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Ripped Apart ~5~ (Maaneet) teaser ;) pg 130 (Page 129)

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by euphoric

Originally posted by esha143

abe kamini...aise khullam-khulla pyaar hua iqraar hua karegi tum dono toh baad mein drivers dhoondne mein problem ho jaayegi be...ROFL...kuch toh raaz rakha karoROFLROFLROFL...Angrezan ko filhaal shaamil nahi kar sakthe...she is out-of-bounds...by all means...u knowROFLROFLROFL...so she'll referee our marathon race...so kab shuru karein... Aathi kya Race lagane..??ROFL
 
abe drivers toh raste main bhi hunt kar sakte hain naWinkROFLROFL... i knw angrezan is out of bounds... usko toh saat samundar swin kar ke aana padegaROFLROFL hum kahan beaches pe usko dhundte phirengeConfusedROFLROFL
 
Race... chal chal moi ready... chalo race lagaye, chalo race lagaye, chalo race lagaye sanamROFL 

Kaha lagaaye be...???Kisike thread pe jaaye...kisko paagal hum banaye...koi dhakke na maare yaha...chlao race lagaaye hum...ROFLROFLROFLROFLSilly

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Shika--

First of all i thank you with all my heart for two updates!!
The first part was really heart wrenching!
his pain, her persistence, his jealousy, her not opening up, his misconceptions and her declarations wow! in short it was painful! Visha are really cute. The part where she catches Vicky's hand, showing her insecurities, can anything be much real?
And then Maan getting drunk, or manhandling Gurvinder or anything everything was next to perfect!Embarrassed
Not to forget Anu-Arjun-Dadi conversation. I can see truths slowly revealing or setting the stage. Every little scene including Arjun is my favorite now-a-days as it is setting up his destruction!
And then comes the part where Pinky told Maan about Geet's marital status.
I really wonder how you use each and every character of yours!
Even though we know that Geet's parents passed away in an accident which is truly a murder, i didn't expect brij to stoop so low! that was pathetic!
But still i hate Arjun more... no Brij.. actually both! those two are two disgusting people! ughAngry
the last part !! wah!!
i prefer a hug more than a kiss as a hug always comforts you.. and it did! am really glad she hugged him.. hope she opens up and gives him a little hint..and even if it doesn't happen, let them be there together for a while..
those were simply mindblowing updates! please please continue soon!!
 
Hey ShikaBig smile
 
the pain and insecrities manifest themselves in the most unexpected surroundings but seeing the agony of two lovers one can't help but think and shudder even with the thought of what if! its scary!!!
 
they were both after their truths where he was behind her... her mind was elsewhere... she seeked the demons out of the bag... while he wanted to know about her inner fears...
 
as much as Arjun thinks he's smart he can't put behind him his doings... they catch up with him sooner or later... and so he's bound to fall into the darkness he had spread around him. ha ha ha... i know its like the last days of the monsterLOL
 
glad u like the coming of the truth... a hug is comforting while a kiss is an expression... and here she needed comfortSmile and who else than him to provide her tht
 
thanks a bunch dearEmbarrassed
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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by esha143

Kaha lagaaye be...???Kisike thread pe jaaye...kisko paagal hum banaye...koi dhakke na maare yaha...chlao race lagaaye hum...ROFLROFLROFLROFLSilly
 
 
ROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFLROFL humari harkatein dekh ke bharosa nahi kaun kya karegaROFLROFL... haye rabba... maine subah subah pee rakhi hai aise lag raha haiConfusedROFLROFL
 
can't we have a race dhagaWinkROFLROFL

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:43pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by euphoric

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Kaha lagaaye be...???Kisike thread pe jaaye...kisko paagal hum banaye...koi dhakke na maare yaha...chlao race lagaaye hum...Silly
 
 
ROFL humari harkatein dekh ke bharosa nahi kaun kya karegaROFLROFL... haye rabba... maine subah subah pee rakhi hai aise lag raha haiConfusedROFLROFL
 
can't we have a race dhagaWinkROFLROFL

Hmmm...tu pee ya na pee...talli toh humesha hothi hai...toh ki faraq painda haiROFLROFLROFLROFL...Race Dhaga...hmmm...novel idea...hum hi shuruwaat kardethe hai na...kya bolthi hai...??ROFLROFLROFLROFL

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by seema_sg24

Superb part, thanx 4 update
 
Thanks SeemaBig smile
 
Originally posted by neethuchandran

awesome updates.
 
Thanks NeethuEmbarrassed
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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by esha143

Originally posted by euphoric

Originally posted by esha143

Kaha lagaaye be...???Kisike thread pe jaaye...kisko paagal hum banaye...koi dhakke na maare yaha...chlao race lagaaye hum...Silly
 
 
ROFL humari harkatein dekh ke bharosa nahi kaun kya karegaROFLROFL... haye rabba... maine subah subah pee rakhi hai aise lag raha haiConfusedROFLROFL
 
can't we have a race dhagaWinkROFLROFL

Hmmm...tu pee ya na pee...talli toh humesha hothi hai...toh ki faraq painda haiROFLROFLROFLROFL...Race Dhaga...hmmm...novel idea...hum hi shuruwaat kardethe hai na...kya bolthi hai...??ROFLROFLROFLROFL
 
haan... neki aur pooch poochWinkROFLROFLROFL... kamini race saason ki dhagaROFLROFL jiu sirf like karegiROFLROFL
 
haan re... abhi toh bina piye talli rehti toh yeh haai hai... pee ke talli houngi toh pata nahi kahn kahan girti padti rahungiROFLROFLROFL kaminis u wud need to be on guardROFLROFL

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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by myedward12

wonderful update, wow finally maan knows that she is not married!

hope that now she will tell everything to him...

 
Not that easy dearWinkLOL
glad you enjoyed
thanksEmbarrassed
 
Originally posted by seemamary

Loved it, yaar Amazing update and thanx for 2 updates back to back and happy to see man knowing at last that geet is not married. plsss update soon dear.
 
Thanks Seema
glad u enjoyed the double updateBig smile
 
yes he finally knowsEmbarrassed
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Posted: 15 June 2011 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nostalgic_soul

Wow!!!absolutely astounding update!i can't believe u posted 2 parts!it was so nice of u!the updates were soo much gripping to say the least!atlast maan came to know that she is not married and pirtially realized his mistake,it was soo much relieving.now that arjun needs to be exposed,that bas***d needs to get his full due.thanks again for making ths a pleasure read and thnks sooo much for the pm,u're definitely a star!
 
Thanks a bunch dearBig smile
 
even i couldn't believe that part that i posted 2 updates... didn't get a hook when i was putting it downLOL
 
Arjun's truth would soon be out... and would definitely receive what he deserves!
 
I m humbledEmbarrassed glad u had a fun readTongue
 
Originally posted by holyangel

lovely... Smile

be it single or double update, we can't get it enough... Wink
 
Thanks Angel... glad u enjoyedEmbarrassed
 
I get the cueWinkLOL

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