by zilya

thanks for the double update. please update soon.
 
Thanks Zilya
glad u enjoyedBig smile

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