Originally posted by: --Shika--OMG! U plan to give me a heart attack by any chance? I read all the 3parts n when i was trying to comment on the last parts, BOOM! I forgot coz each and every part cleared my memory, emptied my brain and all i could do is to think and think about the recent update! I loved da smallest things which u describe like geet hopping or maan leaning on da pillar..very simple yet very beautiful n abt the kiss girl everytime u describe, its so much fresh! So geet finally got an idea abt his feelings! Time for some ACTION. Lolz
loool geet is worried how maan will not be able to keep his hands off her. Aww this is their first date as a couple.
Aww he flew over delhi and showed geet the wonderful scenery. Loool geet stop tempting maan by gentle kisses as he will loose control soon.
Lovely update
Hi,
Im new to IF and i came across your ff...i loved it...
read all the parts in one go!!!!!
Anupama
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